MADDHATTER81 VS DA Vinci
 

you know the rules

how many lines? when you drop'n i'll drop
no feed'n or bit'n (not even a fuk'n nibble)

you did'nt wanna post first so i mid-as-well start this/
you call yourself da vinci but im the real artist/

you have no reson rappin,like skinny girls rockin gurdles/
im spose to be afraid of you,your named after a ninja turtle

i wanted to battle someone eles you came out of thin air/
your win streeck is as long as the one in ya underwear

make you think you blind but my rhyms are just outta sight/
your rhyms could'nt be hot if you had three days to pre-write

if you look at his stats where the fuck dose he live/
he probly did'nt want me to come over and stomp his crib

dont you ever step to me cuz i'll make you loose ya step/
make you look like kayne west after his car wreck

maddhatter bitch so remember my name/
you need a reset button you cant win this rap game/
press it, the results, the same/
punch you in the mouth make you like ya lips like ladies love cool james

ay can yall hook a brotha up wit sum votes ( only 1 vote needed for thisb attle to be closed btu be honest) ill return all favors heres the link

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...93&page=2&pp=15

My alias is “cancerous” “I’m sorry your loss”
So if you see yourself beat’n me, just entrust—its just a mirage
See your lyrics are irrelevant, cause trick I’m heaven sent
My flows so funky, (so please just don’t mind the stench)
Your shit was so prewritten I think I read it in grade three
Think I want this win in my column? Its just an embarrassment to me
These peep’s gonna think I’m soft, take’n wins that come this easy,
“they let’n anyone these days” is what ya peeps say, boy believe me.

This Hatter just mad cause he got his ass kicked by a parapalegic
Yall saw the movie, he’s into sip’n tea & beastality, (but sshhhh that’s a secret)
He throws his punches and flows back slowly just to hold off on this loss
See’s the dentist daily just to say “yea mah, I can floss”
Drop lyrics that are ice cold, my comp got purma-frost
Now that I’m through with you, get to run’n, like Randy Moss.

sorry i cant vote no crew votes right..... but i'll leave feed back.........this battle was cool very cool....it goes like this...madd hatter....ur lines were tight but u needed to elevate and u needed to come harder wit ur punchlines overall this was ur best i seen...now on to da vinci...i liked ur flow and ur punchlines came harder then madd hatter...but i thought hatters flow was a little bit easier to understand...overall u did good to good battle...this is a honest vote so i guess i'd give this battle to da vinci cause he had better wordplay keep working on it madd hatter ur gettin better keep it up

much respect to both of u homeys.......im jus keeping it real

you did'nt wanna post first so i mid-as-well start this/
you call yourself da vinci but im the real artist/
^^^BASIC...O.K INTRO.......6
you have no reson rappin,like skinny girls rockin gurdles/
im spose to be afraid of you,your named after a ninja turtle
^^^FUNNY.2'ND BAR WAS BETTER.......7
i wanted to battle someone eles you came out of thin air/
your win streeck is as long as the one in ya underwear
^^^CREATIVE...........7
make you think you blind but my rhyms are just outta sight/
your rhyms could'nt be hot if you had three days to pre-write
^^^^BASIC..O.K WORD PLAY......7
if you look at his stats where the fuck dose he live/
he probly did'nt want me to come over and stomp his crib
^^^WEAK.........6
dont you ever step to me cuz i'll make you loose ya step/
make you look like kayne west after his car wreck
^^^^CREATIVE.......7
maddhatter bitch so remember my name/
you need a reset button you cant win this rap game/
press it, the results, the same/
punch you in the mouth make you like ya lips like ladies love cool james
^^^^^WEAK FINISHER.........6

My alias is “cancerous” “I’m sorry your loss”
So if you see yourself beat’n me, just entrust—its just a mirage
^^^GOOD WORD PLAY... 8
See your lyrics are irrelevant, cause trick I’m heaven sent
My flows so funky, (so please just don’t mind the stench)
^^^^FUNNY....CLEVER......7
Your shit was so prewritten I think I read it in grade three
Think I want this win in my column? Its just an embarrassment to me
^^^CREATIVE..... 7
These peep’s gonna think I’m soft, take’n wins that come this easy,
“they let’n anyone these days” is what ya peeps say, boy believe me.
^^^^BASIC..WASN'T FEELING THIS BAR..6
This Hatter just mad cause he got his ass kicked by a parapalegic
Yall saw the movie, he’s into sip’n tea & beastality, (but sshhhh that’s a secret)
^^^GOOD BAR..BUT NOT REALLY FEELING IT....7
He throws his punches and flows back slowly just to hold off on this loss
See’s the dentist daily just to say “yea mah, I can floss”
NICE PUNCH......7
Drop lyrics that are ice cold, my comp got purma-frost
Now that I’m through with you, get to run’n, like Randy Moss.
^^GOOD FINISHER.......8

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Elevate Maddhater....
Da Vinci.....good Verse...... Not Great
Good Enough 4 Him........

I Guess You Guys Can Do The Math....

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Weak battle overall....madd hatter, u had one good line which was line 2(ninja turtle shit) the rest needed alot of work, weak opener, really weak closer, structure was a lil off, but it flowed ok, wordplay was there but weak, no multies, u gotta up ya game son, decent, respect
Da Vinci....kinda weak but better that his^^Nice opener wit wordplay an multies, kinda went downhill from there, but you used good multies, but ya punches were solid an consistent every bar was a punch(thumbs up) good finisher, good flow, an structure, an vocab usuage was real good(feelin' it) opener won me over, good verse, stay up, respect
Vote: Da vinci

Both drops was okay. I was feelin madhatters drop for the punchlines and good structure althought that was good on both parts madd grabbed my attention more but i liked some of what da vinci had i think both u guys can elevate my vote goes for madd

I Can Say It Was A Easy Match Fo Da Vinci// Yo Da Nigga Had Some Good Punchlines//nice Flowz// And Nice Struture//


Madddhatter U Had Some Good Ones Though// But Look Work On Yo Punchlines Aight Cool


Vote=da Vinci

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

HELP DA NIGGA WITH SOME VOTES AIGHThttp://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120276

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aight,mad hatter i think u came ok,but u coulda had some harder punches,da vinci,u definately came stronger,u had nice flow and some hard punches.

my vote-da vinci

vote on Ecko vs Flow Intelligent i voted so return the favor

Actually, I thought this was a pretty decent battle.. hatter you've been elevating, this verse is certainly better from a flow and originality point of view, all you gotta do now is take those punch concepts and make them a bit harder.. the personals at the beggining were nice but the verse at the end was a bit weak. for instance, that "restart" punch could have been a lot better, but I like the concept a lot.

da vinci: your verse was pretty solid, consistent, except the first two bars just sucked. you would have had this by a lot more, but those first two bars were just terrible... however you brought enough fire at the end (and the third bar) to eek out a win.

vote back on shadow v black thief...

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...t=119910&page=3