DisasterPeice420 Vs. LostChild
 

Checkin in and just to let people know what the stakes are if She beats me I have to leave this site

So I betta come with my A game

Squad Up

A'right' Get It Heated' - - - You Have 20Min To Drop

On the Hood if she beat me im leaving
But when I beat her she gone be mad like when her pussy be bleeding
Look bitch I ain't gone be nice when it comes to my life
I seen yo pictures on my block you couldn't even get fucked twice
You just anotha ho that got a little flow
Only mic you holdin is my dick when you deep throat
To me you ain't nothing but a wanna be eve
My flow a put you in a familiar place, DOWN ON YOUR KNEES
I know thugs in my hood that a make you reach for yo feet
DisataterPiece, this dick a put you to sleep
Squad up, LostChild, It get no sicker
If you don't make it in the rap game, YOU COULD BE A STRIPPER
Or a bustdown slut, so girl open up
Only good thing out yo mouth, IS WHEN YOU SPITTIN OUT NUT

:shoot: :shoot: :shoot: :shoot: :shoot:

A'right Playa Fair Verse!!!! - - - Checckity Checck .... - Checkin In

Checckity Checck

Introduction:
I Aint Got To Be Thick To Take A Bitch Like You
Plus I Got Gats That Go Click Before They Go Boom - Lol

Body:
Your Sealing Your Doom By Perpetrating This Rap
You Keep Yappin Your Fat Lips Without Sayin Crap
Talking Bout I Stole Your Style, When Your Raps Are Flat
If I Stole Something That Worthless I'd Probably Give It Back
You Fell Into My Trap When You Called Reinforcements
Your Friends Are About As Qualified As My Doorman
You Visited The Rap Store And Probably Baught Your Lyrics
I Might Be White Like A Ghost, I'll Send You To Holy Spirits
Call Mommy Deares And Tell Her Some Cracker
White Bread Mutha-Fucker Gigured Out That Your An Actor Not A Rappa
You Cant Compete With My Wealth Or The Way That I Get It
I Just Caught Another Case, But Got That Shit Aquitted
Survival Of The Fittest, That Why I Throw Down
You Talking Shit, Thats Why You Acting A Clown
Playing It Down Like You Black And Hard
But You Can't Even Rap You Fucking Retard
Im Insain In This And Your Some Carbon Copy MuthaFucka
Tradeing Off Raps Cause You Can't Think Of No Otha

Conclusion:
Butt Buddies & Brothers I Know What You Mean 'Under-Tha-Covers'
You Prolly One Of Them Broke Kids Hanging With Sally Struthers
Since I Know You Are Broke And I Aint Hatin
Take My Advice Ask Sally Struthers For A Rap Donation

Sorry Got Over - Excited lol

Good little shit

I don't know I think I gotcha

DiaseterPeice-"Playing It Down Like You Black And Hard"
"But You Can't Even Rap You Fucking Retard"
" Survival Of The Fittest, That Why I Throw Down"
" You Talking Shit, Thats Why You Acting A Clown"
^it's lines like these that u gotta stop using.But don't worry,it didn't affect ur rap as a whole.U had some really nice punches,good opener,and a somewaht good closer.

LostChild-You had some OK punches,but not up-par to DisasterPeice.But u didn't get creative.It seemed like u mainly dropped on her for being a girl and those lines were not as good.Nothing's wrong wit u dropping on her being a girl,but most of tose lines were not creative or original enough.

Squad up, LostChild, It get no sicker-9 sllyables
If you don't make it in the rap game, YOU COULD BE A STRIPPER-15 sllyables
On the Hood if she beat me im leaving-10 sllyables
But when I beat her she gone be mad like when her pussy be bleeding-17 sllyables

See,that was also a big problem.You can't just go from 10-17 or 9-15 sllyables.That was a major problem that u had.Disatster had this problem too,but not as bad as u.Keep lines the about the same #of sllyables.

