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Mike12Ikeda vs. $$UPREME
you kno the rulez...no crew votes...let the best man win...you up, you the challenger peace...................
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Bitch.... If This Is What You Want.....this Is What You Get.... |
CAN HOOK A NIGGA WITH SOME VOTES I'LL RETURN A FAV
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120276 |
Like "condoms" In Gay-men Asses Your "pride Is Bout To Be "broken"*
Mike You Choke Without Voice, Like Instrumentals Leaving Him Unspoken* This Pussy Aint Straight, When He Looks At Men His "boner-lies"* Take Out His "organs" "spit Them And Give 'em To "doner-enterprise"* These Lines Are Gonna "hurt" Your Legs Making You Limp, Like Your Dick During Masturbation* Call Me A "devil" I'm Forcing Ya' To Watch Gay Strippers To Torture You Wit Ass-rotation* $$upreme Is Going To Snip His "wire" Leaving Him "disconnected" Like He Was A Phone-y!!!!!!* This Battle Is Done, Like A Hot Meal, Stick A Fork In It Homie* Mike Couldn't Put Me In A Cage Like A Slave, Cuz He Don't "own-me"* "$$upreme" Is Like A Judge, I'll Decide Wheter You Can Roam-free* |
Funny Ass Nigga!!!!!!!
Ever Since I Droped ... On Thursday.......... Your Went On Vacation... Or Something... Drop ....fuck... And No Pre-written.... Cuz You've Been Writing 4 ....3 Days |
no man....i was sick my bad but i will drop now...if you dont believe me check my profile and go to posts
check the last time i have posted..... and i will be honest to god this will be a freestyle in 30 minutes... nothing prewritten |
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You should be a judge cause I’ll be the one to testify that you should be the next-to-die//
You like a Drive-thru customer cause you “next-in-line” to get served//1 Tupac would be ashamed of this cat who claims to be “Supreme”, and he from Los Angeles// I publicly murder this emcee on RB like Eminem did to Canibus//2 I’ll spit on “this peasant” who thinks he thinks a “street legend”// You will never be a street emcee just be on the street-begging//3 I’m like Shaq posting up Brand cause we gotta miss-match, his fists-clutch// You got 627 posts, but it’s sad you suck this-much |
^^^^^lol
Weak, + 5bars.....that Was 4 ...... Wtf..... The Minimum On Here Is 10 Lines... But,i'll Take It.... |
cause i tried spitting in the time limit dumbass....fuck you....i kno it was weak
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get votes though.......................so you can close it
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Alright, $$upreme won't let me vote.. but it was a terrible battle anyway. Mike, you had one good punch - next in line to get served, an the rest was whack. $$upreme, you had good concepts for some of your punches, but executed all of them poorly.. not to mention you would say his dick is hard one line, then say it's soft the next, say he gay one line, say hes gonna get tortured by watching gay strippers the next... made no fucking sense.
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$upreme=
Like "condoms" In Gay-men Asses Your "pride Is Bout To Be "broken"* Mike You Choke Without Voice, Like Instrumentals Leaving Him Unspoken* (aight opener seen u do better 7/10) This Pussy Aint Straight, When He Looks At Men His "boner-lies"* Take Out His "organs" "spit Them And Give 'em To "doner-enterprise"* (this line mad me laugh good shit 8/10) These Lines Are Gonna "hurt" Your Legs Making You Limp, Like Your Dick During Masturbation* Call Me A "devil" I'm Forcing Ya' To Watch Gay Strippers To Torture You Wit Ass-rotation* (it was aight could of been elevated doe 7/10 $$upreme Is Going To Snip His "wire" Leaving Him "disconnected" Like He Was A Phone-y!!!!!!* This Battle Is Done, Like A Hot Meal, Stick A Fork In It Homie* (this line was aight but wasnt feeling it that much 6/10) Mike Couldn't Put Me In A Cage Like A Slave, Cuz He Don't "own-me"* "$$upreme" Is Like A Judge, I'll Decide Wheter You Can Roam-free* (i liked the ending pretty good 9/10) overall 37/50 so out of an A-F it was about a C u could of did better now on to mike |
Mike=
You should be a judge cause I’ll be the one to testify that you should be the next-to-die// You like a Drive-thru customer cause you “next-in-line” to get served//1 (aight pretty weak opener ill say 5/10) Tupac would be ashamed of this cat who claims to be “Supreme”, and he from Los Angeles// I publicly murder this emcee on RB like Eminem did to Canibus//2 (it was ok not great wasnt feelin it 5/10) I’ll spit on “this peasant” who thinks he thinks a “street legend”// You will never be a street emcee just be on the street-begging//3 (i think this was ur best line in ur verse but still could of been elevated 7/10) I’m like Shaq posting up Brand cause we gotta miss-match, his fists-clutch// You got 627 posts, but it’s sad you suck this-much (pretty decent ending ill say 7/10) 5th bar? 0/10 im adding this cause if $$upreme gon do 5 bars u should at least try to top him. overall 24/50 u could of elevated and did a lot better but it seepms u didnt even try out of an A-F imma go on ahead and give u in F $$upreme gets the vote |
well this was an ok battle i didnt really like supremes structure it was a lil off and his bars were stretched..good punches and wordplay nice vocab overall straight verse...mike didnt do anything really interesting but he did have a funny bar the one with the street legend...street beggin one i was feeling that this wasnt too good of a battle and im not gonna be like ecko and take 30 minutes to post a long ass explanation i think i explained enough lol...ecko ma boy tho but ya im givvin this to supreme
vote:$$supreme |
got much respect to flow holla back homie ^
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Yo i liked this battle...Supreme had some good stuff ditto with mike....
