SFire vs GKillaz05
 

itte
no d/r vote
no crew hate votes
7-9 lines max
an no bs :banghead: :headbang:

itte an u spit 1xt

iight then... checkin in... will drop a spit soon...

spit due in 24 minnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

I was lookin for some easy wins or maybe to end someones career...
Was searching bitch slapped and looky here spitfire just volunteered...
Your on one of the whackest crews called the NetWorkEmcees Crew...
You put the microphone threw so much torture it even punches you...
Im sittin here waitin for you to spit fire or even throw a decent punch...
My rymes crunch spitfires, his are about as corny as the Bradi Bunch...
You made this a short pointless battle so I am gun end it right now...
This kat crys to bark like a dawg but when he spits all I can here is MEOW...


theres 8 lines holla back

last line I wanted trys not crys ... lets see what you got spit

yo Gkillazz05 u a pumpkin waiting 4 me to carve,I cut cha into billions of slices u would be in more parts than wanda at large\\
itte u tired of being a killa so do watcha kno best male-sex\\
shyte u up 4 gay marrige more than rosey odonald devorceing her male x\\
u just like a bomb ready to go off any second 4rm now\\
that shyte fits yah personality worser than u chook men penis's down\\
yah need to retire this on ice\\
yo sell yah wak ass lyrics to tha devil at a discount price\\
shyte u confuse my conduct because u fuckin 4rm Canada\\
aahha u took so hard i just get up lay yah text to waste,then one-hand slam yah\\..

no hate thow just bus

itte uppppppppppppin dem vote please a good battle hurr

UPPPIN for votes hit this up peeps and I will return the fav

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iight, lets get this battle goin... votes need.. will return the fav

upppppppppppin 4 dem votes ill return favors

I think they scared to vote or something.. lol, hmm.. come on peeps

UPPIN, Ive been hittin up so many battles and no bodys returnin the fav

v/ Gkillaz.. he simply had everything, flow, punches, personals.. he ripped on the crew.. and I really like the "torture mic" punch. spit.. your lines are all uneven, gotta work on that, and work on upping your vocab so you get some more original punches in there..

My Vote
 

I was lookin for some easy wins or maybe to end someones career...
Was searching bitch slapped and looky here spitfire just volunteered...
Nice opener...good flow...funny punch....9/10
Your on one of the whackest crews called the NetWorkEmcees Crew...
You put the microphone threw so much torture it even punches you...
Funny lol....good personal...nice punch....8/10
Im sittin here waitin for you to spit fire or even throw a decent punch...
My rymes crunch spitfires, his are about as corny as the Bradi Bunch...
Ok punch...not as good as the others...6/10
You made this a short pointless battle so I am gun end it right now...
This kat crys to bark like a dawg but when he spits all I can here is MEOW...
Ok closer....not that great of a punch....5/10

Verse Score - 28/40

yo Gkillazz05 u a pumpkin waiting 4 me to carve,I cut cha into billions of slices u would be in more parts than wanda at large\\
umm yea pretty much....gay punch....4/10
itte u tired of being a killa so do watcha kno best male-sex\\
shyte u up 4 gay marrige more than rosey odonald devorceing her male x\\
hmm....yea....3/10
u just like a bomb ready to go off any second 4rm now\\
that shyte fits yah personality worser than u chook men penis's down\\
set up line doesnt werk with the punch....4/10
yah need to retire this on ice\\
yo sell yah wak ass lyrics to tha devil at a discount price\\
???...0/10
shyte u confuse my conduct because u fuckin 4rm Canada\\
aahha u took so hard i just get up lay yah text to waste,then one-hand slam yah\\..
ok...finally its over....3/10

Verse Score - 14/50

spitfire u need to elevate a lot....and battle people on ur level.....

vote - G.......

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119613

GKillaz.That rhyme was hot.SFire,your structure/flow was badly off man.Keep each line the same #of sllyables.You had some long and then some short.This caused the rap to sound messed up.Both of you had some really NICE punches.But the structure messed you up SFire.Keep working on it.

alright this is more like it, keep the votes coming peeps

demobx
 

I think you both can give it more heat. I was feelin gkillahs punchlines, spfire had alot of that gay shit both was aight, gkillah had more to say so my vote goes for him. ONE

one more vote needed, lets do this.. I will return the fav

one more vote needed peeps... lets get this finished

GKilla took this one easily............ He just came wit better flow and more harder hittin punches. Spit fire really didn't have any good punches cause most of them were really played out.......... Keep comin up wit some new shit and try to get a little personal wit your punches...........

Vote - GKilla

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