marvolousj1009 vs beasttez2
 

aight umm 10-20 lines
since i posted da shit up...u spittin first
voter's pleez explain ya shit or it wont count..

datz about it...lets get it goin

ay hook a brotha up wit some votes ill return tha favor when yall spitchur stuff heres the link:

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120193

Aye marvolous, you gone show up or what, or do I gotta add you as a no show?? You told me to set it up dunny!

ok ok ok
 

most of yall post rhymes that only get laughed at/
u open wide recievin bullets left half backs/
and u steadily runnin yard and inches/
im not in the game but still go hard on the benches/when a real pimp spit he say CHURCH after the chorus/ im the type of gangsta go to war wit my timbs matching the forest/me and my peers get buy off of peddiling blows/ fiends come so much its like they gotta elephant nose/ i buy 5$ shellz u left the 1 million man/ so many hoes in u u gotta buy pimp in a can/ :shoot:

damn u lost already just to let you know

jea...pardon da wait dunny..........

real easy ima off dis creep...since they say talk is cheap //
ima put ya "brain on a calender" cuzz ya "thoughts is week" //
u neva held a gun dont mention-a-snub,i dont believe dis kidd is a thug //
beasttez had "Sex with a girl on her period" all of a sudden dis "dick is blood" //
i got good aim so its hard-da-run,when u see marv-with-guns //
ima clap beast at da "spur" of da moment 1nce he im "robin-son" //
but really-scrap...i'll be in ya hood if datz where u really-at //
u not gettin a "deal" so da drug dealer's feel sorry 4 u and give u "pitty paks" //
be cool fagget cuzz i'll let da nine or da milly-clap //
or grab "t boz boyfriend name"*mac 10* & leave ya "left eye" is "chilli" lap //
i dont really think dis fag is bout it,his flow and bars he brag about it //
but da only time sombody gon "play his record" is "talkin bad about it" //
ya team clap? i hope they will when i send em a full clipp //
beast u must take pills cuzz "jay-will" put a end 2 ya "bull-shit" //[think about it]

VOTE PPL AND DA FAVOR WILL BE RETURNED

uppppppin vote......................................

Here it goes........... Beasttez came wit a good opener and I thought it was goin well until I saw his recycled line. He used the same exact line in a punchline contest, Boooooo................ Marvey came hard as hell on this as usual. His original punches are astounding. I have no choice but to give this one to him.........

Vote - MarvolousJ

okay..goodlookin dunn.....................vote!!!!!

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^vote muthafukkaz!!!!

one sided battle

beastez i aitn hati nbut you need to work on structure so that shit can get read easier and work on word play and makin your punchs hit harder

marv nice shit again crazy wordplay an sick punchs and personals

vote marvolous

goodlookin out dunn datz whuts up.................can we get some more votes so dis shit could close

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ vote muthafukka's

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^lol vote niggaz

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easy shit marv took him... come harder wit punches... other guy was awful elevate his style is similar to latinkittens FUCKIN SHITTY.... figured i'd put that shit that dumb bitch gone read this and talk some shit so no biggy

beast..i think ur shit was very basic...i didnt see any punches or anything that stood out...marvulous u spittin on a much higher level complex punches best line is the calendar line....like the dick blood one too...those are ur better ones...ok multies n flow...but punches win this