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Whiskey 04-21-04 09:39 PM

Whiskey Vs. LostChild
 
10-15 lines.
you spit first. gl.

LostChild 04-21-04 10:01 PM

Look bitch I can tell you ain't even ready
I'll knock yo head off like jason leary did freddy
You'll never bet when it comes to spittin
If you was rapper I take your job like they clinton
I don't see why I'm constantly battling all these bitches
take it to beef i'll be knocking at your door like Jehovahs Witness
I roll squad up and ain't no stopping us
You tryed to flow but huff and puff like three six mafia
This a man game don't be mistaken by my fuckin name
He the type to sit at home while his girl out letting nigga run train
You a lame you a never be a mc
Yo best bet is rock and roll on MTV
I put nine in you chest but you wont live like 50
Bitch im apose to affraid you I drink WHISKY

Whiskey 04-21-04 10:05 PM

Ayo.
LostChild you're like a child in a store lost,
Cryin' his head off, pissin' in his shorts.
You lost boy, come take a drink of this Whiskey,
and see if you find Never Never Land again so quickly.
If I clap my hands I'll kill fairies.
Shit, it didn't work, you're still standing.
I'll find and end you like your name was Peter Pan,
and I'm James Hook, flippin' you off with my good hand.
Well you know what they say? All's good that ends well.
You've blown your load kid, so get your dick outta Tinkerbell.


Good luck, dude.

LostChild 04-21-04 10:15 PM

DOing my shit again cause i fucked up some words
 
exact same as my first verse but i mispelled and mess some words up


Look bitch I can tell you ain't even ready
I'll knock yo head off like jason leary did freddy
You'll never beat when it comes to spittin
If you was rapper I take your job like they did clinton
I don't see why I'm constantly battling all these bitches
take it to beef i'll be knocking at your door like Jehovahs Witness
I roll squad up and ain't no stopping us
You tryed to flow but huff and puff like three six mafia
This a man game don't be mistaken by my fuckin name
He the type to sit at home while his girl out letting niggas run train
You a lame you a never be a mc
Yo best bet is rock and roll on MTV
I put nine in you chest but you wont live like 50
Bitch im apose to affraid of you, shit I drink WHISKY

LostChild 04-21-04 10:21 PM

can we get some votes on this battle people help a nigga out

XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 04-21-04 10:36 PM

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO NICE BATTLE FO SHO// BUT I GOTS TO GIVE ONE TO LOSTCHILD NICE SENSITER FLOWS DOG

Look bitch I can tell you ain't even ready
I'll knock yo head off like jason leary did freddy= WHAT DA FUCK I NEVA SEEN DAT SHIT ON A BATTLE BUT DAT SHIT IS HOT


You'll never bet when it comes to spittin
If you was rapper I take your job like they clinton= YO DAT WAS HOT RHYME


LOOK YO STATUS LIKE DIS= NICE FLOWS// WORK ON STRUTURE// NICE VOCAB (KILLED DEM)


YO WHISKEY= NICE FLOWZ BUT YO PUNCHLINES WAS WACK// GET PERSONAL AT DA NIGGA// LIKE YO FIRST LINE// BUT U WENT FAR OFF CUZ//

DA VOTE GOES TOO LOSTCHILD

Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. Crew vote removed - strobe

Gh0St MC 04-21-04 10:54 PM

Yo imma have to give that 2 lost child cause his whole Verse was hot..but Whiskey only had like 2 melted kit kats (hot bars)....much props to Whiskey

Vote: LostChild

XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 04-21-04 10:56 PM

Whiskey VS XxToXiCXxVeRbZ
 
10-15 lines.
you spit first


SPIT SPIT SPIT SPIT

XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 04-21-04 10:57 PM

Omg My B Dats Was Madddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd Fucked Up

XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 04-21-04 11:00 PM

Whiskey VS XxToXiCXxVeRbZ
 
10-15 lines.
you spit first


SPIT SPIT SPIT SPIT SPIT SPIT

XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 04-21-04 11:01 PM

Whats Wrong With Dis Fuckin Comp// Damn Shit// Need Help People

LostChild 04-22-04 10:43 AM

Can we please get some more votes on this fuckin battle

LostChild 04-22-04 12:19 PM

come on can we get some more votes pushing for a ko

Whiskey 04-22-04 12:49 PM

uppin' for votes guys. c'mon now, don't by shy. heh.

Enygma 04-22-04 01:15 PM

This was a pretty good battle.......... I could tell that whiskey was a newb because he was just rappin and not really battlin. You gotta throw punches at your opponent if you wanna win a battle. Lost Child came a lot harder in this one. He had punches through out and his closer was pretty hot..........

Vote - Lost Child

LaTiNKiTTeN 04-22-04 02:35 PM

aight..well lostchild...u had some flow..but ur rhyme scheme is basic...just AA,BB..etc. u need to use some multies...n i didnt think ur punches were hard hitting..but the last line was pretty funny...bout bein scared when i drink whiskey that was a good way to use ur opponents name..good personal...

whiskey...ur whole verse was about peter pan..i think that is gay...even if u had one reference in ur verse to peter pan,it would still be gay,c'mon now,what are u ,michael jackson or something? nothin stood out to me,n i think u were tryna feed off the other dude's verse..so

vote=lostchild

Whiskey 04-22-04 02:44 PM

Heh, aiight, thanks kitten. Looks like this is gonna be a whitewash. Nice work Lost.

DeVaZtAtE MinDz 04-22-04 03:06 PM

This was a lopsided battle. Lost Child had the wordplay and the punches, I can't really see why anyone would expect me to go into anymore detail with this. He actually dissed his opponent. Whiskey just like, flowed. It was like reading a newspaper.

vote
Lost Child

E Looch 05-01-04 11:16 PM

Ayo.
LostChild you're like a child in a store lost,
Cryin' his head off, pissin' in his shorts.
You lost boy, come take a drink of this Whiskey,
and see if you find Never Never Land again so quickly.
If I clap my hands I'll kill fairies.
Shit, it didn't work, you're still standing.
I'll find and end you like your name was Peter Pan,
and I'm James Hook, flippin' you off with my good hand.
Well you know what they say? All's good that ends well.
You've blown your load kid, so get your dick outta Tinkerbell.

weak verse but you didnt cheat to get votes botto mline why you get my vote you need to elevate on voca creativite all your shti was played out when rip van winkle grew up and work on harder punchs to man those woundt dent paper just elevate

BoRn2SpiTT 05-01-04 11:20 PM

Lost child had this battle won.. due to his good wordplay along with the punches.. the punches hit hard against the enemy.. the flow helped it a bit..

Whiskey had a good structure but a lack of good wordplay and punches

vote=lost


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