Puertoricanelly vs. Ill Teacher
 

Yo check in when your ready... lets make this quick man
Best man wins.
House Rules
10 - 15 line
D/R = Shit
H8 = Shit

lets do this

im checkin in

ditto

Boy your from NYC
Imma beat you down like a crooked NYPD
I haven’t even started and your already panicking
I got you ass ripped Dog you missin an o ring
Got you shittin like you on the top floor of the towers
Imma drop a 747 on ya so fall down and cower
Yo This cats aol is kellysguy
That just makes me wanna bust out this reply
Cause if your owned by a chick you should be shot
I know from seein that.. A cock you just don’t got
You shouldn’t even be on the frontline
Yo shit belongs in the back with them ads fo cheap liquor and wine
Dog don’t even show up to this battle
Go back to yo crib and play with yo rattle.

call u ill teacha cuz yur rhymes make me sick,
weak ass rhymes, this principal'll fire yo ass quick/

yo lines get plaid out fasta then Mad Libs,
wack ass rhymes ull get punched in the rib,
got this baby drooling quick give him a bib/

yur rhymes are more cracked up then hobo feet,
ill leave you worse than 911 victims,dismantle your body jus ur face lookin beat/

u more faka than a poor person wit louie vaton,
fagot mufucka get pissed & shit on

& like ludacris ill show ya sum southern hospitality,
done wit this bitch now ill kill ya witta lyrical fatality

Im done B ur tun G/ L

done before ya.. good rhyme man.... props.... up to the votes now

Ayo this battle was shaky cause yall aint come wit the punches hard enough like yall could have. Ill - huh, man you talked about some bullshit yo. You should have waited for P-Nelly to post first cause i think you would have had a better chance.
P-Nelly, man you came harder when you battled me, you slackin B but over all though you waited for him to drop it seems and you got him off of that "call u ill teacha cuz yur rhymes make me sick,
weak ass rhymes, this principal'll fire yo ass quick/" I thought that was a starter for the finish you should have elaborated though, actually you both could have, but my over all vote goes to p-Nelly though, nice battle.

thanx fo tha constructive critisism REAL! UPPPIN VOTESSS !!!

4real, this the first time i actually voted a tie!!

Both verses were aight and had some nice points, Ill-teacher came straght punching and had some nice lines in there, i was feeling puertoricanelly flow, and liked his punches!!

Advice: puertoricanelly should be more complex, don't do the normal cat, hat, bat type ryhmes (you did better then that, but i'm sure ya know what i'm saying), and Ill-Teacher, add to ya flow, some inners or multies, just make it sound better, your punches are definatly there though (u need to be more complex too)!!

Just my opinion, PZ

wow sorry but this battle fuckin sucked both of you need to buy a rhyme dictionary and a russell simmons book haha...still alright to both of you elevate vote

P Nelly better pucnes... Return da favor

uppiin for votes

uppin for votes

Uppin votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yo nelly dunn how u be askin niggaz da vote on ya battles and u dont vote on nothin

i voted on your shit gainst limited edition

Im not at 25 posts yet i dont think, so i cant vote on anyone elses

no hate but both verses need work. im not feeling both verses but here is the break down
flow. both were sorta wack. puerto edged it out by a bit.
personals.ill teacher made attempts but they were sorta weak.
puerto´s nice personal.
call u ill teacha cuz yur rhymes make me sick,
weak ass rhymes, this principal'll fire yo ass quick/
multies. none
metaphors. none really
wordplay.puerto, not much
vocabulary. puerto
punches.
puertos ending was good, in between is wack.
& like ludacris ill show ya sum southern hospitality,
done wit this bitch now ill kill ya witta lyrical fatality
but u arent from the south, your from nyc

shit was real offical nah mean PRNelly ripped holla cha boi http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120192

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

as oonas yall spit pm me. i really wanna vote on this joint. meanwhile vote on this:http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=115437

This Battle Was Not Good But If I Had To Vote I Would Give It To I'll Teacher B/c Hic Lines Were More Personal.
Winner= Ill Teacher

Uppin for votes here

yo
ill teacher you wuz talkin bout some UN-NEEDED sh*t in your verse.
PRNelly had a better verse puches and sh*t.

imma have to go with PRNelly

What was uneeded in my verse??

This was an pretty good battle, both yall came correct.

PN- Alright battle
P.N had a nice closer
"like ludacris ill show ya sum southern hospitality,
done wit this bitch now ill kill ya witta lyrical fatality"

but thats about it could use multi's and more puches

Ill teacher gotta keep elivating kid.