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SPuL v.s Tenken
aiight, here are the rules:
10-20 lines No d/r votes, or hate, or B/s No feedin' You spit first. I'll spit 30 mins, after yo verse. |
aight check it...
yo ima "split" ur eyes so you can "four-see" my victory~// call you "Miss Cleo" coz u "predict" ur own loss, fuck the irony~// this "nigga" actin like M.jackson, "askin for anyone unda 16"~// whoops! called u a "nigga" my bad "wigga", sorry bout that "Doug Christie"~// This kids like a "bean" without the "stalk"~// ur mom was on my "Jack & Golden eggs" befor you could walk~// WTF is a SPul anyway, it's not in da Dictionary~// i got u more "dumbfounded" than the bitch "Drew Carey"~// speakin of which, ur dictionary is as "thick" as Ally McBeal~// u got more chance of beating me than "M.J's" "court appeal"~// Whoa! now that i got this audiences attention~// i'd like to announce "Miss Cleos" intervention~// the "excitements" over, its time for the "young Crackafella"~// to spit lyrics that dont got more "chemistry" than Vinegar and Baking Soda~// |
^^ yo u bitchy ass nigga complaing i SPAT and u still bitching fuckA... HOLLA BACK
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man dont be cloggin up the thread if ya not gon vote...man juss chill both our verses are posted in MY thread so dont worry about it let the votes come in.........
anyways UPPIN 4 VOTEs |
yo, screw the PM that was sent to you, Tenken. I got some time so I'll drop one for you. It ain't my best, cuz I had to hurry, but uz I had to hurry. But I promised you a battle. So here it is:
My verses are so hot… they be tighter than Michael Jackon’s ass After he shoves all the dicks in it… from the 1st grade class Man, I should have passed. Your rhymes are all wack You be deliverin’ more shit, than a lil’ kid on e-lax It’s time for you to relax… and slo yourself down But you’ve already stopped, cuz my verse buried you in the ground You suck, so people frown… as you do yo pimp walkin’ I don’t need to say nothin’, cuz yo verse jus did the talkin’ You then get to doin’ stalkin’. And then you get to the bitin’ Jus like Mike Tyson to Hollyfield, but that ain’t considered fightin’ You will never be like lightin’, but you will disappear in a flash You’re more like sound… cuz you’re gonna finish last I will Kick yO ass fashos… and everybody knos I will roll yo ass up… jus like my fuckin’ dough If you’re wonderin’ where the personals are… don’t you wurry Jus kno that you’re getting yo first loss… all in a hurry aiight, uppin' for votes.also, Tenken, I won't be online for a LONG time, so you keep on uppin' it. PEACE |
dis was a great battle i liked both shits
tenken u had some hott shit i liked your flow and u dropped bombs on punches and added personals bestline-this "nigga" actin like M.jackson, "askin for anyone unda 16"~// whoops! called u a "nigga" my bad "wigga", sorry bout that "Doug Christie"~// i like dat cuz he like da kingz worsteline-none i liked yo whole verse spul another 1 dat was hott homie liked yo flow punches and personals bestline-My verses are so hot… they be tighter than Michael Jackon’s ass After he shoves all the dicks in it… from the 1st grade class nice start worsteline- none here nice drop tenken open-8/10 punches-9/10 persoanlas-9/10 consistant verse-9/10 flow-9/10 structure-9/10 close-9/10 overall-9.1/10 spul open-9/10 punches-9/10 persoanlas-9/10 consistant verse-10/10 flow-9/10 structure-9/10 close-9/10 overall-9.4/10 |
oh shit my badd winner goes 2 spul ......................
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uppin 4 votes.
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uppin 4 votes
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i dissagree with the chopper. I think this battle was one sided.
Tenken has a hella crackin verse. I like the Doug Christy line and M.J. lines Vocab:7/10 Flow:8/10 open:8/10 punches:9/10 persoanlas:9/10 consistant verse:9/10 structure:9/10 close:9/10 overall:9.7/10 SPUL your verse sounded pritty elementry my dear watson. I don't like your choseing of words(wack/e-lax,Foshos/knows/dough?????????) You could have done better. You to should have a rematch of this after your done, so you guys can put up better verses Vocab:5/10 Flow:7/10 open:8/10 punches:7/10 persoanlas:7/10 consistant verse:9/10 structure:9/10 close:7/10 overall:7/10 "Young craka~fella" lol Than is how the cookie crumbles |
ok check it
tenken opener was startin off sick and then you used a miss cleo punch an killed it good wordplay though try a different line behind that four see shit and the closer wasnt there either had good wordplay again just no punch in it and threw the rest of the verse was real inconsitent to me you used another miss cleo punch lol but you did have good wordplay just try workin on makin your punchs hit harder and more personals spul opener wasnt nothin stop with tha michael jackson punchs already use kobe bryant or somethin and the closer was decent coulda been better and threw the rest of the verse stayed some what conisistent decent punchs threw the verse again no punchs in your verse hit that hard but stayed bringin some kind of a punch so that gets my vote in this battle vote spul |
aiight, thanks for votin'. Uppin' for votes.
