Def Star vs. Oc6 The Caustic
 

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Verses due whenever, just don't take too long
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Come on man you said a blind spit, I'm finsihed. Tell me how its going down.

What the hell you doin? Are you ready, I have been done for 15mins, put the dictionary down and post yours up.

I'ma newbie on this site but I got 5-0 battlers challengin' me
It must be my karma, but no worries, I'll merk this guy, see
This guy doesn't really understand the true essence of rappin'
Sorry dog, u have no future in rhymes, but u got talent in actin'
Cause you sign on to Rap Battles actin' like your ass is real hard
I'm a basketball man, not football, but even I can punt ur ass far
Normally, I would spare this wack shit the pain of badly losin'
But I'm in a bad mood, so I'll fuckin' merk those of my choosin'
Deep down he wants to shock the world, but all he can pick up is static
Right now I ain't even thinkin', merkin' this muthafucka is automatic
I can understand your reasoning by wantin' to battle every newbie
Cowardice, but battlin' me? You might as well scream "school me"
Been rappin' since you were ten? U'd think u woulda elevated, son
Maybe u'll be a rapper someday, though, ur already RB's Biggest Pun
Hell, that's the way the cookie crumbles, I'll just have to eliminate
I'm about to place a loss on ur record, but I hope that won't make ya hate
I have fighting talent, enough to do lyrical surgery on you, my brethren
Here comes Def Star, time to perplex ur mind, better go grab ur Excedrin.
Later

Damn, dawg, be patient. I had to go cook food for my family. Post ur verse.

Ok
 

This cat has me pissed, i'm in the midst to make sure Def Star don't exsist/
Rookies like you claim you shit belongs in the booth, you just another noob, on my hit list/
He was afriad, so he made me spit blind/
After this he is gonna be scared to click submit reply/
Settin' up a battle with me, your just askin to be human bait/
My rhymes hit you up so far it'll land you back to the NY State/
Better pay attention because my opponents call Me Federal/
New cats like you I lay out flat as if you were 2Demesional/
After your first loss you better take notes/
Because I can type letters blind-folded on cats like you and still get enough votes/
I'm makin an honest prediction, your just a noob for a first battle win addiction/
But there is just too many real facts to prove your style is fiction/
I'll put a frontline of lyrics through your chest while you still alive/
So big enough you can see the scenery by looking from both sides/
I don't sprint all out, I take my steady pace around the track/
You set up too many battles underneath your shoes while Oc6 has you lapped/
He put a blank spot on his sig for wins in Elevated Frontlines, like he'll get that far/
Maybe his prayers to get wins ain't hearing him, because he is wishin upon a Def. Star/

Aight here we go uppin for votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Can we get a vote on this please, holla^^^^^^^^^^^^

nice -- oc6 had that battle. nice wordplay and dope punches. defstar -- good flow, but it could have used more personals.

best lines:

He put a blank spot on his sig for wins in Elevated Frontlines, like he'll get that far/
Maybe his prayers to get wins ain't hearing him, because he is wishin upon a Def. Star/

I have fighting talent, enough to do lyrical surgery on you, my brethren
Here comes Def Star, time to perplex ur mind, better go grab ur Excedrin.

Thanks for the honest vote, don't forget the poll vote playa. Still uppin'^^^^^^^^^

1-0 Me, Can we get some votes on this ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

imma give dat to OC6 cause he had a betta flow...Props to def star doe


Vote:Oc6 The Caustic

YOO!!!!! i clicked da wrong THING!
are u aloud 2 delete dat shit? yo put anotha thread yo fa real..!

Vote:Oc6

for real star had a nice flow, but wit the fire Oc6 brought, he didn't have a chance, their was real fire in some of his line:

FAV: "He was afriad, so he made me spit blind/
After this he is gonna be scared to click submit reply/"

that was the 2nd bar and it won the battle right there!!

i think the battle should of been cut down, but either way OC6 took it!!

It's 2-0 me. Bojangler voted for me but didn't put it in the Poll Votes, Ghost MC voted for me, but voted Def. Star on the Poll Vote. This battle is all fucked up.

oc6 the caustic had SOme hott ass punches but The newbie did to but srry i gottta go wit Oc6 The Caustic cuz he sick


Oc6

Flow9/10
Rhyme 8/10
Structure 9/10
26/30

Newbie

Flow 9/10
Rhymes 8/10
Structure 5/10
22/30

I forgot to leave my link, http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118954
Hit a vote back!! pz1

Thanks for all votes people. Sharkk, make sure tp put the Poll Vote in.

Aight. It's 4-0 me (Bojangler, Ghost MC, Mixxed MC and Sharkk) But according to the Polls, it's 1-1. Two of my voters haven't voted on the Poll and Ghost MC voted for the wrong cat, this is weird. Anyways, Uppin on votes^^^^^^^^^^^^

c6

Flow9/10
Rhyme 9/10
Structure 9/10
27/30

Newbie

Flow 9/10
Rhymes 8/10
Structure 6/10
23/30
both could work on vocab a lilk

Upp in on dis^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

This should be a closed thread. I have 5 votes and he has none, but one of my votes didn't vote the poll vote and the other vote, voted for the wrong guy. Oh well, Uppin^

Yo oc6 you should drop a link in one of the "complaints" threads, get this battle closed. And yeah.. you merked him, just work on your structure though.

demobx
 

honestly i like them both its hard to choose but im going to have to go for Oc6 for more punch lines but i was feeling def star to ONE love

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

Uppin on this^^^^^^^^^^^^This close this shit out.

Deep down he wants to shock the world, but all he can pick up is static
Right now I ain't even thinkin', merkin' this muthafucka is automatic
~~~best punche by def, nice

Maybe his prayers to get wins ain't hearing him, because he is wishin upon a Def. Star
~~~nice punch by caustic

yo this was real close battle, caustic had more punches through out his battle, so i gotta give it to'em both of you need more in ya battles though. ya'll did good for how long your spits were though by gettin summ in there.

vote- caustic for more punches, nice closer/// close battle though

Aight, Drop a link, I'll defintley return the favor ^^^^^^^^^^^^

Easy Battle 2 Judge......
Def Star U Came Basic....... Elevate......

0c6-----u Were Good But Not Great..... I Expected Better....

Break Down...
Flow- 0c6
Vocab-0c6
Struture-neither
Personals......oc6

Well Explained Vote.......winner Thru My Eyes........ Oc6...
Good Luck 4 Both...