Vote-DisasterPiece

DAMNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN! SAY WHAT! SAY WHAT DIS IS DA BATTLE RIGHT HURRR! FIGHT FO YO LIFE! DA STATUS LIKE DIS


LC=On the Hood if she beat me im leaving
But when I beat her she gone be mad like when her pussy be bleeding// YO IT WAS BOMB ASS INTRO

LC=Look bitch I ain't gone be nice when it comes to my life
I seen yo pictures on my block you couldn't even get fucked twice// LOL DATS SOME BOMB PERSONAL SHIT!

LC=You just anotha ho that got a little flow
Only mic you holdin is my dick when you deep throat// PUNCHLINES 7/10



LC=To me you ain't nothing but a wanna be eve
My flow a put you in a familiar place, DOWN ON YOUR KNEES
I know thugs in my hood that a make you reach for yo feet
DisataterPiece, this dick a put you to sleep
Squad up, LostChild, It get no sicker
If you don't make it in the rap game, YOU COULD BE A STRIPPER// LOL KEEP PUNCHING NIGGA!


LC=Only good thing out yo mouth, IS WHEN YOU SPITTIN OUT NUT// DAT WAS AIGHT ENDING



YO DISASTER

DISASTER=I Aint Got To Be Thick To Take A Bitch Like You
Plus I Got Gats That Go Click Before They Go Boom - Lol BOMB AS INTRO

DISASTER=Your Sealing Your Doom By Perpetrating This Rap
You Keep Yappin Your Fat Lips Without Sayin Crap
Talking Bout I Stole Your Style, When Your Raps Are Flat
If I Stole Something That Worthless I'd Probably Give It Back// YO DID HE SAY ANYTHNG DAT U STOLE// OK NOTHIN SHUT DA FUCK UP



DISASTER=You Fell Into My Trap When You Called Reinforcements
Your Friends Are About As Qualified As My Doorman
You Visited The Rap Store And Probably Baught Your Lyrics
I Might Be White Like A Ghost, I'll Send You To Holy Spirits// PUNCHES 7/10


DISASTER=White Bread Mutha-Fucker Gigured Out That Your An Actor Not A Rappa
You Cant Compete With My Wealth Or The Way That I Get It
I Just Caught Another Case, But Got That Shit Aquitted// YO NICE PUNCHES 8/10



DA REST WAS SHITTY// BUT LOOK DA STATUS IS DAT LC HAD BOMB PUNCHES// NICE FLOWZ//WACK STRUTURE//


DISASTER=NICE PUNCHES BUT U START STRONG AND END SLO// U START STRONG STAY STRONG// BOMB AS PUNCHES// NICE FLOWZ// KILLA STRUTURE


MY VOTE GOES TOO=LC

Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. Crew vote removed - strobe

!! Daps.. Thanks For The Vote Good Looking Out!!! - - - Upppin 4 More Votes!! People!! C'Mon

Lmfao Shit You Should Be On My BlackList' ..!! I Never Did' .. Get Along The Best With You ToxicVerbs' ..!! So Don't Hold A Grudge On Me Mutha-Fucka' ..!!





Anyways... Uppppppin 4 Votes

wow this was good....

Lost Child-good punches...favorite one..Squad up, LostChild, It get no sicker
If you don't make it in the rap game, YOU COULD BE A STRIPPER
...u could have re-worded it to make it iller....ur structure was a lil off...not every line was exact...work on that...u picked the wrong time to battle disater...but if it was anyone else..u would have prolly won...

D-Talking Bout I Stole Your Style, When Your Raps Are Flat
If I Stole Something That Worthless I'd Probably Give It Back....that was my favorite punchline...was very personal...ur punches were good just not all that hott..and niggaz say ur the illest? LOOK AT THE PPL U BATTLE...not countin lost child...lol jk...ur meta's,flow and structure was all there....i just thought u could have come harder...

vote-D,nice opener,and ending...punches out did lost child's....honest vote..

1 to 1 damn girl Its close

I got to give it to you do you got skills

but I ain't trying to leave

Thanks For The Honest Vote QuiCckPunch' .. Good Looking Out!!!!! .. Appriciate It!!


Upppppppppppppppin 4 Votes ... People C'Mon

lost child won this battle i felt he had better punches.but u need to fix the syllable problem in your flowz.but it waz very close though i had to read each flow about two times each very close



vote:lost child

Thanks for the vote cuz

Damn disaster this the closest battle i ever had

Lmfao @ LostChild' .. It Is Is It' ....! Ah Ha...!! - - - Aiight'


Upppppppppppin 4 Votes Ya'll!!!!!!!!!!! Don't Sleep On This Shit!!

