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FlOw InTeLLiGeNt Vs. Whiskey
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20 lines min 40 lines max blind spit no feeding no d/r votes no hate votes no crew vote first to 5 votes or 3-0 KO u check in and we will both start keyin checkity check check ~1~ |
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Ayo.
As far as dope rappers go, on that list you don't feature. Any dope you got it's like it was cut to make it weaker. Your problem is that you still think you're worth the price. I'll suffice... to say like Blaine, I'm puttin' yo ass on ice, I ain't nice... This battle is just a fuckin heist. Like I stole your inspiration, I'll leave your ass to plagerize and idolize me... Like all along you knew I'm better. This case is shut, bring on the next contender. And him or her and me will engage in a vocal skirmish. I'm a whirling dervish, your ass had better not resurface, when I roll you off the dock wrapped up in your shower curtain. Just hurtin' or dead? I'm uncertain. Inhuman. Blurtin'. Mis - an - thrope - whut? Nah, I'm a humanitarian. But your ass ain't human. You're a fuckin' simian. A monkey, honkey. One step down from homo sapien. Homo, oh no! I'm afraid of what he's gonna say? No way! His shit's played and overworked. He's lackin' any climax just like the last time he tried to jerk. I'ma critique your work. I promise I'll be honest. (Hold it up!) This is a piece of shit with shit on it! A lyrical miscarriage would describe the shit you're droppin'. But don't worry... this time you got options. 'cause I know that me killin' your rhyme would make you mourn, son. Better get in first and self-administer that abortion. :banghead: Aiight. Good luck. Heh. |
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im gonna drink this "whiskey" make u rest in peace// ya rhymes are like crimes cops arrest him please// keep on talkin nigga ill grab my tech and drop ya set// plus i stay in ya gurls mouth more than crest & aquafresh// my verse to this child is a stack of verbs in a pile// somethin sick gonna happen like a perv when he smile// im'a hit u with an "oxypad" leave u a maimed cripple// you a lame "pimple" cuz i see u runnin like the A.I.M symbol// my spits release a spoken heat that rips and tweaks ya lips and teeth// this is beef ?!?! well i agree..your "iller" but only cuz your "sick of me"// does whiskey "pump dope" ?..cuz im gonna "bag" this chumps hopes// his lines are all "played out" like a really "old bag of jump ropes"// and when the O-zone dies whiskey will mean alot-to-my-ass// cuz you'll be the first to suck dick through a oxygen-mask// my curses is felt...be happy i aint hurtin ya health// if u seen this rhyme comin u would "re-verse" yaself// erase-his-craps..you dont even have adjacent-raps// i'd write the "truth on my dick" an make u "face-the-facts"// war of the crazies..im gore-in this baby..too bored to amaze me// my spits are hurtin..which is certain..ya skills is more of a maybe// i track a scheme you lack a team my flows "dope" u get "cracked like fiends"// u cant clap this king...ya punches aint hitting me when u smackin ya screen// my sick rhymes..wit slick lines..makes AIDS insane// i'll leave ya "nerves tied" like i "braided your veins"// my graphics in spittin are placid when flippin im clappin this kitten// you cant reach my level..what? u thought that only happened to midgets?// faggot i own my own rhymes and whiskeys hatin this holder// cuz u keep "vibrators" in you like "play-station controllers"// i'll break this hoe in..spit flows that quake the ocean// and make ya spine lean back like a matrix motion// i spit 30 lines figured that was enough... ~1~ |
aiight, shit that was hot. heh, roll those votes in and put me outta my misery.
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na u had a hott verse too good battle ~1~
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yo this was a tight battle both of ya did good...whiskey this was ur best battle i ever seen u in.. u elevated more from when u first startednice job....flowur was tight too u had better punchlines multies and i liked ur flow a lil better u get my vote
best line whiskey=As far as dope rappers go, on that list you don't feature. Any dope you got it's like it was cut to make it weaker. best line flow=im'a hit u with an "oxypad" leave u a maimed cripple// you a lame "pimple" cuz i see u runnin like the A.I.M symbol// |
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uppin'. c'mon y'all, we all got battles waiting. lets get this done.
