CJ vs. LostChild
 

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I gotta go to class right now, so let me just rip this shit out right quick.

Look, it's the co-leader of Squad-Up, yeah you must be a lost child,/
Gettin' online to lead a band of wanna be gangsta pedefiles./
Niggaz all tired wit y'all screamin' that shit get down or lay down,/
Y'all niggaz madd funny, always new you were some rappin' gay clowns./
Anway, you just a young buck typin' away and wastin' his recess,/
Can't be doin' good in school, cause you failin' this Key-test./
Nigga look who you comin' at, I'm new, but I already payed my dues,/
You a lil' nigga, my legend already bigger than yours and your crews./
Niggaz must be confused, y'all rappin' is just a ruse,
Can't walk the walk, so don't even think about steppin' in my shoes./
Ain't got no respect, so ain't got nuttin' to lose,/
You one of the whackest crews, we keep y'all around just to keep us amused./
Also so we can teach y'all the moral of the story like Aesop's Fables,
Y'all eat wit no one, cause y'all niggaz don't bring nuttin' to the table.

Aight, that's how it's goin' down. To take one from my boy D~Illar

*HANDS LOST CHILD HIS ASS*

HAHAHAHAHAHA I'm a funnie dude.

Lost child checkin my faugh it took so long

aight i'll merk you know

I don't even understand why you in such a rush to get merk
He the type that get pulled over and let the cops search
2 wins in a row and you think im bout to lose to you
Bitch I'll leave you stuck like glue, body in two
Parents not knowing what the fuck to do
Yo case couldn't even get solve by dude from blue's clues
So you lose homie taste defeat
He the type rap just to taste the street
Bitch you bout 1 pussy away from a ho
LostChild flow shine like afro glow
and don't think it's just punchlines I still spit it gangsta
Put yo body on a hanger, I feel bad havin to shit on wanksta
Everybody saying make yo flow longer
Bitches like you just making me stronger
You should a called out anotha person and challenged they ryhmes
Bitch I'll jump through that computer and smack you with nine
He type wanna be cool so he take the crime
Take the time, Bitch feeling stupid, BUNKMATES WITH SHYNE

fuck this battle was tight both had good punces,multies wordplay and flow but i was feelin lost child more word

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i like this battle. both had great punches but im feeling C.J. more. his verse was more exciting.

Yo Dis A Hot Battle Fo Sho!// Yo Cj Had Good Flowz// And Good Struture// But Da Punchlines Came Weak//

Lc// Punchlines Came Harder Dan Eva// U Improve Homie// Like Da Flowz// Did I Told U To Work On Yo Struture!


And Yo Cj// Dont Dis Da Sq// Believe It Or Not Iam In Der Crew// So Dont Diss Aight!// U Should Have Respect Becasue If U Dont Do Mo Diss Da Mo Hatred Is Against Ya//

Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. Crew vote removed - strobe

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Well Toxic, that's pretty funnie, cause I coulda sworn at the topp it said no crew votes, oh well, guess y'all squad up niggaz ain't got much of a vocabulary anyway, so I ain't really suprised that you can't read. And nigga, don't tell me who not to come at. Nigga, who the fuck iz U?

this was sort of an easy decision CJ took this he had sick punches I like the crew full fo all gangsta pedifiles line the opener was sick it flowed good together goood job i was feelin' all ya lines

lostchild: your shit was very basic and your lines were too short which made it easy for CJ to merk u lmfao ya lines was all basic and wat does the type to let a cop search have to do wit dissin or punchlines lmfao

vote:CJ

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Battle was pretty tight........

Countree came pretty hard wit a very good flow, not many off spots. He had some good punches but his closer was Fuckin Dope! Lost Child didn't really come wit that good of punches. He seemed to get caught up in just rhymin instead of battlin........ Best line........

Also so we can teach y'all the moral of the story like Aesop's Fables,
Y'all eat wit no one, cause y'all niggaz don't bring nuttin' to the table.

Vote - Countree Jay

voting for my nigga lost child

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breack down...CounTREE Jay...great opener set da tone for a good verse..punches can hard...flow was there but try to keep 12-16 sylbols per line to get it realy flowin'....vocab was a srtong point and wordplay was nice...personals also came hard...overall...7/10..nice drop focus on flow a bit...

Lost child....opener was week...ur flow was prety wack seein' as ervey line had a change in slyabols..vocab was also wack...use longer word...personals were lackin' punch..overall5/10..not bad..focus on vocab makin'words londer....not bad...

v/CounTREE Jay simpley coz his overall game was more perfected...pz out

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yo i liked lost i thought both were even in format and wordplay was real close but punchlines as both were str8 fire i gotta give it to lost great battle yall 4 real!!!

I think Jay took it with Complexity and his punches came harder....lost came with Old rhymes so i gave it to Jay

Jay=8/10
Lost=6/10

what ya'll talkn bout LostC won that battle
he had a better flow, better structure, and
way better rhymes he came much harder and strong
then cj he won
my vote
LOST

cj won just cause lostchild is cheatin likea ho to win and got caught so don even need to explain that shit i hate when people cheat an still LOSE wit ha weak verse nice drop cj