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quickpunch vs L.I.
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10-20 Lines No Feeding No Dr No Hate No Crew Blind Spit Due 30 Min Fta Check In I Will Check In Afta U.........pussy |
checkin in....i'll spit my shit....dont worry....haha....niiigga finally glad to see u grown...pussy
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checked in........lets see that talk afta u lose...........
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bitch i kno u waitin fo me 2 drop so u can drop..so here im'a drop...only took me 10 mins 2 cook up...pussy dont care if u win...just doin this fo fun....here it is
Fuck my enemies, shit I got a new and improved style for them by showing them one of YOUR verses till they die of boredom went to McDonald's and Fucked the hoe and decided to come back Even with all the excessive fats It's heavy weight status you lack Don't act brash we know CLASS SICS has a whack reputation What's sad is CLASS SICS says you still need elevation (check classics forum fo info) We can put ur album up for charity and ur shit still wouldn’t drop I’ll Brake ur Waist and Feet so u can Brag about Repping Hip Hop u might spit but I vomit , vomit shits that’s hot like the atomic ur skill level would never be high even if u were on chronic u might as well not post ur verse cause this battle is already won u wouldn't be hot even if u were rapping with an inflammatory gun when u done reading this I'll make u leave this site u would never shine even if u had the beacon of light opened u up , so I guess in this battle you could call me the lyrical surgeon Fucked around with your rhymes so many times I'm surprised your still a virgin I’ve beating u, it’ll replay in ur head like a chorus u can only refrain I want to know who died and left you in charge so I can kill them again |
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120460
vote on this one straight up I'll vote on this when its done. |
My Verse
Oh yea...
Now this is what i wanted... To finish this herb's trash talking.... Haha....aight check it... I could finish this 'quick' wit the complex 'punches' i throw... Forget about his dick...i think he needs he is game to grow... Talkin shit like he left my crew and he hot shit leadin his own route... What the fuck are you talkin bout...i kicked you weak ass the fuck out... Run your mouth so fucking much but you have nothing to put on display... Your rhymes are such a joke even mute people have things to say... Elevation isn’t meant for cats like you, so stop askin for help... You could use brail on your lines and they still wouldn’t be felt... Sayin your shit is recognized worldwide and is well known... Yeah right, there’s a better chance of an artificial plant growin... Getting into battles and doesn’t even contend or put up a fight... Name should be Big Boi cause you just an Outkast on this site... Sure you record looks nice...but ur opponents rhymes look like jokes... Next time you leave a crew dont come bac askin for sum votes... Think u could come up with a personal against me? shit thats crazy talk... I leave you so fuckin shook, your permanantly doin the crypt walk... Damn you afraid of emcees that guaranteed to leave u in a hurst?... Seems to me that u havin a major odeal wit having to spit first... Quit talkin that shit cuz it leaves a very bad impression... Shoulda no showed cuz u werent an even match contestant... aight there ya go........quit tralkin shit........votes please......... |
nice spit...now its all said and done....best of luck...no more net beef i dont net beef....UPPIN..pce
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demobx
Both drops was good L.I structure fell off here and there but u had good flow and punches. It was kinda hard for me to decide. I go for quickpunch for having a little bit more stronger punches, but i think it was a good battle
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Vote on my battle with J_Rip, I just wanna see what y'all think. Drop an honest vote and I'll drop on this.
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LI and quick punch
LI felt you came strong and verse wuz tight but no real multiez, most of ya punchez were connectin. your vocab seemed a lil restricted.but overall i give it a 7.5 for you Quick punch came wit multiez betta punchez didnt see any personalz if there wuz didnt recognize any. but quick punch i give you a 7.8 thiz wuz close az (you know what). But what i think got the vote for you iz your strong opener and consistency. vote Quick Punch |
Shit as Much As I Hate To Do This' iSh.. Im Going To Have To Give This To QuiCckPunch!!
