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Enygma 04-23-04 12:51 PM

Enygma Vs creaTivitie
 
Aight, here's some rules for ya......

10-16 lines.......
No crew, hate, dr votes
Blind spit
Due in an hour after you check in........

I'll start keyin AFTER you check in......

Enygma 04-23-04 12:52 PM

Ohh, I upped the amount of posts to vote up to 100 cause if they ain't got atleast 100, they shouldn't be in here anyway.............

Status 04-23-04 01:31 PM

you spit first i will drop when your done..............

Enygma 04-23-04 01:33 PM

Aight.......... I'm almost done anyway..........lol. I knew you would show so I just started keyin up.........

Status 04-23-04 01:37 PM

aight watever.......im doing somethin so i mite not be able to spit rite now...i t wont be prewritten either..i dont do prewritten any more..i only do freestyles

Enygma 04-23-04 01:42 PM

Just a quick 12 to get elevated back on it's feet..........

Shook Him Wit Ease, he needs some Aide, don't get it Mistook For Disease//
Maybe it's Madd Cow wit the way he's Spittin Bull and Lookin For Beef//
Make him Bleed For Ya's, better no show like League Joiners//
Cause votin for you's like Jason Kidd.....quick to hit you wit Three Pointers//
He's Growin Up Despised, he couldn't cut it if he Unfolded All His Knives//
And he stays wit a Shotty........... cause he ain't Old Enough To Drive//
You need to Bounce Wit Herbs, Vocab? Can't even Pronounce Your Verbs//
Only time he's considered Def...........is when Soundin Out The Words//
Kid Ya Losin Rep, he still thinks he's good, how Quick Dilusion sets//
And why the fuck you in Elevated........when you still Givin Newbs Respect//
I Warned Ya Dawg, and don't come wit those General lines like Schwartznikoff//
Call me the Doc cause I'm sick........and when you see me you're Forced To Cough//

Check in and spit..............

Status 04-23-04 03:30 PM

wat up wit it........................................

Status 04-23-04 03:30 PM

like BATMAN im bring down this RIDDLERS CRYME rate
(CRYME his crew)


look CREATIVITIE overwhelms these unrespected phony mcs//
just fuckin around, still leaven this kids d/r wit genital herpes//
me spittin first is the main cause of battles being rhetorical//
its like your lyrics aer havin sex wit history, there fuckin historical//
look i aint FORD but im still gettin this nigga to FOCUS//
have u making split decisions like u was the son of moses//
your dealing with the lord, kid your just a infantile sheperd//
ENYGMA? U should be D.J CLUMZY, da way i got U droppin record//
look should have neva battled , to late to ask for forgivness//
just like your disturbing spit Nothing Personal, Just Bussiness//

Shadows edge 04-23-04 03:57 PM

Very, very nice. This is what the forum is for... both of you came out spitting fire compared to the rest of the shit on this site. Alright... flow was decent enough for both of you that it comes down to punches, and Engyma barely got this. Best bar:

"
Kid Ya Losin Rep, he still thinks he's good, how Quick Dilusion sets//
And why the fuck you in Elevated........when you still Givin Newbs Respect//"

creative.. you could have won if you had a personal.. you had that little blurb before your verse with the wordplay on the name.. but then did nothing in battle.

very tight though.

Shadows edge 04-23-04 03:58 PM

Well.. apparently I can't vote. That's weak. Not sure what's up with that....

Crossword 04-23-04 06:09 PM

I cant vote either, but hott battle. Shadows... check my battle with Sinn... Its in my siggy and i really need to close it.

Status 04-23-04 06:10 PM

"just like your disturbing spit Nothing Personal, Just Bussiness//"

check his moving sig......it says this..
~~~~~Nothin Personal, Just Business~~~~~

you get it..........and it means he had no personals.............

you get it

Status 04-23-04 06:11 PM

are you guys in his black list or somehting..cuz i hace no peeps in mine......

Crossword 04-23-04 06:20 PM

no it said no crew votes

Status 04-23-04 06:22 PM

og aight.........thanxs for the feed back tho..............

Shadows edge 04-23-04 08:18 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by creaTivitie
"just like your disturbing spit Nothing Personal, Just Bussiness//"

check his moving sig......it says this..
~~~~~Nothin Personal, Just Business~~~~~

you get it..........and it means he had no personals.............

you get it


yeah.. didn't see that, sorry. not that it matters. and lot, i cant vote on your battle either. not sure whats up with elevated...
:huh:

Crossword 04-23-04 10:57 PM

you need 5 wins? Im sayin that cause i cant see your wins.

Shadows edge 04-23-04 11:42 PM

I'm 8-6... honestly I have no idea wtf is up with EFL

Enygma 04-24-04 12:04 AM

I don't know either........... The only thing I did was bump it up to 100 posts instead of 20 but that shouldn't matter anyway...........It says you have to be a registered voter to vote in here....... how do you do that?

Shadows edge 04-24-04 02:39 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by enygma
I don't know either........... The only thing I did was bump it up to 100 posts instead of 20 but that shouldn't matter anyway...........It says you have to be a registered voter to vote in here....... how do you do that?


I guess thats the problem.. someone should give Strobe or Cp a buzz and see what's up with that.. I'm one of the better voters on this site I think.

Enygma 04-24-04 07:36 AM

I already hit them up and this is what they said.....

Voting Requirements...

Enygma 04-24-04 09:07 AM

Uppin............................................. ...

Enygma 04-26-04 09:14 AM

Uppin this for votes...............................

Status 04-26-04 11:56 AM

uppin for votes............................................. ......

Status 04-27-04 12:49 PM

uppin for votes.............................

Enygma 04-28-04 07:24 AM

Uppin over the closed battles......c'mon, lets get some registered voters in here......