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uppin for votes ill return the favor ~1~
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uppin for votes ill return the vaor just vote
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DAMN, I've voted on like 15-20 battles in the last two days and those were the hottest verses.
I thought Whisky had this thing rapped up especially with this close; "I'ma critique your work. I promise I'll be honest. (Hold it up!) This is a piece of shit with shit on it! A lyrical miscarriage would describe the shit you're droppin'. But don't worry... this time you got options. 'cause I know that me killin' your rhyme would make you mourn, son. Better get in first and self-administer that abortion. Damn that was hot. Flow Intelligent, that was an insane verse, the multis were easy to read and just made the punches hit harder. For most people on this site, your first 1/4 of ya verse would finish them off. im gonna drink this "whiskey" make u rest in peace// ya rhymes are like crimes cops arrest him please// -a very decent opener keep on talkin nigga ill grab my tech and drop ya set// plus i stay in ya gurls mouth more than crest & aquafresh// -this was an insane verse had me laugh'n outloud my verse to this child is a stack of verbs in a pile// somethin sick gonna happen like a perv when he smile// again these lines were killer, and in anyother battle Whiskey had the material to kill, but in this one, because of all the hard hitting punches by F.I, I gotta give him this win. |
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This was a very hot battle, good verses from the both of you. Flow, had a good opener and you had better punches. I felt that they hit harder then Whiskey's. Whiskey on the other hand I thought had better and stronger Multi's in his flow. Great sense of wordplay from the both of you but Whiskey, I think you can still elevate on your Vocabulary a little bit. Good structure from the both of you and nice closer by Whiskey. Flow gets my vote for the stronger punches, vocab and personly's. Great battle.
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WHOA EAST VICTORY FOR FI lol the crime line was aiight and the whisky..u culd of used a better word than "drink" that doesnt sound very dangerous I AM GOING TO DRINK YOU <<<heyll naww lmfao but yeah you ripped whisky apart dawg and that aquafresh line WAS SICK..str8 gully right der patna and that perv line was aiight too lmfao the aim symbool WAS FUCKIN HOT...matter facT DAWG U SICK LMFAO that verse was fire..continuein.. truth on my dick and face the facrs was fuckin howls dawg you owned this kid badly braided ya veins was another sick line got dmanit lmfao and that ps2 vibrator line was fuKCIN OFF THE HOOK DAWG LMFAO U GOT THIS ONE ON FUCKIN RAP DAWG GOOD LAWD THAT WAS FIRE prolly one of the siccest for me ..and i accually enjoyed readin this shit...it takes alot too please me and dawg...YOU PLEASED ME..nice ish
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good look on all votes and feedback will return the favor ~1~
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i think whiskey should take this shit even tho the otha nigga had some good shit.whiskey that was his best battle yet with great lines flow etc.good job man
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daaaaamn, whiskey, i knew when i read urs that u could prolly win, and that's food, cause flow here throws some hard punches, ALWAYS. and that's usually what i look for in verses, it badass punches.
whiskey's- "A lyrical miscarriage would describe the shit you're droppin'. But don't worry... this time you got options. 'cause I know that me killin' your rhyme would make you mourn, son. Better get in first and self-administer that abortion." this part was the sickest of ur verse right there. flow's- so much man...i ai'nt even gonna quote, but i'll ask this - where the hell do u get them ideas man? when i freestyle, i come up with about 2 or 3 punches in a 10 liner, ur shit's pretty solid man. too bad whiskey, if u woulda battled someone else, most ppl woulda lost, i like hoe u had ur OWN structure, and it still fit. but battlin flow on this, he just took it. vote-flow. case closed |
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