C_R_E_A_M ~VS~ He-Man
 

Rules~

5 bars
i spit 1st
you spit within 30mins after me


goodluck

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check in!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! fuck it i'll go first sense u said i gotta spit 30 minutes after you and i might not be on when u get on so imma go first.

ay0

when i spit on da mic u should know i'll devour//
my lyrical skills is 100% real while yours barely holdin power//----1
u "sour" like "lemons" and "dry kool-aid"//
in this battle ur sure ta "Fail" like "pop quiz" on school-days//---2
and dont talk about guns when i know u dont clap-the-heataz//
i'll put convicts on ya ass dat'll blast and bust u like speakers//----3
all my rhymes is "heavy" like a "500lb Woman"//
and ur the little man,who gets scared and start runnin//---4
but i aint even gotta spit foreal,its nuffin son..FUCK YOU!//
cuz if u was an "emcee spirit" that'll be the only way i "cant touch you"//---5

raps are vacant, wana talk? ur avy look like mass-debation.....
hold ya tone/
monotic fondlement will get ya bundle bent, & like his sig's sayin....
he "hold's his own"/

rappers-delight??, maybe if this pupil" wasn't so bad-for-the-sight/
u at-it-all-night, ....but cant go backwards faster than travelling-light/ (bak in time)
pro's keep cool w/no-editing; like faggit glasses, u homo-speci-men/
texts-have-been in the bag, ur duller then grandma with no-medicine/
so pathetic-in-verse, reason y ur green's fake like astro tennising-turf/
ur poor! & settin-it-worse, even God wants you dead

"-meek shall inherit-the-earth"/

i take sips-of-the-ocean, flow with a-salt, (assault).....the distance-is-closing/
spits-of-mitosis, leave CREAM sea-split like im set on missions-by-Moses/

VotEs

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Uppin
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come on

hey, I will hit this battle up if you hit up my battle first, I would do it first but no one ever returns the fav, so hit my battle up wit AKA and I will hit this up.. thx

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118510

upin

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upin diz muhfucka!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hench gets this for made creative rhymes and punches, even though the structure could use a bit of work. My fav bar was:

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so pathetic-in-verse, reason y ur green's fake like astro tennising-turf/
ur poor! & settin-it-worse, even God wants you dead

"-meek shall inherit-the-earth"/"

nice, very nice. The close was almost as nice too... very creative, original and still hard hitting. CREAM, your verse wasn't bad, just not as creative with the punches, and some punches kinda missed: "all my rhymes is "heavy" like a "500lb Woman"//"... that's a really bad meta. Gotta elevate a bit there I think...

Honest votes on my battles v ecko.. just one more vote needed.

upin

Alright this was a pretty good battle.........

Cream came ok just wasn't as hard as I was expectin......... He had some ok punches but he seemed to be patting himself on the back more than rippin his opponent. He~MAN came pretty fuckin hard. He had some pretty deep shit wit his punches and that's why they stuck. Some might not have understood them but they were HOT!!!!!!! That's why I gotta give this one to him.

Vote - Henchman

Please return the favor wit honest votes on one of the battles in my sig..........

upin

aight cream had hard punches and a sick flow... hench u had not to many punches and an aight flow...close battle ..nice battle too..but cream came on top of it..

ma vote cream..

upin

upin f0r sum fuckin votes...i need this to be closed

CREAM DO ME A FVOR STOP RAPPIN. THAT VERSE WAS TERRIBLE. HENCH YO TORE HIS ASS TO STREDS. NICE VERSE KID. NICE PUNCHES AND MULTI'S. RETURN THE FAVOR:http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123395

VOTE=HENCHMAN

all my rhymes is "heavy" like a "500lb Woman"//
and ur the little man,who gets scared and start runnin

no thats lyrics keep up the good work

c r e a m ma nigga

cash rules everywhere around me

well when this battle gets closed....why d0nt u battle me kiddo...if u win i'll leave da site lolol

This was a nice battle... You both had a good use of metas and punches- I must say I thought Cream had a better flow and his punches hit harder even though I think Henchmen might have put more thought into his rhyme his punches didn't hit as hard to me. I think you are both nasty and show crazy potential to damage emcees but in this battle Cream just had the punch workin for him.

I give Cream a 7 out of 10 while I give Henchmen a solid 6.75---- Battle- Cream.
please return the favor http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124310

upin f0r v0tes

upin s0 dis kan get kl0sed

Damn yall i'll return da damn favors

Henchman = 31/40
Flow 7/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 5/10
Punches 7/10
Humor 5/10

C_R_E_A_M = 30/40
Flow 7/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 6/10
Humor 5/10

Henchman got this one...close battle though..nice punches & rhymes from both Emcee's....

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

okay this was close

structure:cream
wordplay:cream
punches:hench
personals:cream
vote cream

can you guys return the fava and vote on my battles on my sig all three plz and i'll return the fava

im feelin my man cream on this battle is structure was a hell of a lot easier to read, and hman did bring it ill admit his punchlines were there but make it so i can understand easier so ima give this one to cream


v=cream