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uppin 4 votes
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look i got o give this to ten
TEN: you was good....i liked it..good opener..."four see" i love it.....but work on your structure dont like the way you put it in bars..buthat coo..just work on your meta4s and personals..evryone loves good personals..all in all7/10 spul: you was ok you had alot of lines..they kinsa bored me..but your good..i see you become someone good on this site....all in all 6/10 next time battle in elevated.. vote=TEN |
My verses are so hot… they be tighter than Michael Jackon’s ass
After he shoves all the dicks in it… from the 1st grade class ^^^^ WEAK PUNCH….BUT FUNNY…7 Man, I should have passed. Your rhymes are all wack You be deliverin’ more shit, than a lil’ kid on e-lax ^^^^^^^^ It’s time for you to relax… and slo yourself down But you’ve already stopped, cuz my verse buried you in the ground ^^^^^BASIC ,,, 6 You suck, so people frown… as you do yo pimp walkin’ I don’t need to say nothin’, cuz yo verse jus did the talkin’ ^^^^^^^WEAK……..6 You then get to doin’ stalkin’. And then you get to the bitin’ Jus like Mike Tyson to Hollyfield, but that ain’t considered fightin’ ^^^^^^^^WORK ON YO LINES…..6 You will never be like lightin’, but you will disappear in a flash You’re more like sound… cuz you’re gonna finish last ^^^^^^^^YOU LOST ME…….6 I will Kick yO ass fashos… and everybody knos I will roll yo ass up… jus like my fuckin’ dough ^^^^^WEAK WORDPLAY…..6 If you’re wonderin’ where the personals are… don’t you wurry Jus kno that you’re getting yo first loss… all in a hurry ^^^^^^WTF……………5 HOW R U 11-2..... ELEVATE...... NOT A HATE VOTE...... KEEPING IT REAL... DO THE MATH....... |
TENKEN.......
YOUR VERSE WAS FUNNIER.. AND LYRICAL STRONGER.... yo ima "split" ur eyes so you can "four-see" my victory~// call you "Miss Cleo" coz u "predict" ur own loss, fuck the irony~// this "nigga" actin like M.jackson, "askin for anyone unda 16"~// whoops! called u a "nigga" my bad "wigga", sorry bout that "Doug Christie"~// This kids like a "bean" without the "stalk"~// ur mom was on my "Jack & Golden eggs" befor you could walk~// WTF is a SPul anyway, it's not in da Dictionary~// i got u more "dumbfounded" than the bitch "Drew Carey"~// speakin of which, ur dictionary is as "thick" as Ally McBeal~// u got more chance of beating me than "M.J's" "court appeal"~// Whoa! now that i got this audiences attention~// i'd like to announce "Miss Cleos" intervention~// the "excitements" over, its time for the "young Crackafella"~// to spit lyrics that dont got more "chemistry" than Vinegar and Baking Soda~// __________________ ^^^^NICE,...SHIT..... |
uppin 4 votes
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good verse spul u knocked him out with
good flows, rhymes and good structure Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
yea, Tenken I kno that Spiky's vote in unexplained. So if you wanna DQ, do as you must. Uppin' for votes anyways. 3-3
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spul aight, make ya lines shorter an use metaphors n shit like that. Enhanses the rhyme...
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
aww, come on, xplain the votes peeps. Thanks for atleast takin' the time to check this out. Tenken, if you want those 2 votes DQed, do what you want. Uppin' for more votes. 4-3 me
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i liked tenken shit better because his shit was more creative and he took a risk going all out and his punches made me laugh good battle though keep elevating
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aiight, thansk for votin' JOAT. Ok, tenken, you down for a rematch later on? If you are PM me. PEACE uppin' for vote
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hmmmmmm lmfao this is a tough one really dawg...i look and i think..
but heres my break down: tenken you had sick punches i like that michael jackson line that shit was jokez i was feelin' it but the doug christie line kilt it dawg...i wasnt really feelin' dat shit word.....best line : speakin of which, ur dictionary is as "thick" as Ally McBeal~// u got more chance of beating me than "M.J's" "court appeal"~// that was sick lmfao i give htis 31/50 SPUL: ya shit was koo...it was consistant and you had a good flow your opener was alright but it could of been hotter then after that shit heated up...you came harder then TENKEN and i could see you put more emotion into ur shit then he did best line : Man, I should have passed. Your rhymes are all wack You be deliverin’ more shit, than a lil’ kid on e-lax i gave this a 33/50 this was a fuckin' close battle mayn dayum |
Ok.....
Breakdown........ Opener -...tenken was both fillers...no real punch...same wit SPuL so neither... Punches - SPuL...he had more hard hitting punches....Tenken alot of ur ish as fillers.. Flow - tie...both had hot flow.. Wordplay - Tenken....jus had better wordplay... Personals - Tenken....SPuL stated himself that he didnt have any personals... Multi's - SPuL...he jus had some but tenken didnt have any... Closer - SPuL...he had a punch and Tenken's was wack... Vote - SPuL because of more hard hitting punches....punches win battles....there ya go simple as that..... |
complexty-Tenken your was harder to read
Harder punches-Spul nice hard punches good peronsals Vocab-Spul nice vocab Personals-Nice personals(spul) Sturcture-Both had good structure Understandable-Soukl was easy to read then Tenken Tenekn you stuff was hot...Best line was like choppa city said...Very hott.. Spul didnt have a line that was that hott but he did have more hot lines than ya Nice punches spul... tenken structure-8/10 hard punches-7/10 complexity-9/10 very hard to read understandable-6/10 structure-8/10 hard punches-9/10 complexity-4/10 good thing dont worry.. understandbale-10/10 v/Spul returnt he favor please against Born2kill link-http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121447 |
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