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Swampsouljh707 VS DeLeon
Alright this is how its gonna go down
you spit first 10- 25 line max no crew hate or dickridin votes Cool? check in and drop your shit dogg |
yo are you gonna show or what?????????????????????
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swampsoldier707 vs deleon
ill snatch you like a batch of cookies/
im a lyrical vet you just another one of them rookies/ my rhymes they come clean and fresh/ im a motha fuckin beast ill chew you up and spit yo flesh/ you know the fact of dis matter is/ my substance is highly hazardous/ i can bust any time cuz im hideous off the canibus/ this shit aint over well not yet till the day that im stoppin im droppin/ bombs on dis foo named deleon and im lockin my fist real tight left and right and fuck them raps you be rockin/ now deleon on my bad side you listed/ i got killah rhymes to let you know im sick and twisted/ im flossin and bossin and i will always be respected/ deleon you an mc who will always be rejected/ so if you wanna see me come to v-town south/ dont even write back dawg just shut yo mouth/ |
alright that was nice dogg
give me some time now |
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117057 Vote ON tHis shit ill return favors heres the link
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c'mon deleon hurry up and spit yo shit so these people can vote on our battle.
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I lead tha pack even if their aint no one to follow--
I spit more shit than a belimic bitch afraid to swallow-- rookies step up to tha plate but they seem 2 forget they bats-- think they can battle DeLeon? these niggas forget they facts-- i clap more than than the oscars after an emmy winnin performance-- and pack more heat than a volcano but my flows never go dormant-- fuck your dumb shit, i dont like how these soft rooks is actin-- talkin back to they daddy, if they moms wasnt at the party they'd just be jizz stains on a napkin-- chew up phony lines and spit em back out like a champ-- specially when i can turn off these phony mc's light like a lamp-- your simple, simplistic rhymes aint shit-- so drop tha keyboard you better off ridin dick-- so lemme give ya advice and in ya mind's where it sticks-- you a featherweight nigga tryin to deal with tha bricks-- you just dont know, my gats got more *pop* than justin timberlake-- askin how much glory i want? well how much should a winner take?-- Yall vote on that Lost Child Vs Deleon |
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that was coo you got me...lol |
What do i do in these situations, do i live up to everyones expectations, should react to this big problems, what do i do in these situations.
I feel like nothings ever changing in my life i an't got a girl or anything good going for my life, my lyrics will just throw u into hysterics i got a fine mind to wine u up like a clock till your broken down nealing on the ground. You never heard of an iller mc ever problbly explains that i do take pills that kill me inside and make my mind hullisinate and tempt fate everytime. I feel like my head has been hit by a million hammers crushing my skull till it's desintergrated and gone. All i see is anger painful tears and upset,always circling in the same direction but acually never going anywhere. I hate growing up and i hate the thought of dieing, but sometimes don't see what's the point of living and careing. im only seixteen but learned i an't keen on life the way its been treating me feels like ive been beaten to death takeing my spirit and tawn away and never to be seen again. I lost friends from my past that i miss and new people in my life who i simply detest now im gonna do a runna and leave my past behind me and pull my pants down forget about the past and make everyone kiss my ass. |
alright yall lets get some votes up in this...............
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Lets get some votes up in this bitch
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Uppin This Shit Again Come On Now Drop Your Vote And We'll Do Tha Same
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Uppin this shit again Yall vote on this
will try and return tha favor |
Deleon on this shit. Better everything. Other dude was just no good. His lines were too long. Nopunches Deleons got this.
Vote on mine http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121115 Deleon U didnt vote on mine whats the deal? |
HAHAHAHAH.....LEON RIPPED EM, SINCE THE OPENER I KNEW DUDE LOST
I lead tha pack even if their aint no one to follow-- I spit more shit than a belimic bitch afraid to swallow-- HAHAHA FLOW WAS NICE ER THING SO......... VOTE:DELEON |
whoa...what's up wit find mind? anyway...deleon most definetely had this one, no question, swamp, u didn't come hard at all bro, u should try to play to the crowd. like "look at this mofo blah blah blah", instead of "now deleon on my bad side you listed/
i got killah rhymes to let you know im sick and twisted/", practice punches, otherwise tho, ur shit DID flow and the structure was fine. my faves-"I lead tha pack even if their aint no one to follow-- I spit more shit than a belimic bitch afraid to swallow--" <---hot and "fuck your dumb shit, i dont like how these soft rooks is actin-- talkin back to they daddy, if they moms wasnt at the party they'd just be jizz stains on a napkin--" hotter, lol vote-deleon |
thanx for droppin those votes
lets get some more up here |
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Heres Deleons break down.............
