v-t-va2 vs The one
 

no d.r votes
no crew votes (lyrical leaders none)
10-16 linz
an u spit 1st

violation-to-va2 = Original-weed123 = spitfire-+. All banned for cheating
-strobe

u must checkin an spit within 34 mins ahahahhahahahahhahah

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sorry but violations in violation and im about to violate his nation
cuz im patiently waiting for this faggot to put me in the siatuation where im faced to post a new creation and leave this nigga body bagged up waiting for creamation
only 15 but real thorough thought you herd im not b2k but you will get served
i could stop right there and still pull off a win and if this faggot runs his mouht im gonna pull off his skin
trying to battle the one you better be in good health cuz you the type to squat and piss when you relifing ya self(calling you a girl)
when we r through with this battle you wont be breathing ya self
and if we ever meet in person you gonna be needing a cell
to call 911 let em know whats going down let them know the is a n ew king and he is waiting to be crowned if you think you could beat me you r in for rude awakeing cuz you being the victor dont add up like vegetariens and bacon

murk time


you fuck with me and my bolck me and my boy will staite rock ya spot
we aint the type niggas to play around or joke we the type niggas to leave a foot down ya throat

sorry i took so long my sister had to use the phone


good luck kid

yo niice spit man, hit this battle up http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120303 and when the other guy gets done I'll hit this up.. right away.. thx man!

itte hurr u go talking shyte all off topic,imma sheld yah word like yah mommas titties nuttin will stop it\\
u straight up not even on track,yo rhymes are 4 da clueless an da rest are pure wack\\
yo insults suppose to hurt they didn't work,when i spit dez verses itta be tyme 4 you to merk\\
i jabb u one time u hit da ground,dis isn't play or else u"ll be see in stars all around\\(knocced out)
kidds like u piss me off worser than pest,i should shoot yah rhymes up an crimson yo best\\
its gonna be rain playin out lyrics,so much rain flood of flows da word will hear it\\
yo vocabulary stinks i could read a word,that shyte was horrible shyte not anythang right not a single verb\\
hhah i guess u just meetin me well we introduced,imma grabb yah hand brake yah arm leave da rest 4 my dogg duce\\
911 will neva come to my crib,they goto yah house an search 4 yah body in da back yard behind the swing set well hid\\
u a hidden verse in my rhyme book,u study my toxic lyrics so strong it was just to much u shook\\
dis over i think u over cooked,i take u out ill i beat ur ass u manly-whooped\\
one more thang u blue ballz,u so scared on da key board u pissin on yah self worser than niagara fallz,

u should have muti-text shyte could have had allot more details

im waiting
i know i did not have you waiting that long c-mon dawg

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how fricking does it take for people to vote i aint got all night

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v-t-va2-Some multi's were good,but some also felt forced in.Neva force to put multi's in.

u straight up not even on track,yo rhymes are 4 da clueless an da rest are pure wack\\
^This is a example off one of the bad multi's used.If u take out the "U straight up not even on track",the line woyud have been better.They are a lot more,but I can't state it all here.

u a hidden verse in my rhyme book,u study my toxic lyrics so strong it was just to much u shook\\
^this is a example of a good multi.,but it's a shame that most of the other's are not like this.

Nothing wrong wit using multi's,but some of ur's messed ur lines.Then the punches didn't turn out so good as it could have been.Multi's are nice,but only when used right.Build up ur skillz and then used multi's.I wouldn't make a big deal out of using multi's wrong,but it's just that it messed up ur lines and caused ur punches to lose their shine.


The One-terible flow/structure.Look at 2nd line.The 2nd line,was so long,but then the others turned out short.That something u can't do.
"only 15 but real thorough thought you herd im not b2k but you will get served "
^ this line is ghyey.


"to call 911 let em know whats going down let them know the is a n ew king and he is waiting to be crowned if you think you could beat me you r in for rude awakeing cuz "
"you being the victor dont add up like vegetariens and bacon"
^Nice punch line.I loved it.But the 1st. line is so long while the other is so short.

Ur punches were nothing special,but better than ur oppenent's.I also noticed that u used multi's.They were not special,but didn't affect the other punches,

Vote-The ONE

i disagree
v-t-va2
punches 10\10
flow 8\10
stru 7\10
voc 9\10
ovall 8\10

one
stru 7\10
flow 7\10
vocab 9\10
punch 8\10
ovall 7\10
v/v-t-va2
betta flow punches an structure it was hott couldn't understand da otha one
punc

damn phonnnes----itte thanx ill return da favor to all does who vote uppiiiin dem

aight close battle right here.... both verses werent to good but the one your rhymes are played your first lines everything ation try to mix shit up a lil bit Violation to Va if your the original ive seen better from you yo return da favor

VA takes this

itte thanx keep"Em coming uppin dem votes ill return da honset favor

good battle ya'll....

structure-v-t-va2...the one i couldn't really understand where ya bars stoped at
punchlines-v-t-va2
multi's-v-t-va2
personals-the one he had like wun
enjoyed-v-t-va2....he had da betta battle verse all around and he had alot of multi's so dat made it hotter nahmean...the one ya shit was good u gota fix ya structure a lil bit then you'll be good

my vote- v t va2...

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120324
^^^there go my battle rite there can ya'll return da favor

itte thanx ill return da honest favor ittte uppin dem vote

Yo Whats Up// Yo The One Had Dis Good Flowz And Nice Punchlines Dog I Liked Yo Shit//


V-t-a Work On Yo Punchlines Homie// U Had Some Good Ones// But U Wasent Hittin Hard Enough//nice Flowz//and Nic Vocab


Vote=the One

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dis was really a sloppy battle
va2 u came wit some alright shit some tite punches and sum tite vocab
the one yo strucutre was fucked up u had some ite shit but yo structure was fucked up

the one
bestline-only 15 but real thorough thought you herd im not b2k but you will get served

^^ ite line

worsteline-i could stop right there and still pull off a win and if this faggot runs his mouht im gonna pull off his skin


wack^^^

v2

bestline-yo insults suppose to hurt they didn't work,when i spit dez verses itta be tyme 4 you to merk\\

^^ ok

worsteline-its gonna be rain playin out lyrics,so much rain flood of flows da word will hear it\


one-

open-7/10
punches-7/10
personals-7/10
structure-6/10
vocab-7/10
flow-7/10
close-8/10
overall-7.2/10

v2-
open-8//10
punches-7/10
personals-8.2/10
structure-8.7/10
vocab-8/10
flow-8.1/10
close-8/10
overall-8.1/10

winner-v2

itte let me vote
ok
va2
it was hott as hell i agree wit choppa about your structure but nice drop tho
pun 9/10
flow 8/10
str 7/10
voc 9/10
ovall 9/10

ok the one yurr was itte but not all dat good drop to u to
the one
punc 8/10
flow 7/10
stru 8/10
voc 9/10
ovall 8/10
good battle
v/va2