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Killah Bwoy vs shadows edge
this is gon' be a good battle
10 lines ill go first no d/r cv or biting no feedin good luck 1 hour to spit after check in |
You gonna check in sometime soon? This not my check in cuz I still gotta go shower..
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Alright... I'm checking in the second you check in...
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aiight im checkin in dawg good luck dawg im nervous lmfao...good luck though
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Checking in man.. sorry forgot to.. thought you said you were ready though?
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Ok.. not that I really care but you have 5 minutes to drop by your rules... you still around or did you get grounded or some shit?
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How you gonna go offline? wtf... I'll drop tomorrow then.
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intro:
JEA ITS KILLAH BWOY WHAT IS FUCKIN' GOOD MY NIGGA my boi: ya im all gravy homie ,hey yo i here that bitch shadows edge tryna battle u ME: yeah that punk ass bitch tryin to battle me yo im finna rip this kat fo real dawg niggaz in the street: dawg imma bid 100 dollars on killah bwoy GET HIM KILLAH drunk old bum: im going to place 2 dollars on shadows edge *nigga from street slaps him" old man are you stupid whos gonna place a bid for that wack kid shadows edge no wonder you poor you fuckin bitch ME: hey yo hey yo there go shadow right now home boi: aiight u ready me: dawg plz dont even ask that question we all know imma rap this kid home boi: aiight yo rip this bitch a new ass hole!!!! *walks up gives a dangerous glance at shadow steps to his face grabs the mic and starts rappin: verbally Demolish ya lines Step to me And You'll get blown away like a proximity mine.../ Ya Flow Ya structure ya rhymes it was all originally mine I gave it to you 'cause your ass-cheeks i wasn't tryna be-kind../ Fuck Shadows edge,drop a verse near his feet have him dodgin' my lines singin Killah's Pledge/ This kid jus' started rappin' and he's already "fallin' off" Take the Win push this kid over the ledge..../ Battle me and you'll lose ya life,lose ya nike's Jordan fans don't like me 'cause I rip up "mic's"(mikes)..../ Spit sharp lyriks like swords N' Pikes Now shadows runnin' down the street becuase he heard I rip up Dikes....../ My lines brutally rip hoes...This kid has more losses then his fuckin' zip code....../ Blast ya thoughts on the wall,shadow you think you gon' win? I DONT THINK SO!./ 'cause im so skitzooo....-franic,dont panic,blast you off the face of the planet.../ You a 42 year old prostitute like janet, enuff of this shit "CLICK CLICK BOOM" now its ova god damnit..../ lmfao i think that was kinda garbage oh well lets see how shadow duz good luck mayn |
i didnt go offline iwas typin dawg lmfao...........good luck homie..................
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LMMFAO@the intro to that shit
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oh and dawg we still koo patna the intro was nuffin jus too boost the comp up u kno lmfao yeah good luck dawg
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oh and a proximity mine is wen u put a bomb sum where near u and wen they walk passsed it they blow the hell up...incase yall didnt know lol...ud also get it if u played 007
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I thought this cat might have skill.. but as luck would have it This cat’s best chance of winning is with a three hour skit… How he gonna win when his Barr(bar) wider than Roseanne? That’s why when he look in the mirror he see his only fan… Aight.. moving on… check it: At the mic this cat try to spit, but his mouth stuck on suction You should add my verse to your crew… its your lyrical destruction You and your fag crew call yourself rap artists - bitch stop… Bouncing on each others waist don’t make you hip hop I got you nervous, offering my dick lip service to drop half assed Cuz your word-play couldn’t be sick if it had a hospital cast Punches all played, like u bought ‘em from the “best of ‘03” shelf N bite so much, swallowing your verse leave me full of myself Man I could battle no shows n you still the weakest I’ve faced Head of a whack crew, my verse got you replaced… … with white chalk lines traced |
Alright.. upping this shizzo for votes...
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That intro was the dumbest shit ive ever fuckin seen. Thats all i have to say
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Don't freepost. That's all I have to say.
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yo vote on my battles thanx
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this was a hott battle....crazy punches from both..i think shadows came a little harder tho especially his first 2 bars...sick shyt fam..killah had some sick shyt too tho..i was feelin both verses...lots of wordplay in both..good structure on both flow was perfect easy reads one of the best battles i have seen felt both pieces..so my vote is.....
tie :-D na jk my vote go to shadows edge by a lil killah almost had this but i think shadows first two bars were sick and made him win ~1~ can someone please vote on a battle in my sig |
breakdown for killah bwoy:
flow:choppy for the most part in spots it worked but not well enough for me keep trying though 5/10 volcab:alright job i guess nothing special though 6/10 punches:some alright lines nothing i'm gonna quote though you know what worked and what didn't keep on it though 6/10 overall:17/30 well written verse with some room to improve breakdown for shadows edge: flow:good not above average but solid and better then your oppenent 7/10 volcab:alright you win here too 7/10 punches:some alright open disses and some basic personals nothing amazing but keep working on it 6/10 overall:20/30 vote--shadow's edge |
I ain't tryin to hate but that intro was kinda wack...........anyway, Killah came wit some alright punches, his verse lacked any really hard hitting ones though. It just felt like it was missing something........... Shadow had the same effect on me until I saw one line.......
Punches all played, like u bought ‘em from the “best of ‘03” shelf N bite so much, swallowing your verse leave me full of myself ^^^That one sealed it for me....... Vote - Shadow |
Aight.. thanks for the feedback and honest votes everyone... just drop a link and I'll return the favor..
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Upping...
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http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...73&page=1&pp=15
vote here and il return the favour |
v/ Shadow
Because shadow edges structure was readable and he flowed while Killa bwoy had wack structure and his punches were there but its impossible to make a good punch with no flow the only thing good was your INTRO anyway as i was saying Killa bwoy had more mulits i thinlmk but at the end of the day PUNCHES IS WHAT COUNTS IN A BATTLE.. so i`m going with shadow because i liked the chalk line. |
Upping ...
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Just one more vote people...
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Quote:
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ok check it
verbally Demolish ya lines Step to me And You'll get blown away like a proximity mine.../ Ya Flow Ya structure ya rhymes it was all originally mine I gave it to you 'cause your ass-cheeks i wasn't tryna be-kind../ should have switched these around an it woulda have been better it was decent though Fuck Shadows edge,drop a verse near his feet have him dodgin' my lines singin Killah's Pledge/ This kid jus' started rappin' and he's already "fallin' off" Take the Win push this kid over the ledge..../ another long ass line coulda have been worded beter at the end Battle me and you'll lose ya life,lose ya nike's Jordan fans don't like me 'cause I rip up "mic's"(mikes)..../ Spit sharp lyriks like swords N' Pikes Now shadows runnin' down the street becuase he heard I rip up Dikes....../ good use of multies nice first line and decent punch again lmao the rest i aint even feal like postin you know it wasnt even that good one of the weakest verses you done shoulda used shit like this against me lmao I thought this cat might have skill.. but as luck would have it This cat’s best chance of winning is with a three hour skit… How he gonna win when his Barr(bar) wider than Roseanne? That’s why when he look in the mirror he see his only fan… i liked this nice shit good wordplay in and nice punchs all the other shit to lazy to post up it was good in spots and bad in other spots some were pretty weak punchs should have just left out the chalk line thing overall though pretty good verse vote shadows edge rematch this though wanna see it again later |
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