pictureperfect2 vs. D~Illar~1 !Da Onslaught!
 

yo bout 20 lines
blind spit
no bull shit votes
due in an hour or sooner

we both start keyin when u check in

ite this bitch signed off right when i pm'd him sayin i got it set up so let that coward prewrite and come as prepared as he can when he get back. i'll have mine up once i see dis bitch's been checked in and has his verse ready.

*smirk*
its called havin a life outside of a computer room...u herb...
i just got home so old ya panties..u seem keen 2 get ripped...
and wats this bullshit about me signing off wen u pm'd me :rolleyes:
dont kid ya self son...i seen wat u capable of trust me there aint no running from a herb in a dress behind a computer screen...
this is my
*chin check*
hav ya shit in by 2morrow wen i wake up..if not u ducking....coward..

I'll Paint u a Perfect Picture....
 

:shoot: ~{StArIn DoWn ThE BaRrElL}~ :shoot:

You wonder why i dont like u...its cuz i-respect-the-best...........
Asked if your the illest~
And right when u said yes, the needle started trippin on the lie-detector-test................

You claim to be ill but your wrong...and this fag wont admit-that/
Cuz homie ya bars amount to nothing..like anorexics with kit-kats/
Hittin ya fist on the ground in defeats the only time u get punches that landed/
I'm leavin u stranded~
if I took your skills with me..only way im leavin the battle empty handed/
You got determination..but ya shit is forced..like its constipation/
Get no admiration~
And its like lookin at japanese tests...cuz your facing term-in-asian/(termination)
your weak and indinial,phone the opperator, get your surguens number and dial/
cause when i finish with you bitch,you'll need a face lift to raise a smile/
if u dropped 1st id have to wait 6 months til the laughter-had-gone /
cos your so wack ya flunked nelly's rap school after-class-one /

:shoot: ~{LoCaTe ThE rEsT oF yA fAcE}~ :shoot:
Cuz you try write with my styles..in hopes peeps would mistake-u-for-me/
Deflectin-ya-flow, disrespectin-my-foe..bitch slap u like im neglectin-a-hoe/
i spit and rip shit to perfection,got u scared stiff like fear of erections/
if i ever ''hear ill'' stuff from u...wait hol up i prolly just go an "ear infection"/



*hands this herb his ass*
....next time u will think twice
....teach me a lesson :rolleyes:
Im expecting u 2 duck this.....

as soonas yall drop i'll vote. meanwhile fellas vote on this battle. the polls count but you must have explanations:http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=115437

:rolleyes: ...... yes u r a fucking pussy.....
at least front for your own Onslaught.....
.......dam u got more "bitch moves", than a female wrestling match...
front herb...

i got a life too bia, but u was one when i pm'd u, yo ass jus wanted to pre-write instead of have a hour spit... bill o'rhily factorin ass

Topics covering: so u clear on a few thangs…….
curb stomp- mouth on street curb then stomp on head so jaw is busted in half
confined to a cell of greatness- his signiture
“show u how we deal wit bitches who talk shit on this site.”- a pm I wrote him

only time I campare to the cops is wit the Rodney king beat down
cuz im manglin this kid wit a curb stomp makin his only credited street sound
Blaze thru your town like on a half a pound don’t care if its bitches like u or a crowd of cops around, spit so heated jus trust it, like a volcano I erupted,
burst threw this battle wit my fire lines from the ground to out da top of da mountain
and when I flow its like a fountain another bitch killed like u and still countin
each punch a pearl, battling a bitch nicely I only know how ta fuck a girl
…….so das wat chu get, a pile of shit, out your face cuz das what u jus spit.
But don’t trip…….
To Rb’s u new, I jus knew, u be comin wit elementary lines u stole from blues clues
stay at your level don’t get all dry mouthed tryin to spit at pictureperfect2’s
cuz the only time is when u dick ride your poll side grew
say u confined to a cell of greatness well u just made bail,
I know u hate this but your fate was taintet agreeing to battle me was a premeditated fail
u say u got beef wit me but this battle wouldn’t be equaling,
if I took out each of these…punches, flows, and personals, like I had u speak for me
but u had to expect it, call me muhamid ali, my flows float like a butterfly, punches sting like a bee, the threat of my abuttal surroundin u like soup in a tup leavin u squeaky clean
your attemp to CRACK me was just FEEDIN THE FEEN.
“show u how we deal wit bitches who talk shit on this site.” NOW, u know what I mean!!

upppin........................................... get sum votas on on deez notas

yo close shit righ hurr...

