lost child vs. creativitie
 

aight
crew votes...dont trip if my crew votes believe they will be honest
no hate votes
no prewritten
no d/r
10-15 lines

just spit....after check in you got 30mins

aight check in kid......................this aint my check in

Checkin in cuz and lets get one thing straight I ain't yo fucking kid

just spit.............................................. .....

Get down or lay down
 

I don't see why these rappers constantly testin me
My flow have yo girl touchin her self like she fresh of Extasy
You don't really wanna fuck with a soon to be rap legend
If you and me was pac and big I guess we now who would be second
You a bitch homeboy I'll take yo cookies
And to think this nigga had the nerves to call me a rookie
Creative well you betta come up with a whole lotta shit
Or you a be smokin crack SUCKING A WHOLE LOTTA DICK
It's to easy I should ask yo squad to show me love
Kick yo ass out the group like Bizzy with Bone Thugs
you a wanna be g can't handle the streets
I'll fuck you bitch and ask is that you chic like I was Memphis Bleek
And i know your ass at the crib looking all shitty
Cause I just beat you worse than BOBBY DID WHITNEY

:shoot: :shoot: :shoot: :shoot: :shoot:

aight look kid you wanna fuck me.........wtf..."I'll fuck you bitch" i aint gay sorry.....
this aint my check in im doin shit rite now...got alot of pms and shit...so i will spit like in ten mins........aight is that coo.....and please believe that i aint goin to be thinkin of shit and prewritten andshit lke that.... im bout to kill you wit a freesttyle....


THAT WASNT MY FLOW^^^^^DONT TRIP I WILL BRB

I bet this nigga read my shit and say I aint no punc bitch so he gone run and write some shit bitch

shut the hell up kid....as i think everybody on this site nos that rite now im in school.....so i cant be on the computer the whole time so hold up.......this aint my check in...i will check in when i no i got more then 20 mins to be on the computer..so just hold on....

wateva im going to drop rite now......i mite n ot finish but i thinki can still beat you..

check in..................

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1ne

everyone i just found out who stole the cookies from the cookie jar..........



dis kid thinks he being tested when really im teaching him a lesson//
im to much of a test for your immature mind, your better off guessin//
when i get in the textin section everybody knows im legendary//
scary 2 battle bcuz when it comes 2 spitten evrything else is secondary//
you betta watch WHATCHA TALKIN. cuz your rhymes could neva B LEGIT//
cant believe you actually showd i thought you would be afraid to submit//
look u dealin wit the nigga who stole alicia's keys and took abe's lincoln//
u aint even on my level,but ur comparin yourself to pac,wat you thinkin//
my rhymes severed your eyes and officaily left you a lost child//
thought u was a challange, but didnt even make dis shit worth while//


just a lil sumthin off the dome

Aight everybody vote we all know I murdered this bitch

I gotta vote for creative, he just had a better flow goin and better wordplay and vocab, both had some alright punches and Child your flow was hot and spit was alright but you didnt come as hard as C ... vote - Creative

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uppin for vote number 2

Nothin too spectacular in this battle but it had it's moments.....

Overall this was a punch for punch battle. LostChild came wit some ok punches but they never really stuck. He seemed to fall off a little too. He tried to glorify himself more than put down Creativitie. Creativitie came with a little more.............. well .........creativitie, lol. He barely took this one because he stayed on track wit his punches.

vote - Creativitie

^^^ Return the favor wit some honest votes on the battles in my sig..........

I'm going for lost child,except that part where you said you want to fuck him,though.
But he really had some nice punches.Creative,you got the flow/structure,but the main part is punches.Work on punches.

