MARVOLoUsJ1009 Vs. Limited Edition
 

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limited edition? we all dis fella-suck,but when shots from dat beretta-buck //
make like "bugs bunny playin dice with daffy" u "bet-a-duck" //
who eva kop dunns-cd's?,i dont wanna hear about da pump-he-squeeze //
his moms a hoe she always get "caught under-cover" like "dumb dt's" //
keep talkin but when u lay-bleedin,few seconds later u aint aint-breathin //
after i put ya "brain on ya sun" and you could call it "day-dreamin" //
ya verse's corny so who u was often-killin?..but i'll leave u ina coffin-chillin //
then make like "nas" and "drop ya god son" but its gon be off a buildin //
fukk all dis dogg y should rap when i could grab ruga's & pome trey's //
u commite crimes??? im happy 4 u is a "kon" "yahhhh" //
nope u a "college drop out" dat live in da crib and do whut ya moms say //

quick...key style or howeva ya'll say it

A'ight...uppin' for votez on this shit........................

Uppin' 1.

word.....can we get some votes ppl.....................

VOTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE....and drop ya links

ima give this to marvelous he had better flow although his structure wasnt that good he still have flow

limited edition i just wasnt feeling your flow . your structure was koo but i just wasnt feeling it this time B

My Vote Goes To Marvelous

goodlooks....................................vote ppl battles shouldn't stay up longer than a day on dis site

Limited verse was alright not gonna hate but Marv was much better! It seems like limited took the day off. Marv had me with this Line:

keep talkin but when u lay-bleedin,few seconds later u aint aint-breathin //
after i put ya "brain on ya sun" and you could call it "day-dreamin" //

Vote= Marv

goodlooks............dunn.....................uppi n

WHAT THE FUCK?

Marv-u came a lil hard...but talkin about killin some1 or w.e isnt always gonna win u a battle....when u diss em be creative make it funny...sorta brag a lil about how ur better and the other kat sucks...ur flow was good and so was structure no doubt...ur vacab is definately there for sure...u just need to sorta mix up ur punches a lil...from funny 2 serious 2 funny again...try keep people laughin


Limited-ur flow was good...very easy to read which i like..i understood it...ur punches i thought were funny thats why u get my vote...the thumbs up thing killed it for me..ur vocab isnt bad either...i guess thats why ur in UE cause they like the way u flow..u made evry punch personal almost...thats good

vote-LIMITED EDITION

A'ight thx...yo, hit this shit up...

Uppin' numero 2.

damm i 4got about dis shit...aneway can we could some votes rapper's

yo yall niggaz is strait booty......come get at me wwit that cheap shit ill cut ya head off an shit down ya throat

marv killed this easy.....i dint really get his opner but his shit got better punch wise structualry....flow cud do werk in sum areas.....Limited had a flow, but shit were they punches...bout as hard as a flacid dick dawg, ya need to put mo thought ito em......

vote marv-


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limited edition? we all know dis fella-suck,but when shots from dat beretta-buck //
make like "bugs bunny playin dice with daffy" u "bet-a-duck" //
^^^^^MY OPENER......let me explain da punch 4 u dunny


make like "bugs bunny playin dice with daffy" u "bet-a-duck" //
^^^^dat mean when i shoot at him he "BETa-DUCK" like bug playin dice with daffy....how u dont get dat

but i dont think ya vote counted aneway dunn...voter's pleez explain ya vote or it aint gon count

:shoot: :shoot:

^^^^^^get a real gun then come see stupid...........

MARV WON THIS SHIT
who eva kop dunns-cd's?,i dont wanna hear about da pump-he-squeeze //
his moms a hoe she always get "caught under-cover" like "dumb dt's" //
^^^^THIS LINE WAS FUNNY AS HELL
OVERALL MARV HAD BETTER FLOW, AND PUNCHES
ONLY LINE I REALLY LIKED FROM THE OTHER DUDE WAS THE OPENER
HE DID HAVE HOT PERSONALS, BUT I DONT THINK THEY HIT AS HARD

limited good battle perfect finish good flow
and structure u came strong till tha very
end keep it up and have more punchlines
amd multis

vote limited

^^^^^aight now i seen some non explained votes but dis shit is da worst lmaooooo 4 real and dogg y da fukk did u pm askin me da vote on your after u did dis..its nothin tho u gon get banned in a minute

MARV, i've seen u do alot better my nukka, but it's str8 i guess. limited, i've never seen u, but i thought ur shit was pretty funny, which is what i try to incorporate into my steeze. people laughin = :thumbup:

i was lovin limit's shit like -
"No...I ain' a vet...but already have taken the entire net
I will win, wanna bet? No mystery when you don't have 3 wins yet"
^funny
but nothing else besides fluidity and structure.

MARV's ish was -
"limited edition? we all dis fella-suck,but when shots from dat beretta-buck //
make like "bugs bunny playin dice with daffy" u "bet-a-duck" //"
i think the other punches shoulda been set up better, that the only thing u need to work on dog, other than that, ur game's pretty tight.

i really do'nt know who to give it to, i love ppl who can keep it fun in their words, but marv's shit was pretty slick. oh fuck it, MARV gets the win, next time limited, fill up the bars, i would of voted for u if there was more to read.

VOTE-MARV