Fuck my enemies, shit I got a new and improved style for them by showing them one of YOUR verses till they die of boredom ^Opener Is Shit' Weak Weak Weak!! No Doubt!!! Needs Serious Help!! Don't act brash we know CLASS SICS has a whack reputation What's sad is CLASS SICS says you still need elevation (check classics forum fo info) ^Nice Punchline' .. But You Throwin It At Class Sic' ..!! Not "L.I." .. So Its Not Directed Towards Him!! 8/10 We can put ur album up for charity and ur shit still wouldn’t drop I’ll Brake ur Waist and Feet so u can Brag about Repping Hip Hop ^Nice Bar' Right There But The Punch Is Where 7/10 opened u up , so I guess in this battle you could call me the lyrical surgeon Fucked around with your rhymes so many times I'm surprised your still a virgin ^Nice I Like That Line' .. 10/10 Perfectly Done!! Probably Your Best Line In Your Verse!! I’ve beating u, it’ll replay in ur head like a chorus u can only refrain I want to know who died and left you in charge so I can kill them again ^Weak Closer' Could Use Some More Work!!! 2/10 Alright Checcck L.I.'s Lines: I could finish this 'quick' wit the complex 'punches' i throw... Forget about his dick...i think he needs he is game to grow... ^Nice Wordplay In The First Line' .. I Like That But Could Have Improved Your Opener ' First Impression 7/10 Run your mouth so fucking much but you have nothing to put on display... Your rhymes are such a joke even mute people have things to say... ^Nice Punchline There 8/10 Damn you afraid of emcees that guaranteed to leave u in a hurst?... Seems to me that u havin a major odeal wit having to spit first... ^Again Nice Bar Right There 8/10 Quit talkin that shit cuz it leaves a very bad impression... Shoulda no showed cuz u werent an even match contestant... ^Nice Closer Well Done 9/10 Im Going To Have To Give This To Quick Punch' Because Some Of Your Lines Didn't Rhyme L.I. And That Threw Your Verse Off Balance' !!! But Bother Verses Were Straight I Enjoyed Them!! |
Fuck my enemies, shit I got a new and improved style for them
by showing them one of YOUR verses till they die of boredom Not a bad opener.... went to McDonald's and Fucked the hoe and decided to come back Even with all the excessive fats It's heavy weight status you lack Ehh... Don't act brash we know CLASS SICS has a whack reputation What's sad is CLASS SICS says you still need elevation (check classics forum fo info) Not a bad personal... We can put ur album up for charity and ur shit still wouldn’t drop I’ll Brake ur Waist and Feet so u can Brag about Repping Hip Hop Ehh.... not worded right... u might spit but I vomit , vomit shits that’s hot like the atomic ur skill level would never be high even if u were on chronic Kind played... u might as well not post ur verse cause this battle is already won u wouldn't be hot even if u were rapping with an inflammatory gun Weak... when u done reading this I'll make u leave this site u would never shine even if u had the beacon of light Zzzz..... opened u up , so I guess in this battle you could call me the lyrical surgeon Fucked around with your rhymes so many times I'm surprised your still a virgin Finally a good punch.... I’ve beating u, it’ll replay in ur head like a chorus u can only refrain I want to know who died and left you in charge so I can kill them again Doesn't rhyme.....looks like it does, but sound it out.... I could finish this 'quick' wit the complex 'punches' i throw... Forget about his dick...i think he needs he is game to grow... Not that good of an opener... Talkin shit like he left my crew and he hot shit leadin his own route... What the fuck are you talkin bout...i kicked you weak ass the fuck out... Good personal.... Run your mouth so fucking much but you have nothing to put on display... Your rhymes are such a joke even mute people have things to say... Ehh....could be worded better... Elevation isn’t meant for cats like you, so stop askin for help... You could use brail on your lines and they still wouldn’t be felt... Kinda played... Sayin your shit is recognized worldwide and is well known... Yeah right, there’s a better chance of an artificial plant growin... kinda weak... Getting into battles and doesn’t even contend or put up a fight... Name should be Big Boi cause you just an Outkast on this site... Ok punch... Sure you record looks nice...but ur opponents rhymes look like jokes... Next time you leave a crew dont come bac askin for sum votes... This was a good fuckin punch..... Think u could come up with a personal against me? shit