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SuBZer0 04-21-04 08:55 PM

SuBZer0 vs. Shady1132
 
Min-10 lines
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U spit first since I won round 1
No Haters
No dick ridin votes!
Drop verse after check in!

K-Trin 04-21-04 09:17 PM

okay here we go.The rematch.Can't fuck up-

SubZer0,u nothing,u the fuckin worst emcee
And you such an ass..............you'll diagree
Last time you fuckin whupped my ass so badly
But when u asked for rematch.....I accepted gladly
You think you got it all........don't you subzero?
But u wrong....you fuckin wannabe deniro!!!
You pick a stupuid name from mortal Kombat??
I just want to nail u with a european brown bat
You got balls,PMing me for a rematch,though
U rapping is like a watching a bad tv show
So go back to punk rock.com,where u belong
See I got that sence of right & wrong
And u rapping is so fuckin wrong!!!!!!!!!

K-Trin 04-21-04 09:19 PM

Fucked up last line though

SubZer0,u nothing,u the fuckin worst emcee
And you such an ass..............you'll diagree
Last time you fuckin whupped my ass so badly
But when u asked for rematch.....I accepted gladly
You think you got it all........don't you subzero?
But u wrong....you fuckin wannabe deniro!!!
You pick a stupuid name from mortal Kombat??
I just want to nail u with a european brown bat
You got balls,PMing me for a rematch,though
U rapping is like a watching a bad tv show
So go back to punk rock.com,where u belong
See I got that sence of right & wrong
AND RAPPING IS WHERE YOU DON'T BELONG!!!!!

SuBZer0 04-21-04 09:23 PM

Checkin in!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SuBZer0 04-21-04 09:49 PM

Shady I beat u once now ill kill u so this can come to a end
There's no challenege beating u~ ur a whack ass Emimem
Auction u off to niggas who need Victory's cuz u will never win
And now i'm feeling bad cuz after ur last verse was in
U were still whack and thats the best uve ever been
Mortal Kombat! Right Come Here i'll finish U my Friend
If this was u cumming hard than a woman u could never satisfy
This was never that serious to me so i'll just do enough to get by
I'll spit the cold lyrics that preserve my record when u die
If u really want it Shady I can murder U 11 hundred and 32 times
Cuz when u rhyme all u do drop that many bullshit lines!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SuBZer0 04-21-04 10:07 PM

uppin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! uppin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SuBZer0 04-21-04 10:22 PM

Yo can we get some votes thanx!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SuBZer0 04-21-04 10:56 PM

uppin 4 Votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Uppin 4 Votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SuBZer0 04-22-04 02:33 PM

uppin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! uppin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

K-Trin 04-22-04 03:21 PM

do people vote anymore????????????????????????????

SuBZer0 04-22-04 03:44 PM

Uppin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Uppin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

iamthatdude87 04-22-04 03:52 PM

i could tell who i was gonna vote for by the first line of shadys verse but come on dawg u have come harder u need to work on it a lot subzero u were a lot better than shady so u get my vote holla

K-Trin 04-22-04 04:06 PM

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uppin for more votes!!!!!

GKillaz05 04-22-04 04:10 PM

iight, ima break it down like this:

SubZerO - Good spit man, you had some good flow and some hard punches, just gotta work on your vocab and maybe get some multi's goin on in your spits.

Shady I beat u once now ill kill u so this can come to a end
There's no challenege beating u~ ur a whack ass Emimem
Alright opener, coulda been better
Auction u off to niggas who need Victory's cuz u will never win
And now i'm feeling bad cuz after ur last verse was in
HMMMM....
U were still whack and thats the best uve ever been
Mortal Kombat! Right Come Here i'll finish U my Friend
Pretty good punch
If this was u cumming hard than a woman u could never satisfy
This was never that serious to me so i'll just do enough to get by
Alright punch there too
I'll spit the cold lyrics that preserve my record when u die
If u really want it Shady I can murder U 11 hundred and 32 times
Cuz when u rhyme all u do drop that many bullshit lines!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MEH, boring ending

Shady - your gettin better man, just keep at it, work on your vocab.. your flow is iight.. just use some multi's also.

