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Shadows edge 04-22-04 01:30 PM

Shadows edge vs J_RIP27
 
Alright.. no crew votes, no bs, no hate, no d/r

You spit first for challenging me, spit however long you want.

DeaDly RhymeZ 01 04-22-04 10:25 PM

yo Shadows Edge hahaha this no prob i Riped J_Rip i SLaughter him lol na j/pyo J_rip when he gets hot Ummm. i dont even wanna say whoa lol i wanna see dis dis about to Go DOWN

Shadows edge 04-22-04 10:42 PM

well.. i think this herb is a no show. uppin for rip ^^

J_RIP27 04-22-04 11:30 PM

i'm here bitch
 
yo suck a dick bitch

:laugh2:


I lead an expedition in vision and competition
In a prison when deliverin witherin rhyme litterin
Givin and never endeavoring ever clever however
bringin it whether together or on solo feathers
Sicker than liquor and medicine burnin and blisterin
Leave your lights flickering
quicker than strobes you're trippin in
The high appointed, style anointed with ill delivery ointment with the lyrical leaders your crew aint shit
On point with this like jointed presidential appointments
Flashin full fashionable rational lyrical passion
Glow bashin skulls burnin trash flows and watch ash grow to make your shadow edge dull
Belittling with little men livin in oblivion
Try batteling imaginin that they're hyper than Ritalin
Simply deranged brain exchanged pain for gain
Rearrange your frame to strange plain pattern with slain it's really ashame
Bigger badder and better than all of your gold and cheddar fucker your crew you know were better
When spreadin wing like medicine
Men with ancient tribal lettering! bitch nigga now what

Shadows edge 04-23-04 12:00 AM

Aight.. just got out of the shower.. checking in..

Shadows edge 04-23-04 12:22 AM

Alright.. yo check it:

Wait, let me the get this straight.. you think you great?
That cat in your sig is twice the rapper...
... n half the weight
Ironic name, got 26 posts and won't get to 27
Nah.. 27 the number of years you worked for 7-11
Or maybe its just combined IQ of your entire crew
Or is it just that I merked the first 26 versions of you?
No matter... moving on, I got dreams to shatter
Dawg you thing that verse fucking flatters?
Stringing rhymes together, any herb can do that
Like: "One swing of the bat got this cat flat on the mat
End this combat - one rat of my gat got your brains splat"
Fuck tit for tat, each line I drop is your whole verse spat
There's a reason your crew won't let you rep them
It's like going into a battle with a toothpick for a weapon
Today, your crew say "Yo shadow bout to get his ass whipped"
But tomorrow they go "Here lies J.. R. I. P."

Just a little something, something.

J_RIP27 04-23-04 12:46 AM

one shot to your dome
 
Fuck alarm clocks, battle me you'll start wakin up
I slice you with your rhyme book and write verses on your paper cuts
With alcohol pads, excuses you'll be makin up
Sound dumb like Outkast breakin up
Last time you shot somebody, you had a camera
I'm J_RIP author of stamina
Loungin on the walls you'll end up like Humpty Dumpty
With your shell cracked, scrambled, in search of something
I'm a narcisist, I bomb quick, your full of shit like sausages, pardon this
I alone turn crews into the Partridge kids
I love games I play you like bragin right cartridges
Y'all against me is dragons versus ostriches
Totally proposturous, like abortions, i kill stupid kids before they act up
Make a new suit flip call it a black tux
You cracked up like baseheads in a space ship
Playin in the matrix, the only thing i lose is my patience
I smack the shit out you dull edge with my rhymes i'm out bitch

Shadows edge 04-23-04 12:54 AM

:laugh:

nt, herb, but both of your fucking verses combined is still less than one of my punches.

J_RIP27 04-23-04 01:09 AM

quit hating and get some one to fucking vote damn

CyberneticTiger 04-23-04 03:10 AM

FF vs LL ewwwwwwwwwwww who is gonna win ..... i dont know i think someone is gonna have to vote ...

Shadows edge 04-23-04 11:42 AM

Uppin for some fucking votes... fuck the herb battles... vote on this.

iamthatdude87 04-23-04 01:17 PM

yo this battle wass hell a good both had evrything so my vote goes down like this....the vote goes to j rip....come on shadow how are u gonna let him spit more than u dawg u could of did a lot better if u wrote more so thats how my vote is drop an honest vote on ecko vs shady1132 the link is down there\/

Shadows edge 04-23-04 01:55 PM

^^ ok fuck this, I'm not battleing in front lines anymore. Not if that verse gets a vote. Period, I'm done.

J_RIP27 04-23-04 02:02 PM

nigga your a hater man just chill you win some you lose some be humble and quit being a bitch

Shadows edge 04-23-04 02:03 PM

Dawg, you spit two verses and neither was any fucking good, you're lucky you're not DQ'ed.

J_RIP27 04-23-04 02:09 PM

get the fuck outta here your just mad cause you were talking all that shit and i brought it too you and you thought i was going to get ko'd but you have a big suprise cause i'm taking this so cry me a river build and bridge and get over it fucker

iamthatdude87 04-23-04 02:20 PM

i voted on this battle return the favor and drop an honest vote between me and shady
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120337

Shadows edge 04-23-04 03:59 PM

uppin ^^ ... can i get some non herb votes? ^^ ...

