jpoll vs killah bwoy
 

aiight lets do dis

10 lines
you spit first
no d/r cv or biting
good luck
lets do da damn thang

what the fuck kid...we decided you spit first...or can you not read...fine blind spit

iight str8 nigga.............blind spit..no bullshittin either son

don't feed off my shit...that's weak...first we decided that you spit first...n then you bitch out what's that about...come on kidd...

Blind Spit...
you're going to wish this shit didn't start...it's ova...

okay here we go, i'll go n then you,cause it doens't take me all day to write 8 to 12 lines...like i said in bitch slapped...i have a question before i spit...can you read?

well let's go...

Hocus...Pocus, the magicians JPoll,
You're thinking backwards, you don't walk n then crawl,

I figured out how ya win some battles spittin,
U cry out "no prewritten", when u got a book fulla written,

Then you stamp my name, and it becomes a personal punch,
I was readin your shit it's bittin, hear it people?, CRUNCH!,

Well soon afta dis, ur rhyming career will be found in the obituaries,
I saw ur pic, haha, ur ugly ass looks like a young lil Jon, drink some dairy, you skiny ass fairy,

If this was an ol'western gunfight, people would be pillaging ur carcus for remains,
They'd only find a book "intro to rhymin", wit'bookmark on page seven, see already ur slayne, I'll fill you in wit da book, it's just mundayne...

haha
it's over son...consider that a tutorial

wow how long does tens lines take geezz...////////////

what the fuck you make me spit and then you go offline...what the fuck is that...i thought you lked quick battles...what the fuck...weak coward....

i should win just for you being such a bitch

I cause lyriKal "destruktion" kids burstin in flames like simotanious combustion..../
Dawg you WACK.im so phat you couldnt take it out of me with liphel suction...../
This Kid couldn't carry heat even if I put Fire in ya backpack...../
You couldn't drop shit even if I gave you a bottle of fuckin' X-LAX....../
Beat this bitch with a KO before he gets a chance to grab these-ropes...../
I spit fire Kids inhalin' my flames leave JPOLL with heat stroke....../
Kill you right where you sit,have your computer chair your graveyard....../
Your shit wouldn't be hot even if you collab'd with nas,like the bravehearts.../
if you put vaseline in your mouth and jumped in fire you still couldn't spit heat../
this kids bitin my lines but i bleed lava, now he spittin out teeth..../
dont talk i let my gat speak,i dont blow up my opponents i let there brains leek.../



and its ova

oh and for yall peoples whio dont know simotanious combustion is some people in the world burst in flames off there own body fluids and they burn to death from thereselves...and thats fucked lmfao

yo ever though i'm battling killah bwoy too my vote is for him. his shit was hard. i was laught like crazy with that x-lax line dawg. but i got a question for you too can you spell i mean the diss me about that when look at your name son. but what ever. jpoll you started off ok the like a wet hill you slip and far down.lol

yo jpoll i was feelin these two punches
I figured out how ya win some battles spittin,
U cry out "no prewritten", when u got a book fulla written,

Then you stamp my name, and it becomes a personal punch,
I was readin your shit it's bittin, hear it people?, CRUNCH!,

but i gotta give it to killah bwoy cuz i was feelin like all of his. no fillers like alot of yours. keep elavatin and take the extra time to come up wit more punch lines, instead talkin shit when u whine.

vote-killah bwoy,
yo drop a vote in a battle of mine in my signiture, preferably agianst saint cuz da shits bout closed.

breakdown for jpoll:

flow:good job here no off spots 7/10

volcab:alright use i'd spend more time on this next time though 6/10

punches:nothing really but played out lines and open ended disses my best line,"You're thinking backwards, you don't walk n then crawl," 5/10

overall:18/30

breakdown for killah bwoy:

flow:kinda choppy but you know whatever 5/10

volcab:good use specially at the start 7/10

punches:mostly played lines but atleast they were punches and you had alot of them my fav,"This Kid couldn't carry heat even if I put Fire in ya backpack...../" good job 7/10


overall:19/30

vote--killah bwoy better overall verse

killahbwoy nice punches and vocab work on personals a little
other guy i didnt really like any of urs truthfully u need to work on personals and vocab
vote killah obviously took it

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Demobx
 

I Go For Killah Feeling His Punch Lines The Other Guy Didnt Feel Like He Was Hittin Hard

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poor battle i think, i did not like jpoll shit at. no hard punches boring to read nothin special - sorry jus tellin u how it is
only decent punch
I figured out how ya win some battles spittin,
U cry out "no prewritten", when u got a book fulla written

killa had a gd line too

Kill you right where you sit,have your computer chair your graveyard....../
Your shit wouldn't be hot even if you collab'd with nas,like the bravehearts.../

i gotta giv this shit to killa
v/kila

aiight, i better x-plain so strobe doesent enlighten me wit a disqualified vote.....lol..

so....

jpoll...

Hocus...Pocus, the magicians JPoll,
You're thinking backwards, you don't walk n then crawl
^^^
ure a magician? i thought this was rap? lol wack opener in my eyes....

Then you stamp my name, and it becomes a personal punch,
I was readin your shit it's bittin, hear it people?, CRUNCH!,
^^^
would b a nice punch if killa actually did bite rymes.....but he dont so its unreferrable...

Well soon afta dis, ur rhyming career will be found in the obituaries,
I saw ur pic, haha, ur ugly ass looks like a young lil Jon, drink some dairy, you skiny ass fairy
^^^^
i think that was wack and so was the finisher so ima say u need alot of work on ya punchlines....


killa....

I cause lyriKal "destruktion" kids burstin in flames like simotanious combustion..../
Dawg you WACK.im so phat you couldnt take it out of me with liphel suction...../
^^^^
very nice opener......

This Kid couldn't carry heat even if I put Fire in ya backpack...../
You couldn't drop shit even if I gave you a bottle of fuckin' X-LAX....../
^^^
fire in a backpack n x-lax lines r played out more than national anthems....

but other than that the rest of ya verse was ok, lacked a lil creativitie but came out on top...

so my vote goes for killa bwoy...better battle verse all around....

str8 vote...........................................