Jay_Dogg VS accomplishment
 

10 - 15 lines
You know the rest
You spit first.............

you gotta make this a battle pole dawg i'mworkin on my championship battle shit you drop first

n/m you got it dawg you droppin first i'm busy i'll spit a few lines after you

now lets see you dont wanna spit first/
dude you just makin shit worse/
ill tare through you pull out this knife and put it through you/
you and your mother fuckin crew/
so if accopmlishment is the name/
you know he aint in the game/
Jay Dogg is here to rule the show/
you in my yard so lets go/
cant stand in my way/
ill spit this shit all day/
you fuckin homo fag/
you aint nothin but a dumb ass bawbag/

I'm countin kids i'm merkin, and grab em and rap em like stacks a money bitch...
cuz if dats da case, the only G's you seein is in you name dats funny shit.../

crafty like mcgiver, cuz i'm recklessly killen kids like student drivers...
ya i'm known to break heads, necks and backs like pile drivers.../

witta gattlin gun kid needs more than a vest cuz i'm knockin him off my block like games a chess...
this kids verse is a mess, if i got zero votes this motherfucker would get less.../

I rockin game, not from notre dame but i'm killen theese scotts like da fightin irish...
this kid gets his ass whooped by tons of guys, but i heard he likes it.../

I abuse theese posers, they get Re-used like i'ma recycling company...
he posted his battle i laughed like hows he gonna Fuck-wit-me.../

quick shit yo hit up dis wit votes

Jay-man come harder...thats second grade rap.....nice flow and structure...had no multies...

Accomplishment-killed him...better flow,structure,vocab,punches....but dont take ur oppenents likely just cause they may be newb's thats wht i did which resulted to my 6-1 record....

vote-ACC

can yall hit this battle up for me....honest votes only...appreciate it

QUICKPUNCH VS D~ILLER

Jay_dogg that was a nice first attempt. Get some mulites in an' it'll be shit hot. beeachhhh!

yo man this was ma first battle so i no it was shit..

ya, u said it, "yo man this was ma first battle so i no it was shit.." take a look at sum other battles and how to make punches, then battle some newbies.

accomplishment get this wit his punches even tho i aint diggin his street approach that much.
crafty like mcgiver, cuz i'm recklessly killen kids like student drivers...
ya i'm known to break heads, necks and backs like pile drivers.../

haha uppin for votes

up for votes you sucka kids

Well,Jay Dogg,ur lines were too short.And You had a bunch of short lines and out of nowhere came out with a long ass line.Keep them all the same amount of sllyables.I suggest u rad the tutorial part of the website and learn.Nothing really special here in this battle,but I'm going with accomplishment.

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uppin for some votes

accomplishment by far-fuck the dumb shit dogg yo shit was wack
beef up yo flow punches multi's structure flow vocab all dat but w/ practice u'll b aite but in regards to this battle ~accomplishment~

Acc - you have the nerver to say my joint was wack - That was pure case of garbage!

I see now how Mic wreck got a vote hehe, yall some funny dudes..

Anyways

I wont even vote now- that would be straight homo!

it was wack i just dropped a vote on his and told him to return da favor he coulda voted for the other bitch but did you read his veres haha

i voted honestly da nigg was shitty
i cant help if he was shitty

I know yall did. His verse was wack though..lol
I'm only fucking with yall..lol

glad we agree that this ws pure shit..............

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tie your shoes we'll go uppin for votes

yo.. vote on the battle in my sig.. and ill this battle with a vote..

Ok.. really not even close. I know it was your first verse Jay, but you gotta elevate... your punches, where they existed where weak as hell, and you had a lot of filler in there.. accomp, it was a poor verse for you but really more than enough...

neeeed one vote people

itte accomplishment that shyte was off da shelf ,the punches were hard u came at him strong u gotta good structure an u also had a tight flowizzle
Jay_dogg it was hot but not on fire punches were fair an u came alil weak tha structure was a lil cru tha vocab was ok but my
V/acc