adebisi vs. kingz
 

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no crew votes
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no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
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You cant win

Yep

8 lines

Match it...

Kingz is wack as fuck... I mean more so than most kids
Thought he was over the hump, til daignosed with scoliosis
A whore bitch. cant win, I'm being serious dude
You're not just fucking wack... you give it oral too
Left run through.... I mean shit ya out of luck
Thug carrying pumps? maybe with ya makeup
Ya stuck... and when ya lose, kid dont fuss
Cause ya hairlines getting jealous...
...of ya skill level receding so much

^^^ You might just get your first win on relaunched......why the hell are you 0-5? You must not have many DRs on this site........lol

^^^

People dont like me "not" TYPING like "this"

And using senseless multis everywhere

Watch... they'll bitch about my flow...
Even though I could drop this as an audio

u used to b so much better than that what happened?

^^

Are you on crack?

dog you finally got a win...you must be overjoyed
your about to be lyrically destroyed...leaving you unemployed

if i was you...i wudnt rely on ya lyrics to put food on ya table
give up the rap game now...is the moral of this fable

your like a 'OAP'...ya rhymes are 'old' and punches are 'weak'
its my turn now...my 'Coming Of Age'...jus like memphis bleek

like 'Adam Sandler' i need 'anger management'...im really 'mad-at-ya'
look this kid so dumb...he cudnt even set himself a avatar

5-1? let me be the 6th MC to announce ya lame
nobody will remember you...they cant even pronounce ya name

good battle...here's the break down....
adebisi
Kingz is wack as fuck... I mean more so than most kids
Thought he was over the hump, til daignosed with scoliosis
8 decent...good opener...
A whore bitch. cant win, I'm being serious dude
You're not just fucking wack... you give it oral too
7.5 good line...kinda weak decent punch
Left run through.... I mean shit ya out of luck
Thug carrying pumps? maybe with ya makeup
7.5 decent...pretty coo
Ya stuck... and when ya lose, kid dont fuss
Cause ya hairlines getting jealous...
what the fuck is this...wtf....6
...of ya skill level receding so much



Kingz
dog you finally got a win...you must be overjoyed
your about to be lyrically destroyed...leaving you unemployed
7 what his job is rappin...doesn' treally make sense...
if i was you...i wudnt rely on ya lyrics to put food on ya table
give up the rap game now...is the moral of this fable
9 haha....that's tight
your like a 'OAP'...ya rhymes are 'old' and punches are 'weak'
its my turn now...my 'Coming Of Age'...jus like memphis bleek
8 pretty good pretty good...weak punch but creative
like 'Adam Sandler' i need 'anger management'...im really 'mad-at-ya'
look this kid so dumb...he cudnt even set himself a avatar
8 haha...haha....funny...maybe cat doesn't want one...good liine
5-1? let me be the 6th MC to announce ya lame
nobody will remember you...they cant even pronounce ya name
9.5 tight finisher....haha


now for the tallies...
adebisi...8+7.5+7.5+6= 29/40

Kingz...7+9+8+8+9.5=41.5/50

higher percentage for kingz...

v-Kingz

Aight, check it. Kingz, you had two whack punches, the 3rd and 4th. You're really mad at him? Wow, who cares? It would have been ok if you used that as a setup line, but then you used that weak avatar punch. No good. the third bar was ok... but no real punch.. and that coming of age album is 5 years old, and probably sucks balls.

Adebisi just came more cosistently.. not as much wordplay, and the lines were a bit short but the flow was still ok... I dig the wordplay on "fucking whack".. overall a slightly better verse. Lack of personals was not so great, but made up for by that sweet close.

Tight battle, but v/ adebisi..

1-1??

The fuck

And nice job at not even understanding my last couplet there jpoll

it was stupid...you're an idiot...haha nice record there buddy......good stuff....he owned you

^^^

And you are a moron

If this were posted on a site with talent you'd see why

rubbish battle. neither mc came hard at all
i didnt enjoy reading this one

hardly any multis and all punches were weak
you both need to step it up

there was only one decent line in this whole battle

5-1? let me be the 6th MC to announce ya lame
nobody will remember you...they cant even pronounce ya name

ok line decent personal and finshed
so i got to giv this to kingz

you both need to work on vocab and creativuty

v/ kingz

breakdown for adebisi:

flow:straight forward no off points 7/10

volcab:good use but still kinda average 6/10

punches:you didn't try and make people laugh in a fun way you wanted to make kingz cry it seemed this was harsh my fav line,"You're not just fucking wack... you give it oral too" so mean 7/10

overall:20/30

breakdown for kingz:

flow:good job better then adebisi 8/10

volcab:basic here try harder 5/10

punches:nothing really don't know where people are voting for you cause this seemed more like a verse bout yourself then making fun of him you wasted 5 lines on yourself and when there's only eight to begin with that's not good 5/10

overall:18/30 lacked anything that really hurt adebisi

vote--adebisi gets my vote

Alright, Here's where I stand.........

This is a battle, so punches should be what people are voting on. Adebisi came with the best punches in my opinion, but Kingz did have a few good ones like the pronounce his name line. Adebisi's verse was straight to the point with punches intended to ridicule his opponent.........

Vote - Adebisi

Yea after I read Adebisi battle I knew he'd be in for it. I've seen King come way harder, but still there were enought punches and flow to surpass. Adebisi, ya just need to elivate, people are talk'n like you had this old style, I'd get back to that if it got ya 5 win's fuck what the critics say it can't be that bad.


http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120460

kingz gets my vote.better style and all that shit good ending and opening lines.thas all i gotta say

this was an aiight battle adebisi had 1 or 2 hard punches i was feelin i thnk this battle would have been better if it was longer....adebisi had some good wordplay and flow couple punches nothing really interesting.....kingz also had a nice verse a couple better punches than adebisi feelin his verse and the opener and closer were pretty ill nice structure and flow good punches/personals good multies....overall good battle

my vote: kingz

King won
Explain- better, harder punches.
Man I aint even gotta say nothing really because Jpoll hit it all for me also, I agree with him.

Wow... you all are complete morons

Kingz placed all his shit in da write place nice barz overall almost a big victory
But adebisi would have won it if he put a lil more thought into it. this is the type of battle that you have to read two or three timez. man this wuz closer than i though after the first time i read it.
yall should battle soon

Vote kingz

Kings Won
Bisi Had One Line I Liked, That Oral Shit
Kingz Came Wit Better Punches
And The Last One Was True
Ur Name Is Hard To Pronounce

Vote - Kingz

DUDE IS NICE OMG YO HE WAS LYRICALLY MURDERIN U YO DONT HATE DAT NIGGA IS SIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIICK HE WAS KILLIN IT WIT DAT WORDPLAY N MULTIS YO NO HATE BUT ADEBSI IS GETTIN DRS RIGHT NOW AND OMG KINGZ TRY OUT FOR MY CREW WE GON COMMIT LYRICAL RAPE ON DESE NIGGAZ! :shoot::shoot::shoot:

rofl :laugh:

9-3 kingz wins this