THUGZY vs LilNae
 

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10-20lines
verse do in by 4:30

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ya chest exploded cos my mic was loaded wit murderous words/
You no i'm tha illest MC from across the world/
I aint even heard ya rhymes but i already no i hate em/
I dont even think biggie died u fat fuck, i think u ate him/
leavin ya bleedin, needin assistance/
I listen but keep my distance for instance/
Ur a fucking diseased rat, u got fucking herpes/
U spit ya shit but bitch ya cant hurt me/
listen to my flows, u think "it's sick this"/
dont mess with or diss, i'm the human version of cyphilis/
u dont even no the words u listen to/
ya fat fuck too dumb to realise i'm dissin you/
wud ya mother b missin u wen she realises i got the skills/
I'ma go back in time and feed that bitch birth control pills/
i gave u a sample of how i be doin it/
now this bitch wil try to copy my style, but he'll just ruin it/
listen bitch wen u hear my name/
attack wit lyrical flame, like glass i'll shatter ya game

Dis guy is gonna beat me? C’mon let’s be-rational
When he jack off together is the only time you’re ‘sensation’al//
THugzy brags about being able to spit off-the-dome
Making orders at McD’s is only itme you speak into a microphone//
Your rhymes are ‘out of this world’ cuz I punched you off-the-earth
It’s pretty sad when you’re so ugly that your mom scoffs-yo-birth//
This fag’s been asking me for rap and battle tips almost every night* (true)
The 22 year old loser needs to get some friends outside the site!//
You think you’re on some dope shit? You need to lay-off
You don’t ‘run the streets’, even your name says I broke yo heart//
I must be eating Nestle bars, cuz it’s your Crunch-time
It’s sad to see him having lines longer than school lunch-lines//
And using fake personal on me? That’s pretty sly,-dude
I hate dealing with fractions, so let’s not discuss your IQ//
He not smart if all the English classes can school dis herb
He thinks he’s dope? He needs to know there never was a cool-nerd//
Mayne, the only ‘rap gift’ you have is the one from Christmas (get it?)
And the way your ego ‘fits’ your skill level just proves you’re a ‘mis-fit’//
Thugzy already dead, so I’m gonna have to roast-his-hearse
Only reason why you think you’re ‘on top’ is cuz you posted-first//

tight rymes gal,but believe thugzy dont be needin to ask 4 no tips,and whos 22 years old.

nice battle though,get votin people!

aight lets get some votes

dude its just a rhymes

lol,i know i know.jus jestin ya.tight rhymes aswell

Nice battle, defientely... Lil Nae 2.. you brought the heat.. crazy sick punches:

"
I hate dealing with fractions, so let’s not discuss your IQ//
He not smart if all the English classes can school dis herb
He thinks he’s dope? He needs to know there never was a cool-nerd//
Mayne, the only ‘rap gift’ you have is the one from Christmas (get it?)
And the way your ego ‘fits’ your skill level just proves you’re a ‘mis-fit’//
Thugzy already dead, so I’m gonna have to roast-his-hearse
Only reason why you think you’re ‘on top’ is cuz you posted-first//"

I posted that whole thing... cuz damn those were hot bars.. all great punches.. some multis but not great and the rhyme is a bit weak at spots. Work on that, but what really matters is the creative punches, and Lil Nae was all over that shit, also had some nice personals early on. THUG, this wasn't a bad battle for you, she just came way too hard. You gotta use more personals, work on your structure man.

v/ Lil Nae

Hit up my battles...

thx fo da vote can we get some more

Uppin fo some votes

upin fo votes

uppin up on votes

yo,come on we need more votes on this battle,come on gs

yo hit up my battle wit quick.. and then I will return the fav, I'd vote first but no one ever returns the fav.. so hit this up: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120303 once your done I will come back here and vote.. thx

Uppin Fo Votes

shit,i 4got bout this one,uppin 4 votes yall.............

lil took this i thought just, nice battle where both brought the heat fo sure but lil jus had the beta punches in the end...pz

v/lil

will ya vote honestly on my battle wiv mic wrecker? i'll drop the link below in a min...thanx

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=115318

^^^theres the thread, need one vote to finish....pz

uppin on votes

uppin on votes come on yall help us out

breakdown simple

FLOW - Lil Nae2...basically i was feelin her verse more!
STRUCTURE - Lil Nae2...she had better structure, her shit was more together!
PUNCHES - Lil Nae2...she definitely brought the heat in this battle just like shadow said, all punches had some power and hit with gud connection.
CREATIVITY - Lil Nae2...more creativity in her spit, better overall wordplay and sum gud personals that made me laugh!

VOTE - Lil Nae2...overall better performance!!

return tha favour on my battle wit Relic
link is in the sig.

L.I. aint spit yet so dont bother wit that!!

vote for thugzy he had better lines. He's amazing, he's got talent.

ncie flow Nae she killed it.Shad had flow and Punches.

Nae=7/10
Thug=5/10

Nice battle u 2

uppin on votes

aight yall one mo vote gon head n vote it makes a differents

nice drop da both of u

lil nae- u had some tite punches and a tite flow

bestline-Dis guy is gonna beat me? C’mon let’s be-rational
When he jack off together is the only time you’re ‘sensation’al//

nice vocab and way 2 start

worsteline-none

nice drop

overall yo verse gets a 8/10

thugzy-nice flow also and nice personals here and there and punches here and there

bestline-wud ya mother b missin u wen she realises i got the skills/
I'ma go back in time and feed that bitch birth control pills

descent

worsteline-ya chest exploded cos my mic was loaded wit murderous words/
You no i'm tha illest MC from across the world/

not a good start

overall yo verse gets a 7.7/10 yo start couldve been betta

winner-lil nae2