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Quickpunch VS GKillaz05
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make it 10-20 lines lol sorry but im all about finishin good....but this is my check in...its 5:30 right now IN ATL so u have 20 minutes 2 drop...i'll drop 10-15 mins after u..pce
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yo if u wanna talk bout wht we were talkin bout add me to ur msn atlsrepo4life@hotmail.com we can talk more bout it...pce
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Your 'punches' are so 'quick' thats why they dont hurt...
Im like this guys puppet master, like he's Ernie and Burt... Im leavin ya in the dirt, hes so scared he's speech-less ... You be acting like a bitch like ya wearing a peach-dress... Got ya stressed cuz I smoke herbs like every single day... Got the munchies from smokin' you gotta go to a buffet... This guy wishes he was tough but reppin 'A'll 'T'he 'L'osers... (south ATL) makin the whackest noob look good your the worst user... Killah bwoy murdered you then I went and killed the Killah... Got quick so scared his blood turns cold like Im the Chillah... Im the thriller you could be 2pac and wouldnt even be tight... Im still being polite, Im just waitin for a spark so I can egnite... Alright here it comes Im on fire...your done so say goodnight... This guys like a bitch so change ya name to Quick-Whore-Punch... Ima win No way Ima lose to a faggot who ate a Dick-For-Lunch... Sorry if it took to long some guy came to my door... |
good shit dawg lets see what dude brings i'll vote when ya'll done
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iight thx... lets see what ya got punch... iiight?....
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ight well he mite of won...did the best i could...so here it is
U’ll never make it to the top, so stop wasting time and posting only way u’ll make it to the top is if u and the end started dating it looks like you in pain or thinking hard on the spot if I placed ur brain in ur hands u still couldn’t grasp a thought ur rhymes are like sex that's unprotected, it’ll leave u infected I'll drop punch lines that you wait for but are still unexpected Your battles probably get slept on cause ur shit isn’t worth reading Didn't believe you were as whack as people said But seeing is believing Here we go, kid you make me sick like Tap water from Mexico God turned water to wine but could never get ur Text to Flow this battle will leave u covered in hives so u should jus bee-out cause i'll leave u covered in gore but u couldn't win in a recount i got u itching so much its like im sending lice through ur back u only get confident when u masturbate, u think u nice when u whack ur money's my slut and ur talent is ur money, whored ur wealth I’m like a disease I spread easily and watch u beg pleasey as u loose ur stealth you wouldn't be ill if i hurled your style, son im’a smoke u like black and mild And on this site, starting with u im knocking all the tops off like girls gone wild |
heres wht this punch line means-"this battle will leave u covered in hives so u should jus bee-out
cause i'll leave u covered in gore but u couldn't win in a recount" GORE IS AL GORE FROM THE PRESIDNCY THING...HE DIDNT WIN SO IT'S PRETTY EXPLANITORY..IF U DONT GET IT UR RETARDED...THATS ALL I GOTTA SAY....lol pce |
iight, niice spit man... lets get these votes a flowin like the women in hawaii.. lol
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holy shit, lol. this one ain't THAT easy, but i knew who to choose quick.
best lines from G - "Your 'punches' are so 'quick' thats why they dont hurt... Im like this guys puppet master, like he's Ernie and Burt..." (the first line of that shoulda been the punch, but it's still pretty good) once again- the first line sounds like a punch "This guy wishes he was tough but reppin 'A'll 'T'he 'L'osers... (south ATL) makin the whackest noob look good your the worst user..." punch's best- "it looks like you in pain or thinking hard on the spot if I placed ur brain in ur hands u still couldn’t grasp a thought ur rhymes are like sex that's unprotected, it’ll leave u infected I'll drop punch lines that you wait for but are still unexpected Your battles probably get slept on cause ur shit isn’t worth reading Didn't believe you were as whack as people said But seeing is believing Here we go, kid you make me sick like Tap water from Mexico God turned water to wine but could never get ur Text to Flow" that shit was MAD ill, it surprised me when it cam outta no where - like, the beginning wasn't good, the end was ok, but the middle, i was all, "ohhhhh", just like in a verbal battle. vote- quickpunch (good one bro) |
iight man, stait vote.. keep em comin peeps....
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ight thanks for the honest votes....keep hittin this up...i for one say this was a very close battle...so keep comin with the votes..HONEST VOTES ONLY
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close but i giv ma vote gkillaz.just,soz quickpunch u right it was close.both gud flows
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
Good battle y'all...Gkilla nice opener, good shit kinda play'd but you used right, good punches, nice flow, good structure, good vocab, should had some personals in there though
Quick...nice verse but ya opener an closer was really weak, u had all ya good punches in the middle, an I think u goota have at least a good opener or vice versa to win a bttle, but u flowed good, structure need to be tightened up a bit, if u only had a good opener or closer I would have gave it to you, much respect though Vote: GKilla |
yo man that other kats vote shouldnt count...didnt give a good explanation...thats kinda dick ridin....