I lead tha pack even if their aint no one to follow-- I spit more shit than a belimic bitch afraid to swallow-- (Pretty good opener i give it a 7/10) rookies step up to tha plate but they seem 2 forget they bats-- think they can battle DeLeon? these niggas forget they facts-- (Ok rhyme scheme nothing to amazing i give it a 5/10) i clap more than than the oscars after an emmy winnin performance-- and pack more heat than a volcano but my flows never go dormant-- (This line i liked jus cuz it was some good use of words u get a 6/10) fuck your dumb shit, i dont like how these soft rooks is actin-- (very very bad man nothin rhymes with this actin and napkin dont rhyme....1/10) talkin back to they daddy, if they moms wasnt at the party they'd just be jizz stains on a napkin-- (same shyt here ur losin points step up and dont jump off ur rhyme scheme iight 1/10) chew up phony lines and spit em back out like a champ-- specially when i can turn off these phony mc's light like a lamp-- (this was 1 of my favorites could use of words pretty hot shyt 8/10) your simple, simplistic rhymes aint shit-- (damn man no no no stop with the random lines decent words so it gets a 3/10) so drop tha keyboard you better off ridin dick-- (another random 1 and a bad 1 at that sop guess what it gets exactly that a 1/10) so lemme give ya advice and in ya mind's where it sticks-- you a featherweight nigga tryin to deal with tha bricks-- (not bad at all u should use more of this stuff instead of random lines 6/10) you just dont know, my gats got more *pop* than justin timberlake-- askin how much glory i want? well how much should a winner take?-- (DAMN!!!! hott finisher u started and ended this shyt strong good shyt dawg 8/10) 46/100 thoose random lines hurt you pretty bad......... Ok now swampsoldier707s break down...... ill snatch you like a batch of cookies/ im a lyrical vet you just another one of them rookies/ (not a bad start i give it a 6/10) my rhymes they come clean and fresh/ im a motha fuckin beast ill chew you up and spit yo flesh/ (keepin up with the rhymes good idea this is another 6/10) you know the fact of dis matter is/ my substance is highly hazardous/ i can bust any time cuz im hideous off the canibus/ (3 line hit nice usually pretty hard but u pulled it off well so ima give it a 8-10) this shit aint over well not yet till the day that im stoppin im droppin/ bombs on dis foo named deleon and im lockin my fist real tight left and right and fuck them raps you be rockin/ (a little dragged but still pretty good 5/10) now deleon on my bad side you listed/ i got killah rhymes to let you know im sick and twisted/ (You on your game kid keep it comin 7-10) im flossin and bossin and i will always be respected/ deleon you an mc who will always be rejected/ (this is a good spit no random lines and a good mix of rhymes 6-10) so if you wanna see me come to v-town south/ dont even write back dawg just shut yo mouth/ (good finisher not to strong but pretty good 5/10) 43/70 Punches:Deleon Flow:Swampsoldier Opener/Finisher:Deleon Personals:Swampsoldier Vocab:Swampsoldier Good Battle.....Vote:Swampsoldier |
alright thanx to all that voted so far
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Vote DeLeon
That guy kicked the script outta here descent opener good multies, punchlines and all were there. In my opinion, not close at all had me laughin nearly off my seat...and thats hard to do. Well spit DeLeon! V/DeLeon |
Wow i dont evan think that was close all of Swamps flow was so basic and Del. came way harder.
Del. 8/10 Swamp 4-5/10 |
Yo i got battles in my Sig return favor plz.Appreciated
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