dawgfatha_13 VS XxToXiCXxVeRbZ
 

10 To 15 Lines
No D/r Votes
No Unexplain Votes

U Go First Nigga!

Heres Anotha Battle// Lets Get It Poppin// Lets Go Nigga Spit!

yo vote on my shit, http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120460

I'll vote on this one when its up

yo here i go

you think you rappin material//you sound like you read yo rhymes off tha back of a boxo cereal//i aint here ta fool around//im here ta make sure dis battle dont turn around//when da dawgfatha grabs tha mike you might as well go ramble//cause when i rock that mike i rock it unobjectionable//you might want to grab a dictionary for tha words i impose//when i leave you 6 feet deep i wont need to be poised//dolja at my side and my buds in tha corna//ta make sure ya dont botha//i dont got no krew//i dont have to//jus 100% real hardcore//bitches overrated me before//now they get kicked out tha door//yo dont waste my time i got things to do//i leave you now im celebratin 4-20 without you//so take yo leave and make a cumback foo

there you go i hope thats good.it was 100% improv

that last line shouldve said

so take yor leave or make a cumback foo

Lol Lol Lol Lol Lol Lol Lol Lol Lol Lol Lol Lol Lol Lol// Yo Lil Nigga U Think U Can Beat Me Let Me Kill U Aight

I'll slash-ur-knees, mutilate ur back-n-spleen, to leave u lookin' like sum1 managed to hack-ur-genes//
Ur rhymes couldn't shine, even if u waxed-them-clean, u couldn't hit if i gave u a bat and let u whack-extreme//
Call me raps cairopracter, when i make ur back-look-lean, crossdressing earned u the right 2 where a sash-4-queen//
U couldn't be ill, even if u had aids then bashed-ur-meat, if u rapped visuals ur rhymes wud luk like plaque attacking-teeth//
I'll silence ur words, like sum1 cracked-ur-speech, so even competing with helen keller wud be a master-feat//
Ur verse is so wack, that it's requested-slaps, the only way u'd ever @#%$ me up is if u molested-rap//
U couldn't bring illness, if ur rhyme had infected-rats, lets see how u hold a mic with ur arms-twisted-back//
You'll never score, too many concepts in my words, i surround ya stereo types,you mono spitten ya cursed verse
Rap is like a race, I cruise by while I meditate, you gassed yourself up and you still can't accelerate
u an ILLITERATE BASTARD, your style aint even mastered, my @#%$ be spirtually blessed so you could say im pastured
Beating Xtra 2restrial is harder than climbing MT Everest, I'll Pop all pimples on ya head and make u drink the puss as a beverage
I verbalize paranormally while BJ holds battles in anticipation, gazing skyward as i descend from the clouds, buring spirit like acidic precipitation
I’ll break ur hands, causing ur writtens to seem kinda weak, and steal ur tonsils so u can easily swallow this defeat
Then circumvent ur weak tactics, keeping u dazed like hypnosis, then watch u crumble like cookies and divide like mitosis
Cursive-assertiveness, my verses-are-merciless, and my rhymes are tighter than a virgins-perked-cervix-is
This battle is wrong, like snow falling in a hundred degrees, cause this guy's win record is shorter than a midget down on his knees

WHAT A JOKE!

Can I Get Some Votes In Hurr To End Dis Shit Dis Shit Is Ova//

yeah your right your way better than me.how old are you? this was my first ever battle.im only 13.hopefully ill be able to turn my game up a notch in the future

Sheesh
Toxic Beasted His Rhyme
That Nigga Dawgfather Vocab Wasnt Up On Toxics
And The Punches Werent Niether
Vote:toxic

I VOTED SO RETURN THE FAVOR
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120547

What the fuck
Somebody just got merked
I'm a keep it real though toxic won the battle with that first line
Soon as i saw that first line I knew he merked him


I'll slash-ur-knees, mutilate ur back-n-spleen, to leave u lookin' like sum1 managed to hack-ur-genes//

DAM toxic murdered homeboy like this shit wasnt even a battle i gott give it to toxic
return da favor homeboy
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120366
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120192

Yo Nigga People Talkin But Didnt Even Voted// Lostchild Is Da Only Nigga In Hurr Who Voted

we should fucking close this shit noones voting and plus toxic won this shit

toxic took this one all the way to the bank, no questions

Yo toxic murderd u dawgfatha dont batlle him anymore its just embarassing but i give my vote to toxicverbs

killed
 

dawgfatha youve ben murdered by toxic, da aids and the couldnt shine even if you waxed clean were bare jokes.

Return da fav toxic verbz plz

Cheerz

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121372
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121849

dawg - aight first off fix ya structure...than stop wit the simple rhymes...u need to throw hard punches and directly at him....use personals!!....use meta's too...they help ur punches land hard as fuck.....flow sucked too....go to tutorials and learn everything there....

toxic - your shit had better structure but dont use "//" cuz it is too newbieish....ur flow wasnt great cuz of long ass lines....but u threw punches!!....suggest u elevate in usin betta meta's....keep usin personals....elevate cuz u got potential....jus dont make ur lines so long....

vote - toxic

Yo Jae Gutter Up In Dis Shit// My Homie// Its Bout To Get Crunk// Yall Betta Watch Out Cuz Dis Nigga Is On Fire// But He Cant Beat Me

Aight.. this battle was a joke.. no comp at all... toxic took this battle by a mile.. i shouldn't have to explain..

vote=toxic

lmaooo yo toxic y u battle dis lame dunn..

opener-toxic...dat shit killed every bar dunn said
structure-toxic...
punchlines-toxic...killed him
wordplay-nun
multis-toxic..killed em here 2
personals-nun
enjoyed-toxic...its no explanation 4 dis shit dude got oded on real easy

my vote-toxic

return dat favor yo...da link is in my sig