PROS - I liked hoke mike used a nice multi in his opener.(MIKE) I liked how Supreme had a good vocab and good punches(SUPREME) Mike had a good closer (MIKE) CONS - Mike's was only 4 lines Supreme had lines that were too long. Supreme has some confusing lines (Brush up on the english) Mike's was a little late though you could tell it was a keystyle Its a close battle... and im gonna have to vote for the rhyme i understood most VOTE - MIKE |
^^^^d/r..........
Yo,....learn How 2 Read'.... You Fucked Up My K.o.........damn'......lol.... I Wanted My 9th K.o......stop Dickriding!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
umm that wasn't dick riding man.... I voted how i saw it.and how could i be a dickrider if I voted on this battle first??... Thats just what I thought about the battle. Sorry I fucked up your 9th KO but thats just how I saw the battle... Nuff said...
Get the facts before u accuse man I voted on this battle before mike even looked at mine. Niuff Said.. |
Like "condoms" In Gay-men Asses Your "pride Is Bout To Be "broken"*
Mike You Choke Without Voice, Like Instrumentals Leaving Him Unspoken* -This was an alright opener I give it a 7 This Pussy Aint Straight, When He Looks At Men His "boner-lies"* Take Out His "organs" "spit Them And Give 'em To "doner-enterprise"* -Again, not a bad punch, didn't really have me laugh'n 6 These Lines Are Gonna "hurt" Your Legs Making You Limp, Like Your Dick During Masturbation* Call Me A "devil" I'm Forcing Ya' To Watch Gay Strippers To Torture You Wit Ass-rotation* -The second line was a good punch I give this one a 8 $$upreme Is Going To Snip His "wire" Leaving Him "disconnected" Like He Was A Phone-y!!!!!!* This Battle Is Done, Like A Hot Meal, Stick A Fork In It Homie* -This was the best line in the battle, I like this /\ clever i give it a 9 Mike Couldn't Put Me In A Cage Like A Slave, Cuz He Don't "own-me"* "$$upreme" Is Like A Judge, I'll Decide Wheter You Can Roam-free* -Good close I give it a 8 total = 38 You should be a judge cause I’ll be the one to testify that you should be the next-to-die// You like a Drive-thru customer cause you “next-in-line” to get served//1 -this was kinda contradictory but okay not bad-7 Tupac would be ashamed of this cat who claims to be “Supreme”, and he from Los Angeles// I publicly murder this emcee on RB like Eminem did to Canibus//2 The first line was wack, the second recovered some of it. -6 I’ll spit on “this peasant” who thinks he thinks a “street legend”// You will never be a street emcee just be on the street-begging//3 -Nice rhyme shcme okay punch- 7 I’m like Shaq posting up Brand cause we gotta miss-match, his fists-clutch// You got 627 posts, but it’s sad you suck this-much This is a real nice close seems like you were elivatin as the battle went on should have thrown more punches, and made it longer-8 Total- 28 , but this was shorter so naturally there will not be as many points, normally you take this into consideration but I think Supreme wins because he didn't have the filler punches near the beggining, good battle thought, had there been more punches it would have been a close one. Can ya return the favour gent's http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...15&page=3&pp=15 |
BREAKDOWN
Opener - $...he had a punch and flow...mike's didnt rhyme... Flow - $....stretched lines had mike's flow off... Punches - $...he had good punches...mike didnt come hard at all...the eminem canibus punch is played out... Multi's - tie...actually even category... Personals - mike...he had the closer thang wit the post count...but that was the only one... Closer - $...that was a hot closer fasho... Vote Talleys... $$UPREME - 5 Mike12Ikeda - 2 Vote - $$UPREME |
Thanxs............................................ ........
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yo supreme get one more battle so u can get this thigns closed...sry bout getting pissed at you before man......peace
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Uppin 4 Votes@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@
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Opener:supreme:i Thought This Was Gonna Be Easy Cuz Supreme Shit Was Nice As Fuck...but Mike Shit Was Hard Too But Still Supreme Killed That
Close:supreme Shit Was A Nice Ass Punch.....while Mikes Shit Was Just An Insult Personals:mike....cuz He Mentioned His Name And The Shit While Supreme Was Just Havin Disses That Could Be Aimed At Nebody Metas:supreme..nuff Said...mikes Were Just Funny Punches:supreme:same Reason For The One Above Multis: Vote:supreme |
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