Whiskey Vs. lone1
 

You got 24 hours to spit 10-15 lines.
Good luck, yo.
I'll spit in ten minutes while this shit is still fresh in my mind.

Ayo,

Your insipid cliches are destined for weak review.
All bets are in, kid, the odds are stacked against you.
I know you're slow, so I'll spit slacker 'till you get it.
How do you expect to win when you're shit's incoherent?
You wouldn't recognise a Beat if your name was Al Ginsberg.
From the "best minds of my generation" you're excluded.
Deluded, if you think that you're gonna be winnin' this.
You're not a rapper. Just an amature enthusiast.
You're all alone, lone1. I'm the fuckin' loan gunman.
My magic bullet is that you just don't got the know-how.
So watch now, as I cast you down fuckin' prostrate.
Rip that wasted tongue out and ram it right up to your prostate.


Gl. Pz.

I'm fundamentally the future of this site inevitably/So I will rip you from HEAD to SHREDS because you accepted this test from me//
Incredibly lone stands for leapin' on niggas effortlessly/
You stressin....see the future outcome has you losin' quite terribly//
I got the multi's out the way now...HOE WHAT'S UP????/You're like a verbal prostitute bitch...you blow and suck//
I'll fold you fuck...by using punchlines so I'll murder you quicker/You couldn't spit a sweet bar if youre weak ass choked on a Snickers//
You'll cry and you'll bicker...but face it bitch...your flow is basic/You couldn't even beat me if there was a glitch in the matrix//
My dicks here yo taste it...cause it seems that your'e a fan of this black cock/And don't be mad...you're just another disgrace to RapBlock//


12 lines...6 bars...votes please..peace

Uppin for votes...anybody who votes...I'll return the favor...

Yo Lone1 Had Dat Battle No Doubt// Yo Whiskey Work On Yo Punchlines O Ann Work On Yo Fuckin Spellin//

Lone1 Had Some Nice Punchlines Dis Aint No Good Battle Fo U Whiskey// Yo Da Way I C It// Its Ko



Vote=lone1

lone1=1

Whiskey=0

lone 1 vote...whiskey...none at the moment...keep votin...thanks..uppin...

Yo...keep this goin up...votes please peeps....the favor will be returned...peace.

Votes...

Come on now peeps...I said I would return the favor...I'm trying to get this battle over with so I can start another....greatly appreciated...peace.

Yo...hook up the votes please...I will return the favor once again...peace.

Alright, both yall came correct, nice.

Ya both had good punches, but I think Whisky had a few more that hit harder.
"I know you're slow, so I'll spit slacker 'till you get it.
How do you expect to win when you're shit's incoherent?"

As far as openers go, I'd say whisky had that too.

"Your insipid cliches are destined for weak review.
All bets are in, kid, the odds are stacked against you."
Like I said this was a close battle and I would expect it to be a close one.


Loneone


I'm fundamentally the future of this site inevitably/So I will rip you from HEAD to SHREDS because you accepted this test from me//
-this was kinda a weak opener,

Incredibly lone stands for leapin' on niggas effortlessly/
You stressin....see the future outcome has you losin' quite terribly//
-again here is another part where you could be thrown punches but you use this to talk yourself up, not a bad tecnique but when you do that you gotta go big or go home

I got the multi's out the way now...HOE WHAT'S UP????/You're like a verbal prostitute bitch...you blow and suck//
-nice punch

I'll fold you fuck...by using punchlines so I'll murder you quicker/You couldn't spit a sweet bar if youre weak ass choked on a Snickers//
-better punch

You'll cry and you'll bicker...but face it bitch...your flow is basic/You couldn't even beat me if there was a glitch in the matrix//
-okay punch

My dicks here yo taste it...cause it seems that your'e a fan of this black cock/And don't be mad...you're just another disgrace to RapBlock//

weak finsiher,

but alround not a bad battle.

Hit my shit, and return da fav
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120663
P.S I had no idea he was a such a herb when I battled him (i think its his first battle)

Word...it's quite tied at the moment need some more votes...peace.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121293

I was feeling lone's verse alot more.But u dissed urself saying that whisky sucked ur dick.flow was "meh" by both of you.But whisky,you had nice vocabulary,but the disses itself wasn't that good.And ur closer didn't flow good,casue u rhymed the same words.

Vote-Lone1

Okay....thanks for the votes....keep em coming...the favor will be returned....hopefully by both of us...peace.

Im ahve to give this to Lone idk who u r but try out for Da Army.He had better flwo and punches

Lone=6/10
whisky=5/10

Word...lets get this battle over with...uppin for votes..

YO VOTE ON THIS BATTLE ILL RETURN FAVOR IN THIS ONE ....PEACEhttp://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121582
TONYSELF VS DOPEDELIVERY

lone1 your verse was way bettee. you mutiples were good and your verse flowed.whiskey were you drinkin whiskey when you wrote that cuz if you think that was hott you must be tipsy. anyway lone1 nice verse you won b/c of better punche and multi's.

vote=lone1

lone got this no doubt...Structure was a bit poor to start but managed to pick it up and maintain Whiskey man u need to elevate coz u aint gonna be able to get away wit that performance all the time u need to bring more creativity into this u were basic at best and i werent feelin ur punches.

V/Lone