thats crazy talk... I leave you so fuckin shook, your permanantly doin the crypt walk... Ehh.... Damn you afraid of emcees that guaranteed to leave u in a hurst?... Seems to me that u havin a major odeal wit having to spit first... Tried too hard for the personal... Quit talkin that shit cuz it leaves a very bad impression... Shoulda no showed cuz u werent an even match contestant... Ok closer..... Overall this match wasn't as good after I broke it down. At first glance it seemed that both lyricist came hard wit lots of hard hittin punches...... Quickpunch was ok but I don't think his punches were all that great......L.I was alright too but I loved the line about askin the crew for votes.....that had me rollin.....that's why I gotta give this one to L.I.............. Vote - L.I |
thanks for the vote.......uppin............keep the hnest feedback coming..........
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I basically agree with enygma. two pretty solid verses, but LI came more consistently and had nicer personals. Tight battle though.. keep elevating both y'all.
v/ LI return the favor on Shadow v J_RIP (link in sig) Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
thanks........uppin............................... .....
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thanks for the honest votes...i agree my opener and closer arnt good..somethin i need to work on....thanks yall....UPPIN
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aight i thought bothe u did aight both had good punches,multieswordplay but i thoght L.I could of did a lot better therefore giving my vote to quickpunch
vote on Ecko vs Flow Intelligent i voted so return the favor Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
come on peeps come with the votes.....still uppin....uppin...
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return the favor vote on Ecko vs Flow Intelligent i voted so return the favor
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Now why would you disqualify my vote? Would it have helped if I had randomly quoted enygma's analysis? I said I agree, damnit.
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good battle here pretty close but im gonna give this to quik punch cos he had slightly beta punches but mainly he had some gud personals which was the only obvious difference props to both though, keep doin ya thing!
vote-quik will ya both vote on my battle wiv bloodshot, thanx...pz |
Both Verses Was Hot
But It Was A Tight Battle Then I Seen Punch Wit That Virgin Line And I Figured Damn Over Vote:quickpunch Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
I VOTED SO RETURN THE FAVOR PLEASE
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120547 |
Fuck my enemies, shit I got a new and improved style for them
by showing them one of YOUR verses till they die of boredom Well??NO! went to McDonald's and Fucked the hoe and decided to come back Even with all the excessive fats It's heavy weight status you lack OKay definately nuthin here.. Don't act brash we know CLASS SICS has a whack reputation What's sad is CLASS SICS says you still need elevation (check classics forum fo info) ok well Punch??? We can put ur album up for charity and ur shit still wouldn’t drop I’ll Brake ur Waist and Feet so u can Brag about Repping Hip Hop Welll..Kould have been worded better... u might spit but I vomit , vomit shits that’s hot like the atomic ur skill level would never be high even if u were on chronic ok this was aight .. u might as well not post ur verse cause this battle is already won u wouldn't be hot even if u were rapping with an inflammatory gun coulda been better.. when u done reading this I'll make u leave this site u would never shine even if u had the beacon of light ok goin back downhill... opened u up , so I guess in this battle you could call me the lyrical surgeon Fucked around with your rhymes so many times I'm surprised your still a virgin This was a good line here prolly your best... I’ve beating u, it’ll replay in ur head like a chorus u can only refrain I want to know who died and left you in charge so I can kill them again Dont RHYME!!!!!! I could finish this 'quick' wit the complex 'punches' i throw... Forget about his dick...i think he needs he is game to grow... Played a lil but nice ..... Talkin shit like he left my crew and he hot shit leadin his own route... What the fuck are you talkin bout...i kicked you weak ass the fuck out... haha i liked this shit..... Run your mouth so fucking much but you have nothing to