Premanition 04-28-04 12:42 PM

thought enygma took this one quite easily although this was a tight battle from both sides, its jus wen i read lines like-

"im not ford...but i'll get ya to focus" or woteva it jus puts me off, the rest off ya verse was tight but if im honest i thought that line was wack!

gud battle guys keep it up these are wot people wanna read!
peace
v/enygma

enygma can ya hit up my battle wiv creativitie in my sig wiv an honest vote, thanx!

Status 04-28-04 02:08 PM

see that is the type of votin that i hate from these newbs.....i battle dhim and i bout to beat him so he found another battle that im inn and voted against me....and then asked for you to return the favor..i hate that shit

GKillaz05 04-28-04 02:12 PM

CreaTivitie - Good spit man, had some hot lines in there, wit some good flow and brought some hard hittin punches to the table.

Best Line - look should have neva battled , to late to ask for forgivness//
just like your disturbing spit Nothing Personal, Just Bussiness// (nice closer)

Worst Line - NONE

Enygma - Hard spit man, liked your flow and wordplay.. had some good personals and hard punches.

Best Line - Kid Ya Losin Rep, he still thinks he's good, how Quick Dilusion sets//
And why the fuck you in Elevated........when you still Givin Newbs Respect// (niiice)

Worst Line - NONE

OVERALL - I give this battle to E for better personals, and harder hitten punches, liked his flow better. C man, your shit was tight... just wasn feelin your flow as much.

Vote - Enygma

RETURN THE FAV
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119532

:Krysis: 04-29-04 09:42 AM

damn, this battle was tite, both verses were sick with punches, multies, sick flow and creativitie.....

enygmas verse was fire, very nice opener, very nice throughout then a good strong finisher......

creativities verse was also fire, didnt like ure opener but u made up 4 it in ure verse then killed it with a sick personal finisher......

i could just quote both verses as a whole but na, thats long......

nice battle by both, guess i was wrong about enygma, he aint that bad......

holla.....
1
ps, i cant vote poll....

Status 04-29-04 11:50 AM

uppin for votes.................................

Status 04-29-04 03:15 PM

uppin for votes..........c'mon i need some votes........

Enygma 04-30-04 08:32 AM

Uppity upp upp uppin...............................

Vango 04-30-04 10:22 AM

yo this battle was decent, i like enygmas multies talking about bouncin with herbs and ending up with the only time your def is when your sounding out words, that was hot multis and nice punches.

creativitie you came out the box strong, but you didnt go for the jugular, almost you were holding back cuz yall are cool. not your best shit, your punches werent that hard, close battle i gotta give this one to enygma though.

Enygma 05-02-04 09:32 AM

Uppin.....this has been open for over a week now.............

FlowIntelligent. 05-02-04 08:51 PM

breakdown:

enygma:

Shook Him Wit Ease, he needs some Aide, don't get it Mistook For Disease//
Maybe it's Madd Cow wit the way he's Spittin Bull and Lookin For Beef//
^^lmao good opener..strong punch and personal 8/10
Make him Bleed For Ya's, better no show like League Joiners//
Cause votin for you's like Jason Kidd.....quick to hit you wit Three Pointers//
^^ok punch could have been better 6/10
He's Growin Up Despised, he couldn't cut it if he Unfolded All His Knives//
And he stays wit a Shotty........... cause he ain't Old Enough To Drive//
^^lol another good punch and wordplay/multies were nice 7/10
You need to Bounce Wit Herbs, Vocab? Can't even Pronounce Your Verbs//
Only time he's considered Def...........is when Soundin Out The Words//
^^best bar of the battle flow vocab wordplay multie punch all good 10/10
Kid Ya Losin Rep, he still thinks he's good, how Quick Dilusion sets//
And why the fuck you in Elevated........when you still Givin Newbs Respect//
^^hot bar good personal 9/10
I Warned Ya Dawg, and don't come wit those General lines like Schwartznikoff//
Call me the Doc cause I'm sick........and when you see me you're Forced To Cough//
^^good metaphor and punch wordplay good closer 8/10

overall: 48/60

creativitie:

look CREATIVITIE overwhelms these unrespected phony mcs//
just fuckin around, still leaven this kids d/r wit genital herpes//
^^ok opener coulda been hotter nice punch 6/10
me spittin first is the main cause of battles being rhetorical//
its like your lyrics aer havin sex wit history, there fuckin historical//
^^ok punch nice wordplay 6/10
look i aint FORD but im still gettin this nigga to FOCUS//
have u making split decisions like u was the son of moses//
^^your hottest bar good meta and wordplay 9/10
your dealing with the lord, kid your just a infantile sheperd//
ENYGMA? U should be D.J CLUMZY, da way i got U droppin record//
^^another good punch 7/10
look should have neva battled , to late to ask for forgivness//
just like your disturbing spit Nothing Personal, Just Bussiness//
^^good closer once again coulda came harder 6/10

overall:34/50

vote: enygma i think he came harder and had a better verse and better punches and he had personals creativitie didnt but good stuff from both

Status 05-03-04 01:32 PM

upin for votes...................................

Enygma 05-05-04 09:16 AM

Uppin over closed battles

Enygma 05-06-04 02:45 PM

:laugh2: <~~~~That means UPPIN!!!!!

MARVOLoUsJ1009 05-08-04 05:59 PM

lol my go niggaz!

opener-creativitie...enygma DISEASE and BEEF dont ryhme
structure-a tie
punchlines-creativitie
creativity- ^^^
multis-nun
wordplay-nun
personals-enygma<<<only catagorie u got true story
enjoyed-creativite...his shit ryhmed first of all and enyg all u had was personals dat wasn't enuff da win dis

my vote-creativitie


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