SubZer0,u nothing,u the fuckin worst emcee
And you such an ass..............you'll diagree
Hmm... not a great opener
Last time you fuckin whupped my ass so badly
But when u asked for rematch.....I accepted gladly
Dont bring up that he has beatin you b4
You think you got it all........don't you subzero?
But u wrong....you fuckin wannabe deniro!!!
alright punch man, keep at it
You pick a stupuid name from mortal Kombat??
I just want to nail u with a european brown bat
Alright....
You got balls,PMing me for a rematch,though
U rapping is like a watching a bad tv show
good punch
So go back to punk rock.com,where u belong
See I got that sence of right & wrong
AND RAPPING IS WHERE YOU DON'T BELONG!!!!!
MEH, alright endin better then his

OVERALL - was a alright battle but I got to give this to Sub because he had better punches and flowed better, keep at it shady you will keep gettin better.

RETURN THE FAV
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120150

SuBZer0 04-22-04 06:53 PM

Uppin 4 Votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! uppin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Mr.Wattz 04-22-04 06:58 PM

Sub zero came nice in this battle he gets my vote he came harder wit punches and got more personals...


Vote:sub

vote on the link in my sig

K-Trin 04-22-04 07:12 PM

^u know,I thnk u for voting,but could u at least give some tips to me since u felt my rap was lacking?

SuBZer0 04-22-04 08:02 PM

Still uppin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

K-Trin 04-22-04 08:50 PM

upppppppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !

SuBZer0 04-22-04 09:38 PM

uppin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! uppin 4 votes

K-Trin 04-23-04 10:36 AM

Upinnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!

FlowIntelligent. 04-23-04 10:43 AM

aiight this was a iight battle shady u came hard against me but i dont know what you did here i wasnt feelin it u had a couple good punches and it the beginnin and the end werent that good the middle of your verse was good and i felt there was a lot of filler in your verse...subzero i wasnt feelin your verse that much either u came harder the first time but now you kinda just posted anything to beat him obviously u did beat him but i still think u should have came harder nice structure couple good punches wordplay wasnt feelin either that much.....>>flips a coin<<>>tails<<

subzero wins

K-Trin 04-23-04 03:11 PM

upppppinn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SuBZer0 04-23-04 03:19 PM

uppin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! uppin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SuBZer0 04-23-04 06:07 PM

uppin 4 Votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! uppin 4 Votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

K-Trin 04-23-04 09:24 PM

uppin 4 votes

SuBZer0 04-23-04 09:50 PM

uppin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! uppini 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

E Looch 04-23-04 09:55 PM

shady had a good opener but it went bad from there the rest just seemed like a bunch of filler lines had afew good punchs just need to work on your owrd play an stayin focused on your opponent and dont trail off

subzero you didnt bring as much as you did in your other battle just work on stayin consistant and work on harder punchs and original punchs nice verse though

vote subzero

Mr.TacTiCaL 04-23-04 10:38 PM

Shady dunn u need to step it up u cant be talkin bout he beat me and dis and dat. But whatz really good sub u took it kinda ez. U cant sleep on to many motha fuckas cuz u might lose. Got lucky dis time
Vote-sub

K-Trin 04-24-04 03:29 PM

uppin

iamthatdude87 04-24-04 03:31 PM

yo i voted on this vote on my battle wit flow intelligent
vote on Ecko vs Flow Intelligent i voted so return the favor

K-Trin 04-25-04 09:04 PM

upppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 04-25-04 09:37 PM

Shit Whateva// Shady Had Dis// He Had Some Good Punches// And Hit Hard On Da Ribs Yo//

Sub U Had Some Good Punches But U Aint Hit Hard Dan Shadys//

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

K-Trin 04-25-04 09:55 PM

UPPin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

K-Trin 04-26-04 03:02 PM

uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SuBZer0 04-26-04 03:28 PM

uppin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!

SuBZer0 04-26-04 04:14 PM

Yo could we get some votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!

SuBZer0 04-26-04 04:59 PM

uppin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!

Pop Lotty 04-26-04 07:03 PM

Sub Won This No Doubt,shady Had A Wackass Opener.he Came Better Wit The Punches
The Mortal Combat Shit Killed Dudes Whole Verse.......
Vote:sub


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