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Enygma~VS~MARVOLoUsJ1009
Here's the rules........
10-16 lines no crew, hate, dr votes blind spit drop as soon as you're ready......(1 hour from check in) |
jea...
me feather weight? nah i got bullets dat a levitate dis chump's spine // dogg u got 10 wins u still here y u dont spit in da elevated front lines?? // i guess cuzz ya spittin-is-wack,u betta off pitchin-a-pack,or liftin-a-gat // dogg u suck,"pullin ya girls weave" was closes u came da "rippin a track" // marjay im da sickest-infact...but give it up 4 real ya rappin stinks-u-done // i cant lose so u feel special i'll put ya "brain on da first" so u could "think u won" //[get it] they watchin-dis-vet,u been on here a while & still aint got proper-respect // nah u neva gon get signed dogg u only gota "shot" at da "net" // stop frontin like u tuff and really-a-spaz...when ya verse go up everybody really-should-laugh // look at dis clowns "location" u like "dutches" u make "philly" look badd // stop talkin u cant rap u aint even half or quite-nice-fool // and ya'll "cant even jump" so how da fukk can "...white guys rule..." // *last line...look unda his name...and remeber dat movie white men cant jump you'll get it* and yo dunn no feedin off my verse... |
Thanks for checkin in asshole.............lol
Let's get the Facts Clear, I'm straight spittin, he's kickin Raps Queer// Found out he is Da Sickest On Dis Site....... from the results of his Pap Smear// I'm Startin To Spray, killin this cat in a Harmonous Way// Even if I was drug free I'd still smoke this MarvolousJ// I'm Poundin This Soldier, he can't win, I'd even Clown Him In Poker// Showed up wit Queens? Check the sig, I'm Down Wit The Joker// All he see's is Black And White, racist bastard can't Back The Hype// I spit so sock that even Malcolm X would say "This Cracka's Tight"// He spits Fake Threats, I'm suffocatin this dickhead like Latex// I'll lyrically wet this cat bringin new meaning to the way I Spray Text//(Techs) He's Stutterin, you should know how to spit it out, your Mother Did// Check his sig, he is nice............. he just gave me Another Win// |
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I had my shit keyed up for about 5-10 mins now just waitin for you to check in and you think I'm gonna feed? I never feed! |
umm doggy whuts all da fukkin talkin 4 u spit i spit rite fukk dat check in shit i just click on reply and type my shit
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I just wanted you to check in so I knew you were gonna show...........If you don't check in and I drop my verse, you don't have to show and it would be a big waste of time for me.................. |
true well im not wun of dez lame dudes on dis site dunn..if i say post da shit up and i'll spit ima spit
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Why the fuck did you change your sig as soon as I dissed the shit out of it. His sig said somethin about "no one bein as nice as him" or some shit like that. What a fuckin bitch...............lol. Maybe I should change my name or the title under it so no one gets your punches either..........lol
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Alright.. alright.. quit the talking. Ok, real tight battle, but I was feeling enygma's verse more. Only thing that sucked about your verse was your closer:
"He's Stutterin, you should know how to spit it out, your Mother Did// Check his sig, he is nice............. he just gave me Another Win//" That flow is absolutely horrible, Did and Win don't rhyme, and there's barely a punch there. No set up line, the stutterin has nothing to do with what his mother did.. all around the worst closer I've seen from you. The rest you came pretty tight, the Malcom X line was kinda tight. Marv.. you had it going at the beggining but just lost it here: "dogg u got 10 wins u still here y u dont spit in da elevated front lines?? //" that's a great set up line, you should have used it to go into a punch about he only battle herbs or something.. but instead you just left it alone, and your verse went downhill from there. you also had problems with structure/flow, some of your lines were way too long. v/enygma. hit back my battles in my sig.. |
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The punch was in the first line. Stutterin, couldn't spit out words, his mother couldn't spit out my pimp juice........lol. Wasn't too hard to understand, maybe I worded it wrong........... uppin for more votes |
diz waz a g'hood battle nah mean. marv ya shit was nice dog,punches ta multis u was killen em...also u had good flow and structure...enygma ya shyt waz nice to...ya didnt have punches so that kinda made u fall off...ya multis was g'hood...flow was on point...and ya structure is nice....imma give this win ta marv kuz he had sum nice multis and punches up in derr...and battles ta my knowledge should always have punches..ya know shyt ta make ya say "Damn" even tho i didnt say "Damn" i feel marv still got it cuz he attempted to reach the "Damn" point....good shyt tho playaz..and drop by my battle link in my sig and give an honest vote. 1
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^^^goodlookin i'll return da favor.....upppin 4 ore votes.......and enygma suck a dick and get a glok fagget u played out da personals about and y u not in da elevated frontlines u got like 10 wins
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^^^ Elevated fronlines are inactive as fuck. Battles stay open for months in there....... and how the fuck can you say personals are played? If it ain't personal then it's just generic..........If you weren't worried about personals, you wouldn't have changed your sig.........
