Da Grim Reaper vs Black Thief
 

G Deuce aka Da Grim Reaper vs Black Thief

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10-15 lines
no d/r or hating votes
no feeding
no biting
just original shit

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checking in my nigga, good luck....................

aiight off top I got them bars that make ya back down
I "sleep" on weak niggas like u...keep on reppin "Naptown"
thinkin u got shit on me?Son u must have lost ya self
If I was in ya shoes I'd probably "off" myself
Even ya sig is whack...I give it a C-plus
u wanna be larger than life...I can send u to see Jesus
I gotta admit....this nigga softer than a marshmallow
Nigga couldnt throw punches even if he boxed his own shallow
Im deep and you shallow....I know its hard to follow
so I'm a spit it through my dick cause I know its easier for u to swallow

it should be "boxed his own shadow" on line 8

This one line I spit could destroy your whole rep online
I'll rebuke your tongue for even trying to steal my rhymes
You must not have seen the record, cause I reck heveck
My 6 wins in a row is "longer" than the Black's "package"
Blaze boys cause I have nothing but time on my hands
My lyrical state, will rape you and leave not even half A man
Speaking of plans, you just got denied of your pen and mic
I mesmerize your mind and leave you nothing but a question mark to write.
Seeing the light, your end is just at the end of the road
You would need a wonder of the world to even nic my flow.



Just some easy shit while I'm grubbing on some Bar-B-Que, Grandma's style

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so I'm a spit it through my dick cause I know its easier for u to swallow
^^^That wuz the best line in ya verse

G's whole verse wuz better.

vote G duece

aiight....can I have a real vote?explanation or somethin?dont post if u aint got enough points to vote...aiight?

your verse wont betta dont take points to notice that. SerIoUslY

ok quit freepostin in my thread...til u actually get a win or loss....be easy son...we tryin to get votes....can u vote?Aiight then....dont start somethin....

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aiight off top I got them bars that make ya back down
I "sleep" on weak niggas like u...keep on reppin "Naptown"

^Weak Opener Could Have Improved It A Bit!' ... 3/10

Im deep and you shallow....I know its hard to follow
so I'm a spit it through my dick cause I know its easier for u to swallow

^Nice Closer Also Very Nice Punch Best Line No Doubt 10/10

This one line I spit could destroy your whole rep online
I'll rebuke your tongue for even trying to steal my rhymes

^Nice Opener' ...!!! 9/10 And An Alright Multie' That I Seen!!

Seeing the light, your end is just at the end of the road
You would need a wonder of the world to even nic my flow.

^Alright Closer! Could Have Been Better 8/10

Speaking of plans, you just got denied of your pen and mic
I mesmerize your mind and leave you nothing but a question mark to write.


^Best Line In Your Verse 10/10 ...


Vote: G~Deuce

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-----BLACK THEIF-----
-nice drop you had two killer punches

"u wanna be larger than life...I can send u to see Jesus"

"so I'm a spit it through my dick cause I know its easier for u to swallow"

-the opener was a bit weak, but it was just an opener no biggie
-defintly take the close, with the swallow line.
-nice flow throughout overall I give you a 7/10

-----G--------
"This one line I spit could destroy your whole rep online"

- good opener
-overal you had good flow, you could have used a few more punches,
-punches you had hit hard but I dont' think there were enought of them
-good flow
-overall I give you a 6/10

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dis was a alright battle

black was ite he couldve dun better than wat he did he had some ok punches agood structure and ite vocab...

punches-g-duece
strucuture-both
vocab-both
flow-g
open-g
close-g
personals-g
winner-g

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*cough*hmmmmm............ can we get some more votes in here..............

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Ok, this was straight up one of the tightest battles I've seen here.. no fucking around with useless multis or bs like that, both just straight up brought punches. black thief, i like the way you opened and closed with your best punches, the personal wordplay on "naptown" in your opener was sick.. and that closer was the best punch of the battle i think.

g duece, hot verse as well.

"
This one line I spit could destroy your whole rep online
I'll rebuke your tongue for even trying to steal my rhymes
You must not have seen the record, cause I reck heveck
My 6 wins in a row is "longer" than the Black's "package""

^ that's pretty hot, but you started to fall off towards the end

basically, vote to black thief, but really tight battle. keep on elevating peeps.

return the favor, shadow v killah bwoy.

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BLACK..

I "sleep" on weak niggas like u...keep on reppin "Naptown"
this was an OK personal i guess

u wanna be larger than life...I can send u to see Jesus
this was ok

Nigga couldnt throw punches even if he boxed his own shallow

nah,u didnt word this properly..if u had said..nigga's punches aint hittin,like boxing ur own shadow..it would've been a much better punch

o I'm a spit it through my dick cause I know its easier for u to swallow

sorry dude,but that content is PLAYED as fuck

douce

My 6 wins in a row is "longer" than the Black's "package"
this could've been ok,but it wasnt worded properly...

I mesmerize your mind and leave you nothing but a question mark to write.

this was ok,but it sounds a little too poetic for a battle


i have to give this to black...he had better flow n punches..

Duece had that battle definitly. All around better flow, better opener and better cracks at Black Quief, i mean Thief.

g won perfectly with his shit it was off da hook
man
with yo line that said
i mesmerise yo mind and leave yo nothing but a question mark to write

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Ok,

Black Thief And G: Deuce both did they thang. This shit was almost too close to call.

Basically even in flow, creativity, personals.

I think the punches from Deuce hit a lil' betta. Loved this line right here(same shit as everyone else)

Speaking of plans, you just got denied of your pen and mic
I mesmerize your mind and leave you nothing but a question mark to write.

But Gotta give the close shit to Deuce, because Ima just go wit the line that made me say "OH FUCK"! in a tight battle like this. But Thief, you definately held yo shit down my nigga. Both of y'all stay on yo grind.

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Nigga couldnt throw punches even if he boxed his own shallow
Im deep and you shallow....I know its hard to follow
so I'm a spit it through my dick cause I know its easier for u to swallow
HAHAHA I LOVE THAT...THATS THE WAY TO END A BATTLE...ight...theif...ur punches was hard and very personal..flow and structure was ight...no multies really..ur vacab u can use some work...

G-Duece-wasnt really feeling it..i know u can bring it harder than that...ur punches and vocab was ok..but thief won cause his ending was just sick...thats the way u need to end ur battles...ur flow was good tho...keep elevating

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