Yo Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Dis A Fuckin Close Ass Battle

yo d stop actin like u the illest here..u a bitch fo real....just shut the fuck up and accept that some niggaz spit hotta than u...i give u props fo bein a girl 2 hold it down..but u bein a bitch as girl...quit with it

i'll tell u what...i'm not giving this to LC cuz his shit's on the line, but the homie DID get it. not by much, but he did. me-i gues i'm oldfashioned, i love hearing a good punch line, which neither of ya'll had and big bombs to drop. just flowin. but yall both got down and props to LC for havin his life on it. DP, i honestly do'nt know how u got that battle record, unless they weren't freestyles, lol.
how it broke down-
DP's hot ish
"I Aint Got To Be Thick To Take A Bitch Like You
Plus I Got Gats That Go Click Before They Go Boom"-i liked this cuz it just sounds hardcore, lol.
"Your Sealing Your Doom By Perpetrating This Rap
You Keep Yappin Your Fat Lips Without Sayin Crap" this was pretty hot
but here-You Fell Into My Trap When You Called Reinforcements
Your Friends Are About As Qualified As My Doorman" i like that one
most of the rest is plain rhymes and disses, something called filler that i haven't seen refered to on RB yet, but that's what it is, just filler.

LC's hot shit-
"Look bitch I ain't gone be nice when it comes to my life
I seen yo pictures on my block you couldn't even get fucked twice"- i think u coulda turned the "i seen ur picture on my block" thing into a BOMBass punch, but it's still ok
"You just anotha ho that got a little flow
Only mic you holdin is my dick when you deep throat" this one was pretty tight
"To me you ain't nothing but a wanna be eve
My flow a put you in a familiar place, DOWN ON YOUR KNEES"
"Or a bustdown slut, so girl open up
Only good thing out yo mouth, IS WHEN YOU SPITTIN OUT NUT"
these two above were real dope, and those sealed the deal. DP threw down more lines the the max, and u less than it, and u still came out on top. but still bro, u shoulda threw another in. next time too, do'nt focus so much on that she's a girl, but a rapper and a girl. DP, props, maybe next time ya'll should just take longer.

vote-lostchild
PS-that one guy talking about syllables, iduno what he means, in beats, it's like a dance, and it's only interesting if moves around. not like some two step, over and over, but something that dances around on the beat, both had that shit. (then again i produce beats at home, so i have a library to choose from while i read these)

LostChild had a lot of good punches, but they were nearly all along the same lines. Yep, she's a she, but you gotta vary that shit up. Flow and structure were good. I liked your rhyme. The punchlines were fuckin' funny. Disaster, you came out swinging and hit good.

You Keep Yappin Your Fat Lips Without Sayin Crap
^^^
Liked that a lot.

Overall, I think Disaster gets it, although you were both close on all fronts.

Vote=disaster

this is a hot motha fuckin battle

my shit on the line can we get some more votes

itte im going 4 lost child because his voca was speaking to me,his structure was balanced an his flow came wit punches an dpiece did a great job as well but
v/ lost

return da favore thanx

Somebody End Dis Shit Close Dis Shit// Dis Is One Fuckin Close Battle

yo this is crazy ... for realz jihuoghuo ummmmmmmmmmmmm i dont know

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

Damn my rb carear on the line

can we get some more fucking votes

We still need more votes folks

yall niggas vote

Damn come on we still need some more fucking votes

lostchild=good, structure, punches, and had a little good flow the lined i liked the most was-But when I beat her she gone be mad like when her pussy be bleeding. That shit was funny
disater- she got the flow but she dont got the structure and punches she had some punches but they werent good enough

personnally- i think lost child won it was short but he put everything it takes to win
overall my vote is for lostchild


Squad Up

Wow very close ill explain well here
Punches-LC
Flow-Both
Personals-LC
Overall Verse-LC

wow it was good thougfht def not a blow out

Overall

DP=8/10
LC=8.5/10