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cuzz u was like a fukkin 1381738917389174 nigga da say dat about me on dis site....and i had da let niggaz know dat dem shits is played da fukk out and ya shit was wack...and battles o dis shit stay open 4 month's 2 datz no excuse dunny...nahmean and i voted on wun of ya battles on u aint even return da favor datz a bitch move
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I actually haven't seen any of your battles so I don't think I could have voted on any of them. I know my opener was original cause I've never heard no shit like that before. And the poker metaphor could have only worked wit another card higher than yours like I had. I can't see how these are played when they've only been around for a day now...........
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whut da fukk is u talkin about....ya battle with juelz i voted in dat shit and drop 2 links....but dat sickest on da site everybody done said it so its played now dunny who da fukk was talkin about ya opener?.....but aneway can we get some votes ppl
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A'ight...this was a tite battle...
Marvelous...your beggining was weak...but shit got better as you went along. Your spit was sorta hard to read though...I suggest you work on structure and flow. Your punches were good from about halfway and down...pretty tite verse other than the structure... 6/10 Enygma...your punches was dope, dawg. Your structure was good, but lines could be more of the same size. That sorta threw the flow off in places...but damn, those personals...and the joker shit was ill...nice verse dawg. 8/10 Vote- Enygma No hate...plz hit this up wit an honest vote...thx... Crew Battle- Young Vs. Limited Edition |
Now I voted on both of your battles
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Yoooooooooooo Tight Ass Battle Fo Sho// Yo Marv U Had Donminate Flowz Homie// Liked Da Struture// And Da Punchlines U Hit Da Nigga Hard As A Rock//
Yo Enygma= Yo Rhymes Was Hot!// Da Punchlines U Hit Him With Its Like Volcano Lava Burned Him Baddddddddd! Yo Work On Yo Fuckin Struture Dog! Vote=eny |
dogg i respect ya vote but can u break it down my catagorie's pleez
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Can we please get some fukin votes on this so it can be closed?
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good battle
marv u had a tight flow to ure spit and ure structure was cool. u had some good vocabs and u used sum multis in there that were aight but cud have been better, no disrespect like. ure punches were good but u didn't have perfect connection with them and thats where i think enygma had u beat. his flow and structure were gud as always but his punches were just that little harder and they hit wit better connection. he didnt use multis gud like u but still he put together a slightly better spit Vote - enygma |
Alright............ uppin for more votes
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Uppin for more votes..............
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My Vote
me feather weight? nah i got bullets dat a levitate dis chump's spine //
dogg u got 10 wins u still here y u dont spit in da elevated front lines?? // nice punch....ok personal....a lil multi in the 1st line....good opener... i guess cuzz ya spittin-is-wack,u betta off pitchin-a-pack,or liftin-a-gat // dogg u suck,"pullin ya girls weave" was closes u came da "rippin a track" // lol nice punch.... marjay im da sickest-infact...but give it up 4 real ya rappin stinks-u-done // i cant lose so u feel special i'll put ya "brain on da first" so u could "think u won" //[get it] Decent... they watchin-dis-vet,u been on here a while & still aint got proper-respect // nah u neva gon get signed dogg u only gota "shot" at da "net" // not that great... stop frontin like u tuff and really-a-spaz...when ya verse go up everybody really-should-laugh // look at dis clowns "location" u like "dutches" u make "philly" look badd // going down hill....flow was off too... stop talkin u cant rap u aint even half or quite-nice-fool // and ya'll "cant even jump" so how da fukk can "...white guys rule..." // hahaha... Let's get the Facts Clear, I'm straight spittin, he's kickin Raps Queer// Found out he is Da Sickest On Dis Site....... from the results of his Pap Smear// ok opener... I'm Startin To Spray, killin this cat in a Harmonous Way// Even if I was drug free I'd still smoke this MarvolousJ// Nice punch and good multi... I'm Poundin This Soldier, he can't win, I'd even Clown Him In Poker// Showed up wit Queens? Check the sig, I'm Down Wit The Joker// Good personal... All he see's is Black And White, racist bastard can't Back The Hype// I spit so sock that even Malcolm X would say "This Cracka's Tight"// haha... He spits Fake Threats, I'm suffocatin this dickhead like Latex// I'll lyrically wet this cat bringin new meaning to the way I Spray Text//(Techs) nice punch.. He's Stutterin, you should know how to spit it out, your Mother Did// Check his sig, he is nice............. he just gave me Another Win// hahahaha now thats a hot closer!... Okay...this was a pretty even battle...but for marvolous he fell off toward the end...his sustainment fucked him up...thats why my vote goes to enygma....sustainment means alot in a heated battl and marvolous fell off last 2 bars...good battle tho....nice punches were thrown....good flow....but vote for enygma for keepin a hot verse goin.......keep droppin yall Vote - enygma |
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