put on display... Your rhymes are such a joke even mute people have things to say... could have been worded better.... Elevation isn’t meant for cats like you, so stop askin for help... You could use brail on your lines and they still wouldn’t be felt... 2nd line in this bar was nice ill give you that... Sayin your shit is recognized worldwide and is well known... Yeah right, there’s a better chance of an artificial plant growin... well..:-/ i dont know..goin down hill a lil.... Getting into battles and doesn’t even contend or put up a fight... Name should be Big Boi cause you just an Outkast on this site... Pretty nice startin to redeem yourself... Sure you record looks nice...but ur opponents rhymes look like jokes... Next time you leave a crew dont come bac askin for sum votes... Nice shit here..... Think u could come up with a personal against me? shit thats crazy talk... I leave you so fuckin shook, your permanantly doin the crypt walk... well i guess \every line cant be a winner lol this is one of em.... Damn you afraid of emcees that guaranteed to leave u in a hurst?... Seems to me that u havin a major odeal wit having to spit first... pretty good... Quit talkin that shit cuz it leaves a very bad impression... Shoulda no showed cuz u werent an even match contestant... ok closer nothin special but ok... ok well im a give this on to L.I. because he definately had the better verse had better wordplay and flow and better punches both were good ..My Vote=L.I. HolLA ~UnO~ |
thanks for the explained vote............uppin..............
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Quickpunch shit was real hot mang shit was offical LI urs was ok no lie but u try to hard kid vote to Quickpunch
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damn dawg its 4-2 and is saw this shit i think quickpunch took this...dawg i was surprised i was like shocked lmfao real good drop quickpunch u got my respect u doin ur thang dawg and LI u still my nigga u had a good drop but i think quick took this with punches good job from both of yall
vote: quick Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
OK, this is my explanation.... admins put my damn vote back up!
Fuck my enemies, shit I got a new and improved style for them by showing them one of YOUR verses till they die of boredom very nice opener, tight punch went to McDonald's and Fucked the hoe and decided to come back Even with all the excessive fats It's heavy weight status you lack very weak.. killed the momentum Don't act brash we know CLASS SICS has a whack reputation What's sad is CLASS SICS says you still need elevation (check classics forum fo info) aight.. class sic has a good reputatin (on this site) but your second line was a decent punch We can put ur album up for charity and ur shit still wouldn’t drop I’ll Brake ur Waist and Feet so u can Brag about Repping Hip Hop charity.. drop.. wha?? the second line is.. bleh u might spit but I vomit , vomit shits that’s hot like the atomic ur skill level would never be high even if u were on chronic whack u might as well not post ur verse cause this battle is already won u wouldn't be hot even if u were rapping with an inflammatory gun pretty nice, even though inflammatory gun is not a word when u done reading this I'll make u leave this site u would never shine even if u had the beacon of light not bad, not great opened u up , so I guess in this battle you could call me the lyrical surgeon Fucked around with your rhymes so many times I'm surprised your still a virgin pretty ok, kinda stretched though I’ve beating u, it’ll replay in ur head like a chorus u can only refrain I want to know who died and left you in charge so I can kill them again like they said, doesn't really rhyme, and not that great a closer I could finish this 'quick' wit the complex 'punches' i throw... Forget about his dick...i think he needs he is game to grow... ok wordplay, not a great opener, but an ok punch second line Talkin shit like he left my crew and he hot shit leadin his own route... What the fuck are you talkin bout...i kicked you weak ass the fuck out... kinda stretched first line, ok multi, nice personal though, but "route" and "out" don't really rhyme Run your mouth so fucking much but you have nothing to put on display... Your rhymes are such a joke even mute people have things to say... haha.. very nice, very nice Elevation isn’t meant for cats like you, so stop askin for help... You could use brail on your lines and they still wouldn’t be felt... brail/felt lines = played. Sayin