Uknowhat22 04-23-04 04:26 PM

yo i think j rip won that one he spit more and his shit was kinda real shadow did good but j rip did a lil better

Shadows edge 04-23-04 08:17 PM

Uppin.. even though I've almost given up on any non-herb votes.. ^

FlowIntelligent. 04-24-04 02:04 AM

im just gonna go on his j's first verse that shit was ill multis were fuckin crazy feelin this shyt nice drop....shadows edge u came nice but i know u better than that u had some really good punches but the last couple bars i didnt feel hit hard enough to take this...j rip u need to work on your structure sometimes if your structure is off that could make u lose the battle...but u spit some nice bars with madd wordplay and multies and as i have said before i am a lover of multies and your verse was packed with them.....shadow had some good multies too punches as well and structure was perfect and the flow but overall j rip got this by just a lil

vote: j_rip

Da Vinci 04-24-04 02:20 AM

This one goes to Shadow for sure. J had flow, and muliti's but that is it. Not really any punches, especially not that stood out for sure. Nice style but I have to agree, multi aren't easy but after the first five lines we knew you were capable when ya read between the lines ya can kinda see where ya were commin at him.

Da Vinci 04-24-04 02:20 AM

Hey can you guys vote on mine http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120460 like I voted on yours? favour 4 a favour

Shadows edge 04-24-04 02:26 AM

EVERYONE WHO VOTES FOR J_RIP:

Thanks to you, I am no longer battleing in this forum. I don't even care if he wins this battle, it just doesn't matter when people start fucking voting as if multis matter. Guess what? They don't. THis is a fucking battle, not a cypher competition, get it in your fucking heads. You are voting on who had better punches, and maybe a bit for flow, mutlis and vocab. But if those count anything more than 20% of your vote combined, you are an herb voter, and I would recommend you stop voting until you learn what the hell a battle is.

J_RIP27 04-24-04 02:29 AM

nigg a is there any more bitching you can do good i hope you leave be a pussy and cry just cause you got beat don't mean shit lol

Shadows edge 04-24-04 02:34 AM

I didn't get beat, I got outvoted. You see, there is a worlds of difference.. well you don't see, but anyone with talent would. Your verse had two punches, and I believe one of them was "your crew is shit." oh please, let me bow to your talent. :laugh:

J_RIP27 04-24-04 03:02 AM

yes bow down and cry you little bitch your a sore loser you knwo my flow was way better than yours your just pissed cause you was talking all that shit and got delt with hahah

Shadows edge 04-24-04 03:38 AM

Your "flow" was absolutely atrocious, your bars were totally uneven length and some had lines with 3-4 words matched with a line with 10 words. You couldn't write a fucking song to flow that too.

lyrical distruction 04-24-04 06:29 AM

What do i do in these situations, do i live up to everyones expectations, should react to this big problems, what do i do in these situations.

I feel like nothings ever changing in my life i an't got a girl or anything good going for my life, my lyrics will just throw u into hysterics i got a fine mind to wine u up like a clock till your broken down nealing on the ground. You never heard of an iller mc ever problbly explains that i do take pills that kill me inside and make my mind hullisinate and tempt fate everytime. I feel like my head has been hit by a million hammers crushing my skull till it's desintergrated and gone. All i see is anger painful tears and upset,always circling in the same direction but acually never going anywhere. I hate growing up and i hate the thought of dieing, but sometimes don't see what's the point of living and careing. im only seixteen but learned i an't keen on life the way its been treating me feels like ive been beaten to death takeing my spirit and tawn away and never to be seen again. I lost friends from my past that i miss and new people in my life who i simply detest now im gonna do a runna and leave my past behind me and pull my pants down forget about the past and make everyone kiss my ass.

Shadows edge 04-24-04 02:00 PM

wtf is that ^^ ? seriuosly.... if your not going to vote, dont post.

DeaDly RhymeZ 01 04-24-04 02:59 PM

yo u kno i actually Ripped J_Rip27 its just csome 1 got me banned i won 5-0 but when u get banned it goes to automatic loss well still i dont think its a possibilty for him to win a nother way then somewun getin Disqualifyed

Shadows edge 04-24-04 03:02 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Mixxed MC 24
yo u kno i actually Ripped J_Rip27 its just csome 1 got me banned i won 5-0 but when u get banned it goes to automatic loss well still i dont think its a possibilty for him to win a nother way then somewun getin Disqualifyed


again, dont post in here if you are not dropping a vote or feedback.

DeaDly RhymeZ 01 04-24-04 03:04 PM

yo when i get nough posts imma vote but dogg no joke U NEED PUNCHES learn how to do em j_rip if a battle went down to punches u'd get ya ass beat fa rel doggy Shawdows edge on da other hand whiped ass in Punches so he got dat wun off FLashy yao mien iight well im out tryin ta get enough posts to vot on dis shit 1

L.I. 04-24-04 03:09 PM

hahahha wow..........BREAKDOWN
Punches - shadows....JRIP DIDNT EVEN HAVE ANY
Flow - tie...both had good flow
Multi's - jrip....obvious reasoning
Personals - shadows....jrip didnt have ne
Enjoyment - shadows...he actually had a battle verse
Vote - shadows...jrip u cant win a battle without punches...u jus flowed and had multis and rhymed werds.....shadows got this easily....

Shadows edge 04-24-04 04:38 PM

Aight... thanks for an actual vote... uppin ...

Shadows edge 04-24-04 08:03 PM

Upping...

The M.O.B. 04-24-04 08:38 PM

This shit is what's wrong with Front Lines...Shadow's Edge hands motha fuckin down. Sick personals (and funny as hell), J-Rip's rhymes was tight but coulda been said anywhere and had nothin to do Shadow's Edge. Be on yo opponent dog, this aint a forum for ya to spew about yo self...battles is battles not self-glorification...

Shadows edge 04-24-04 08:54 PM

Thanks man... truth right there..

CG 04-24-04 09:20 PM

J rip took it by storm nah mean had the right skillz and all Shadow i realy wasnt feel the way u spit cuz..... Viva los hispanos Vote goes to Jrip

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

Shadows edge 04-24-04 11:32 PM

Uppin for some actual votes...


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