D illar... tight verse flow was sketchy in some parts like it didnt rhyme...some punches but kinda lacked personal wise... plus i think it is ridicouls to bold ur fuckin pucnes....

PP2 hot verse right there punches were bad ass... it flowed good too... struc and ... erreything else was hot shit... tight battle hit up mine...

VOTE PP2

this was a great ltrical battle. i like both verses by you guys. nice flow and concentration staying on subject. it feels good to read something thats not talking about shooting and killing all the time. theres a time and place for evrything but i gotta give this battle to pictureperfect2 b/c i felt his punches were personal

battle=pictureperfect2

i gave an honest verdict now return the favor:http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=115437

uuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn........ ............

pictureperfect2 ruled Da gayas ass, that was trash Da gaya, you aint shit

^^stfu....who r u....
i wish i had a couple of days to WRITE my shit as well.....

fuck u, u fake un real blow up doll ky jelly ass hoe, i wrote that the night we was sopposed to battle, yo ass didn't post your verse days after either, so dont even open yo bitch ass gap, before i cock my fist way back, have my puches hittin u after able askin if i was strapped................. uppin unbackin up bitch as talkin hoe father fuckin franky deeze weakass top forty bitch... "GET 'EM!" check the poll, i got 'em

hahaha i dropped mine that nite.....fool...n if u so confident...how bout we keystyle rite now.....u drop 1st this time...u dnt have days this time...jst minutes ....wat u say herb...

fuck it takin 2 long 2 respond...i gotta go 2 school...this shit will happen

man fuck u, if u want another battle im down, but dead broke records cant afford to be spittin shit wit out helpin his rep......... uppin..........

i think picture took it with punches and personals still nice battle

Pic=6/10
D=5.5/10

"soup in a tup" yo that at the bottom of my verse was sopposed to be "soap in a tub"
to go along wit that sqeaky clean line. uppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

do u fools listen da music or u skimp thru it...nobody know how da vote no more

opener-D...pp2 ya shit was corny
structure-D..pp2 look at ya 3rd line dat shit was longess line i seen lol
punchlines-D...he merked u
wordplay-D..
multis-D
flow-D..how da fukk could accomplish flow pp2 lines and dem shits took up da whole page
personal's-pp2..u got dis dunn datz about it tho
enjoyed-D..dis nigga verse was madd creative and he had some hott punches like da last line...pp2 ya shit ws good 2 but ya lines be havin like a 100 words in dem i dont know how u flow 2 a beat like dat fix that then you'll be good

my vote-D

return da favor da link is my sig..and dont give me a hate vote cuzz i vote 4 u

ya u cant have long lines if u only rhymin the last words in each, but if u got 3 or more words rhymin, (multies) u can pull it off on a track trust me. i do it.

ay yo somebody vote on ma battle already....ma bad if im freepostin n junk lol

I gotta give this to PP2 coz he was jus a lil bit better out of the 2. D's verses were quite long and hard to read and i dont like the idea of Bolding every other word it makes the verse look tacky but it was good.

PP2 again long verses but they were good ones and ur punches and personals were stronger than D's

V/PP2

upppin..... hahahah, 58-10, test me, hahahahahahahhaha

I pictured it perfect that this battle would impinge, and it did, nice battle but theres always a loser and the loser today is D~Illar or somein like that
You didn't come hard enough, maybe you should have dropped last, ?? But the hard hitter here was PP.
v/PP RETURN THE FAVOR!, NOW GAME OVER..........