your shit is recognized worldwide and is well known... Yeah right, there’s a better chance of an artificial plant growin... decent Getting into battles and doesn’t even contend or put up a fight... Name should be Big Boi cause you just an Outkast on this site... nice, nice Sure you record looks nice...but ur opponents rhymes look like jokes... Next time you leave a crew dont come bac askin for sum votes... haha... very nice personal Think u could come up with a personal against me? shit thats crazy talk... I leave you so fuckin shook, your permanantly doin the crypt walk... meh.. not great Damn you afraid of emcees that guaranteed to leave u in a hurst?... Seems to me that u havin a major odeal wit having to spit first... pretty nice personal Quit talkin that shit cuz it leaves a very bad impression... Shoulda no showed cuz u werent an even match contestant... better closer than quick ok so like i said, both came kinda inconsistent but LI had more consitency, and he came more personal with his flow. now put my vote back up. |
l.i had dis battle he hade more punches an he hit"Em right on target
his flow drifited smooth an hade a good feel to it his structure stood up stronger than the empire state building vocab was like outta tha dictionary nice an right\\\ quickpunch had sum good stuff an it was on structure\\ it made sense \\ his flow was descent an good his structure was alil crocked but tight\\ vocab was nice 2 it was appealin me v/L.I |
Ight Uppin...yo People If Ur Goin 2 Vote Explain Ur Fuckin Vote Right...this Battle Should Have Been Over A Looooooooong Ass Time Ago
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I thought quick punch had that one. Opener was good. I thought it fell off around the middle:
"We can put ur album up for charity and ur shit still wouldn’t drop I’ll Brake ur Waist and Feet so u can Brag about Repping Hip Hop u might spit but I vomit , vomit shits that’s hot like the atomic ur skill level would never be high even if u were on chronic" They were good but i thought it could have been better. I liked these lines other than being to long "opened u up , so I guess in this battle you could call me the lyrical surgeon Fucked around with your rhymes so many times I'm surprised your still a virgin" U came strong with the similes also. U had good word play. LI was good to but i thought quick was a little better. If i dont vote its cuz i dont have enough posts. But punch had it |
Yo i liked both rhymes though LI... some of your lines didnt even rhyme.. which kinda threw me off a little on the flow... Quickpunch had a goof battle... Im sensing some hatred in these lines lol and not just i wanna win hatred either...
My vote goes to quickpunch... Good personals... and more consistant flow... RETURN THE FAV http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120612 |
yo keep the votes comin ppl...come on dont sleep on this...hit it up.....nice flow L.I. dont think it was ur best
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hows he gonna say my ish didnt even rhyme....u didnt even read it did u.....wow..........
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Li came hard on that one but i think quick puch got this one,Li was tight but the lines sometime seemed a lil' long but i liked how you used two rhymes in one line;
"I could finish this 'quick' wit the complex 'punches' i throw... Forget about his dick...i think he needs he is game to grow..." that shows skillfull writing even though it could ve touched up but good for this, i like the words that qp used to end lines with like "opened u up , so I guess in this battle you could call me the lyrical surgeon Fucked around with your rhymes so many times I'm surprised your still a virgin" that is a experimental writer in the works, i would vote but not enough posts. |
yo man some1 vote on this battle...COME ON PEEOPLE..WE WILL VOTE ON UR BATTLES HONESTLY...LETS GO
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i hope u get DQ'ed for uppin and pm'ing me for votes
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uh its fine 2 pm 2 tell ppl 2 vote on ur battles as long as they vote honestly...some dont even vote for me which is coo cause half the time i dont bring my best....so fuck of kuniva...damn ur annoyin pussy..pce
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well... apparently i dont like u... but yet u still seem to pm me for votes... would that get annoying to anyone else... yes... its annoying...
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