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iight man, if you wanna argue about it then go for it.. whatever
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My Vote
Your 'punches' are so 'quick' thats why they dont hurt...
Im like this guys puppet master, like he's Ernie and Burt... Good Punch....nice solid opener....wit a good personal....8/10 Im leavin ya in the dirt, hes so scared he's speech-less ... You be acting like a bitch like ya wearing a peach-dress... Ok punch....good set up line tho....7/10 Got ya stressed cuz I smoke herbs like every single day... Got the munchies from smokin' you gotta go to a buffet... not that great...jus a bar...4/10 This guy wishes he was tough but reppin 'A'll 'T'he 'L'osers... (south ATL) makin the whackest noob look good your the worst user... good personal....punch was decent....8/10 Killah bwoy murdered you then I went and killed the Killah... Got quick so scared his blood turns cold like Im the Chillah... NICE....now thats a hot bar...10/10 Im the thriller you could be 2pac and wouldnt even be tight... Im still being polite, Im just waitin for a spark so I can egnite... Alright here it comes Im on fire...your done so say goodnight... Pretty nice...good multis....not really any punch tho....8/10 This guys like a bitch so change ya name to Quick-Whore-Punch... Ima win No way Ima lose to a faggot who ate a Dick-For-Lunch... HaHa....this had me laughin....tight closer....9/10 Okay...Verse Score....54/70....77% You had a great flow throughout ur whole verse.....nice punches and than sum decent punches.....couple hot personals.....overall verse was pretty well rounded and a good sustainment....vocab was nice....wordplay was good....u had a bar wit multis....good verse.... U’ll never make it to the top, so stop wasting time and posting only way u’ll make it to the top is if u and the end started dating Good set up line....but the punch wasnt awesome....nice flow....8/10 it looks like you in pain or thinking hard on the spot if I placed ur brain in ur hands u still couldn’t grasp a thought NICE NICE NICE....love metaphors....good meta right there...10/10 ur rhymes are like sex that's unprotected, it’ll leave u infected I'll drop punch lines that you wait for but are still unexpected Good wordplay and flow....good punch....9/10 Your battles probably get slept on cause ur shit isn’t worth reading Didn't believe you were as whack as people said But seeing is believing Nice flow....ok punch....nothin too special....7/10 Here we go, kid you make me sick like Tap water from Mexico God turned water to wine but could never get ur Text to Flow Hahaha...nice punch....10/10 this battle will leave u covered in hives so u should jus bee-out cause i'll leave u covered in gore but u couldn't win in a recount Ok punch....good set up line....6/10 i got u itching so much its like im sending lice through ur back u only get confident when u masturbate, u think u nice when u whack Ok....could use werk....6/10 ur money's my slut and ur talent is ur money, whored ur wealth I’m like a disease I spread easily and watch u beg pleasey as u loose ur stealth Ok multis but didnt feel ur punch.....5/10 you wouldn't be ill if i hurled your style, son im’a smoke u like black and mild And on this site, starting with u im knocking all the tops off like girls gone wild Nice closer...nice mutlis....ok set up line but could use werk....good closer....8/10 Okay verse score....69/90....77%.... You had a good flow....nice hard hitting punches....sustainment wasnt there towards the end.....good verse overall.....u had nice metaphors....no personals....nice multis....nice spit.... TIE....77 overall to 77 overall....so the tie breaker will be by a breakdown... Opener - G...better punch Flow - tie...both had hot flow Punches - G...he had more hard hitting punches Personals - G...he had personals Multi's - quick...better multi's Structure - tie...both had nice structure Wordplay - quick...he showed off better wordplay Metaphors - quick...had nice meta's Creativity - tie..both had nice creativity n expressed their minds Sustainment - G...obvious Closer - G...better punch Enjoyment - tie...liked both Tally's up as.... G - 9 quick - 7 nice battle but G came out in the tie breaker breakdown....heated battle....please return the favor!!!!...... Vote - G http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119613 |
GKillaz had the flow/structure going there.Not that ur was bad, quickpunch , but GKillaz had it going perfect.