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I never said I wanted to fuck him but thanks for the vote

would somebody please vote for this motha fuckin battle

can somebody please vote on this motha fuckin battle

YO DIS SHIT GOES OUT TO LOSTCHILD// DA NIGGA HAD CREATIVITE STR8 UP ( YALL NIGGAS DONT C DAT) DA LAST LINE KILLED CREATIVITE i know your ass at the crib looking all shitty
Cause I just beat you worse than BOBBY DID WHITNEY YO U CAME OUT SLO U END STRONG


YO CREATIVITE NICE FLOWZ AND NICE FUCKIN PUNCHLINES DAWG=look u dealin wit the nigga who stole alicia's keys and took abe's lincoln//
u aint even on my level,but ur comparin yourself to pac,wat you thinkin//
my rhymes severed your eyes and officaily left you a lost child//
thought u was a challange, but didnt even make dis shit worth while//

YO I LIKE DAT BUT U START STRONG BUT END SLO// YO U GOTS TO START STRONG AND STAY STRONG DONT WACK YO SELF AIGHT


VOTE GOES TO LOSTCHILD

Thanks for the vote cuz can we get some more votes

still wating for that vote number 3

can we get some votes

uppin for votes.....................................

uppin for votes.........................................

Ayo dunn this battle was real! No doubt there was some fire there and both of yall came at eachothers throat two crack heads in a room and it's only one rock left-lol- young ya boy Lostchild hit creativitie nicely wit that "I don't see why these rappers constantly testin me
My flow have yo girl touchin her self like she fresh of Extasy' and that "And i know your ass at the crib looking all shitty
Cause I just beat you worse than BOBBY DID WHITNEY", those punches is real as hell, and that is part of being an emcee gettin personal on it.

Creativitie, man you nice dawg no doubt about that either, it seems as if you came of real easy and calm like Lloyd Banks and murdered him wit out even doing it personally. the punches was soft but hard, if you a real emcee you feel me on that one, like my crew member said Gkilla05, you had the better flow C. So my over all vote has to go to Creativitie. No hate vote, no diss vote, only my honest vote, return the favor please.

I'm wit this nigga ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ I think Creative just layed back and murked this nigga madd easy, like he was blazin' an L and just stayin' low profile chillin'. Nigga had betta wordplay, flow, creativity, punches. That nigga who said that lostchild's last line was hott, that's bullshit, that was a bullshit ass-line, and I think you a bullshit-ass dick-ridin' nigga, personally. Lost Child, you didn't do badd, I just think that Creative outclassed U.

look u dealin wit the nigga who stole alicia's keys and took abe's lincoln//
u aint even on my level,but ur comparin yourself to pac,wat you thinkin//

Now that's a bar you dick-rider^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Vote Creative

damn lost ur on all sites now..........

one mo vote thats it
 

c'mon one mo vote.....end this battle..................................

creativitie u now to come up with some creative puch lines

LostChild puches is alright i say u won that battle

one mo vote...thats it..............................VOTE!!!!!!!!

yo yo
 

uppin for votes............................................. .......

wtf vote niggas

first off we all know who killed who and we also know that g killas is obviously part of creats squad, because there is no doubt that lost boy won that one, even though creat had some tight lines like
"my rhymes severed your eyes and officaily left you a lost child//
thought u was a challange, but didnt even make dis shit worth while//"
but lost came with
"Creative well you betta come up with a whole lotta shit
Or you a be smokin crack SUCKING A WHOLE LOTTA DICK"
that was a killa and then lost dug up some of creats fossils with the line
"It's to easy I should ask yo squad to show me love
Kick yo ass out the group like Bizzy with Bone Thugs"
lost got my vote.

vote on my battle

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120927

uppin for votes...................................

aight lost had better flow better punches and structure
tive u had an ill flow but not that much punches ur starting was jokes tho but ye lost child came on top in ma opinion
my vote: lostchild

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LostChild Flow Structure and Rhymes was good

punches u lacked by a lil bit but overall 9.5.10


Creativitie u did good Flow Structure rhymes punches was good 9.0.10


LOST

Flow 8/10
Rhymes 8/10
Structure 7/10
Punches 6/10
Metas 7/10
Multis 6/10
42/60

Creativitie
Flow 7/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 7/10
Punches 6/10
Metas 5/10
Multis 7/10

39/60

Lost Child

Vote:lOST

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uppin for votes.............number 4

uppin for votes....................................