$$UPREME VS. D~Illar~1
 

House Rules.....
10 Lines.....20max
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Before You Spit Homie'~~~~
Let's Go.........

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$$upreme ----

*chin check*
spit ya shit homie..i will shortly follow

Mistake 1.....accepting my challenge
 

.....another herb wants a lesson


Your lines? Like de ja vu..Ive seen it all before so it hasnt amazed-me-yet/
Watch me erase-this-vet, bitch could be Bin Ladens Father and not raise-a-threat/
Supreme winnin?...now thats fuckin funny..n u didnt even stick ya dick-in-a-clown/
Rippin-you-now, its like your addicted to head...because your quick-to-go-down/
Beat-in-your-face-its cuz u need-a-replacement..ya verse? Ya need-to-erase-it/
Cuz its wack and u wouldnt have tight lines if you deleted-your-spaces/
Im blinded from the wackness..so your verse? Its hard-to-observe-it/
Me bite from u~
No way...cuz its like waste management..id only have garbage-to-work-with/

~{Finish This}~
We know u aint a newbie, actin like 1's gonna give u the label Most Retarded-Vet/
Homie I see u flirting with Skills but from the looks of it shes playin hard-ta-get/
Im on top-of-the-show, put a dam in ya mouth straight stoppin-ur-flow/
Call me a clumsy gardener..cuz this wont b the first time Im droppin-this-hoe/

Lets Get Some Votes.........................
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wat that guy said
peace

$$UPREME = your shit was good had some really good punches and was easy to read with a good flow

D~Illar~1 = i enjoyed readin this one. had a lot of good punches flowed nicely to.

over all i vote D~Illar~1

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

Sorry D~illar~1...
I Wasn't Feeling Your Verse...
2 Much Filler....
Bad Structure.....

*smirks*
sorry supreme i wasnt feeling your verse
....shit punches
....self rep{it mite win against newbs & herbs like yourself}
.... shit was played
Overall i vote d~illar~1....cuz the other guy can't hack being fucked up :rolleyes:

UUUUUUUUUUUppppppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiin nnnnnnnnnnnnn

Bro, I Don't Want 2 Burst Your Bubble...
But I Was More Elevated,then Yours'......filler...that's All U Had...
Plus That Vote Won't Even Count'...

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Uppin

^^Stop Tryin 2 sway votes herb...
i counted 1 punch that was aight....
talkin bout shit with sauce n all that whack shit....{not a punch-h-o-m-o}
Gay jokes..are weak punches...learn that...played...
Learn 2 throw a decent punch..construct a decent spit....n then say u r close 2 my level...
Until then...stfu

nuff said...

:rolleyes:..... herbs these days

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SUPREME UR ASS GOT MERRRRRRKED...

heres the breakdown
supreme-ur punches were forced...u trully forced ur punches...steak sauce WHAT THE FUCK? ur vocab isnt even there...ur flow and structure was good thats about it...TO ME PUNCHES WIN BATTLES AND U DIDNT HAVE 1 LINE I LIKED...UVE MUST BE WINNIN BY BEATIN SUCKY SUCKY NEWBS....CAUSE I BEAT D~ILLAR~1...u needed to come hard...man ur not as good as i thought when i 1st got here honest to god...ive seen newbs elevate quicker than u...WHEN U WATCH BATTLES ON TV THEY DONT SIT THERE AND COUNT FLOW OR STRUCTURE...PEOPLE ONLY WANT TO HEAR HARD DISSES...AND U DIDNT HAVE ANY1...NONE WERE FUNNY

D ILLAR 1-DAAMN U STR8 UP MERKED SUPREME...showed every1 a newb or wht not can beat a so called vet...PUNCHES WIN BATTLES...U HAD THE PUNCHES DOWN..ALL FUNNY AND PERSONAL...UR STRUCTURE WAS EVEN BETTER AND FLOW..VERY EASY TO READ AND UNDERSTANDABLE..ANY1 WHO READS THIS AND SAYS SUPREME WON CAUSE OF PUNCHES DONT KNOW RAP....ive battled u b4 and i beat u and from the day i beat u till seeing this battle i think ud beat me if we battled again...shiiet either u elevated quick or u stole those flows cause they hott..

vote-d~illar~1

no hate 2 supreme....but dawg prove ur a vet by making sure who eva battles u punches dont hurt u....dont get mad at me or say this was a hate vote...this is honest...just read D'S SPITS AGAIN AND TELL ME IF U WERENT SAYIN OOOOOH DAMN...

and supreme prison and position doesnt flow that well...or rhyme in fact...nor does wife and twice...ur opener was weak...so was ur ending...either ur runnin out of flows or no 1 is slowing down and every1 is elevatin quick....

^^
i thought my keystyle against u was enough...people saw otherwise....
i keyed this...n this herb cant hack it....after 1 vote he started tryin 2 sway em his way...pathetic
uppin 2 k.o this wannabe

:rolleyes: ....herbs these days

yo check it Supreme you had a nice verse --nice struc too........ there were some nice punches but not a whole lot.......your shit flowed but not enough......