Gkillas-"This guys like a bitch so change ya name to Quick-Whore-Punch..." "Ima win No way Ima lose to a faggot who ate a Dick-For-Lunch..." ^these rhymes were mad good.Quick whore Punch rhming with Dick for lunch.U got some skillz there nigga.Not to mention your opener where you stated that stuf bout Erie&Bert,NICE SHYTH. "Im leavin ya in the dirt, hes so scared he's speech-less ..." "You be acting like a bitch like ya wearing a peach-dress... " ^^^But this line right here is whack.U gotta break away from this kinda stuff and use rhymes like u did in the opener and closer.But nevataless,Nice rap Gkillaz QuickPunch-Ur opener&closer was lacking when compared to GKillaz.But some lines that I like were- "ur rhymes are like sex that's unprotected, it’ll leave u infected" "God turned water to wine but could never get ur Text to Flow" "u only get confident when u masturbate, u think u nice when u whack" "Didn't believe you were as whack as people said But seeing is believing" ^^^^It's lines like these that will get u places. vote-QuickPunch-U won on the skin of ur teeth,but next time ,make sure u keep lines like the same lenght and work on opener&closer.Opener&Closer might not be as important as flownpunches,but it can affect the outcome of a battle. |
Gkilla I just couldn't get in to your flow
Quickpunch started off slow but at about the six bar start spit some hard shit and didn't stop vote quickpunch Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
thx for the vote man, keep em comin peeps!!!!
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itte gkillaz had dis one cause his flow was hott
his structure stayed on balance he made sum nice punches that created a hott battle\ his vocab was good an u could understand it quickpunch tight but didn't come to strong punches were about even wit gkill flow was alil elevated but not enough vocab was tha best in dis battle\ but my vote goes to v/gkillaz |
iight thx man, I need one more vote peopless... keep em comin!
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Okay, I'ma be honest. Both had good flow and good punches. It's a tough battle, but quickpunch gets it. G, liked the opener. It flowed well, the structure was there but you could have hit harder.
Got ya stressed cuz I smoke herbs like every single day... Got the munchies from smokin' you gotta go to a buffet... ^^^ Doesn't really say anything to quick. Filler. makin the whackest noob look good your the worst user... ^^^^ Liked that. Good ending too, but overall it didn't hit too hard. Quick, you flowed real good. I wasn't too sure about the ending, but overall you had hard punches and good rhymes. I liked your style. it looks like you in pain or thinking hard on the spot if I placed ur brain in ur hands u still couldn’t grasp a thought ^^^ Yes. Your battles probably get slept on cause ur shit isn’t worth reading Didn't believe you were as whack as people said But seeing is believing ^^^^ Good punch. Gettin' personal. Vote=Quick |
thanks man...keep those votes comin...very close battle.....good luck G...pce
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ok here it is.
punches:G opener:G closer:Quick personals:G vote: Gkilla that is how the cookie crumbles Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
alright,my vote got disqualified for not a proper explanation,and wont let me vote again,but like i said i give it gkillaz,and quickpunch dont give me this shit about dick ridin.both flows were tight i give ya that but i think gkillaz had the better puches and flow,and i like the the opener,punches i was deffinately feelin your flow but i can only give it to one of ya.
my vote:gkillaz but i dont know if its counted now,soz man! |
ok here it is.
break dow for G punches:7 opener:6 closer:3 personals:5 21/40 break dow for Quick punches:5 opener:4 closer:7 personals:3 19/40 vote: Gkilla that is how the cookie crumbles |
Here's how I saw it.........
Gkillaz came pretty good in this one. He had some decent wordplay and his punches were hittin hard, good job. Quickpunch had a shakey start with a opener that didn't even rhyme, I was thinkin it was over from there. But he quickly recovered and dropped a hot ass verse. My fav line was U think U nice when U Whack...... that shit had me rollin......... Vote - Quickpunch |
yo uppin this...come on ppl vote and explain ur votes really well...thanks
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Yo i`ma have to break this in two comments
Quickunch - you came with some twisted and some nice punches the sex lines but some of the words you said were not rhyming like thought and spot and posting an dating so that dissapointed me other than that you had good punches and some good connecting vocab but u kept saying blah at the end (thinks that dint make sense) altogether i think this was slitghttly above average Gkillaz - i liked your flow rhyming and scheme also you were making sense more thsn Quickpunch and your structure was tidy and you had good rhyming words i like the buffet rhyme Your 'punches' are so 'quick' thats why they dont hurt... Im like this guys puppet master, like he's Ernie and Burt... ^ lol at second line yo i`m gonn go with Gkillaz.. No beef , just voting fair. |
it looks like you in pain or thinking hard on the spot
if I placed ur brain in ur hands u still couldn’t grasp a thought That line killed it. G was alright but quick that shit was insane I vote quick Vote for mine honestly http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120615 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
Yo Can Some1 Hit This Up..pleeeeeeeeeeeeeease Explain Ur Votes..tired Of My Shit Gettin Called Back....
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this was a close killa u can hard wit structure and punches
punch u can hard wit flow and more punches and to me punches and flow is waat makes tha battle a win and quick punch can a bit harder but ye safe battle yo props to both of ya but ma vote is :quickpunch Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
Damn This Battle Has Been Called Back Like 50 Times...yo Ppl Lets Get An Honest Well Explained Vote.....please...so Spit It Up....pce
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ok this is how it is
flow=killa vocab=quick punches=killa rhymes=killa wordplay=killa vote=killa |
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