D was shit was nice an had some hard punches--you came harder and your shit flowed nicely struc couldve been better but it was alright......had some nice vocab too

Vote=D

yall vote on that Deleon Vs Swampsoul707

I aint got tha link

NO bad blood

peace

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yo supremem im calling u out...so are u goin 2 accept? GO TO BITCHED SLAPPED AND READ THE STIPULATIONS IF U ACCEPT LET ME KNOW....PCE

all those votes...without the posting a poll...
wats doin with that

this shit shud b ova by now....
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absolutely no hate, dis is a completely honest vote, dillard character even though yo pussy ass aint uppin our battle i merked u in, u got this one wit better punches, this cat thought he was battlin another weak newbie but u know what u doin, prolly some doo from another site or sumin. but ya props on this battle wit dem puches, even though i heard a few of 'em, and it didn't flow all that well
other guy, u came way to weak and had to much self up shit, only had one real punch, gotta give this to dillard
vote-dillard character

Uppin 4 Votes.......................................

aight check it...

D~iller~1
Flow:5/10
Wordusage:6/10
Vocabulary:410
Creativity:6/10
Punchlines:6/10
Opener:7/10
Closer:6/10

Overall:38

Comment:it was aight battle...nothin special ya know...well you need to have more vocabulary coz i get tired of having to read the same words over and over....

Favorite Line:the opener

$$upreme
Flow:6/10
Wordusage:7/10
Vocabulary:5/10
Creativity:6/10
Punchlines:6/10
Opener:6/10
Closer:7/10

Overall:43

Comment:look i think you took this battle with ur word play and vocabulary...

Favorite Line:the closer

v/$$upreme

return the favor with no HATE

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heres what i think.................Supreme's flow was way better in punches he showed diversity and also his own style in creativitie also he had easier verses to read as well as understand nice keep elevating both of you good battle

.........this shit should b 4-2...
n no more herbs votin....if u dnt know how 2 vote...then dont fuckin vote at all
nuff said
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ill battle u btoh came nice bet if eel supreme more
punche s
flow - s
creativty - both
multis - both
overal - s

punches preme
flows preme
creativity preme
multis d iller
overal preme

nice battle both came at it hard wana see more battles like this

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Uppin 4 Votes.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i think Sup took this with Flow and punches but it was pretty close

Su=7/10
D=6.5/10

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

fuck all ya'll cunts who cant read a battle verse...not 1 punch was hard..wat the fuck...d'ride this lame ass excuse for a battler...go blow eachother...film it..watch it.... then u'll see how gay u cunts r...
ive never been on a more no-talented,d-riding site in my life..till now...

ALL CAN GET FUCKED....
N IF U GOT A PROBLEM SET A THREAD...
IM SURE U"LL GET YA DICK BUDDIES 4 sum votes....

uppin 4 vote$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$

nice drops both of ya i was feelin both verses

supreme-neva seem 2 amaze me nice punches like ali nice flow good structure

bestline-IF YOUR WRECKIN SHADY TYPES, I'LL GET HIS NECK BREAKING TWICE*
CUZ THIS KID LOVES DICK MORE THAN DETECTIVE TRACY'S WIFE*

^^ nice start

worsteline-nun nice drop yo verse had me waiting 4 mo i like dat

overall verse gets a 8.0/10

d-nice drop also thre lewis punches wit a descent flow

bestline-Your lines? Like de ja vu..Ive seen it all before so it hasnt amazed-me-yet/
Watch me erase-this-vet, bitch could be Bin Ladens Father and not raise-a-threat

nice start

worsteline-Im on top-of-the-show, put a dam in ya mouth straight stoppin-ur-flow/
Call me a clumsy gardener..cuz this wont b the first time Im droppin-this-hoe/

not a descent finish

your verse gets a 7.3/10

winner supreme

Your lines? Like de ja vu..Ive seen it all before so it hasnt amazed-me-yet/
Watch me erase-this-vet, bitch could be Bin Ladens Father and not raise-a-threat/

^Alright Opener' ..!! It Was 'Safe' .. 8/10

Supreme winnin?...now thats fuckin funny..n u didnt even stick ya dick-in-a-clown/
Rippin-you-now, its like your addicted to head...because your quick-to-go-down/
Beat-in-your-face-its cuz u need-a-replacement..ya verse? Ya need-to-erase-it/
Cuz its wack and u wouldnt have tight lines if you deleted-your-spaces/
Im blinded from the wackness..so your verse? Its hard-to-observe-it/
Me bite from u~
No way...cuz its like waste management..id only have garbage-to-work-with/

^Alright' Some Of Your Shit Was Off-Blance' And That Threw Your Structure & Verse Off But You Still Had Some Good Punches' That Hit Hard' ..!! & Alright Wordplay ..!

Im on top-of-the-show, put a dam in ya mouth straight stoppin-ur-flow/
Call me a clumsy gardener..cuz this wont b the first time Im droppin-this-hoe/

^Nice Closer To Finish It ' .. Off!! I Was Feelin It' ..!! 10/10 !! - - -

Dillar Gets It This Time Around' ..!!!!

But You Had A Very Swell Opener' $$