Certified Vz Real Thorough
 

10lines max verse due today, 2nite wateva...
i jus keyed this, NO WRITTENS, jus get it dun dawg aight....


Spitting nitro on ya raps/ automatically 'combusting' ya verse into un-healthy propane gas,
whilst spiking a curry for laugh's so when ya drop attack'z ure not only dropping this baord sum rapz,
Ure spitting bricks...heavy manuscipts 'bull' tounge twisting werd filling typical 'im a noobie shit',
thats why i laughed when i checked ya battle links, coz all ya lines are flat like the muscles on pasifists,
Im ripping ya turf up, this includes 'weilding' weapons for these 'battle feilds',
all i need is a pen 'a' peice a paper, but u cud have a gun an still cunt range lines of spray to kill,
Ya outta ma league, ure posisition jus aint responsible for me even tryna use lethal werds,
i dont need the stats, i jus look at his sig quality an think 'yea he suits a cerw fulla herbs',
I concern ma'self with bongs, when i draw i gong with authority like big-ben,
but then when does an emcee on the streets i battle, have a nerdy obssesion to x-men....

yo once u guys are finished ill vote but in the mean timego vote in ecko vs flow
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120549

biatch get the fuk off freeposting dawg...how the fuk can if its locked stupid ass bitch

waiting for ya shit dawg........dont let this drift aight man

Aight fam. here I am, I had bitness to take care of.

IT was real untill I made the spill!

Did something speak? In the middle of your verse people get up and leave
This kid wears his mind on his shirt...that's why no tricks up his sleeve
Keepin em' there, this Charlie Brown falls so the greiving's unfair
If your dad were King, I'd suffocate him and relieve him of heir (air)
I'm done listening, now it's time to shit on this dude... fuck pissing
Leave this shit like stealing from Germans.... have vers in sub-mission
Object of discrimination, hopped in the street and stopped for demonstration
That verse was so much bologna, you lost from Process of Elimination
Pee ya pants??? knocked offa ya feet now you just need to re-stance
I'll leave a javelin through your chest so now you are considered free lance

nice verse dawg, nuff respect....liked ya flow

X-men-as in his avatar

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hey vote on mine I'll vote on this one. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120615

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Spitting nitro on ya raps/ automatically 'combusting' ya verse into un-healthy propane gas,
whilst spiking a curry for laugh's so when ya drop attack'z ure not only dropping this baord sum rapz,
-The first line was tight, the second not so much I give this opener-7

Ure spitting bricks...heavy manuscipts 'bull' tounge twisting werd filling typical 'im a noobie shit',
thats why i laughed when i checked ya battle links, coz all ya lines are flat like the muscles on pasifists,
-Again the first line was real tight the second not as, but still good- 8

Im ripping ya turf up, this includes 'weilding' weapons for these 'battle feilds',
all i need is a pen 'a' peice a paper, but u cud have a gun an still cunt range lines of spray to kill,
-This was alright, the first was leading into the second for the punch and it was all right- 6

Ya outta ma league, ure posisition jus aint responsible for me even tryna use lethal werds,
i dont need the stats, i jus look at his sig quality an think 'yea he suits a cerw fulla herbs',
-This was good I think ya could have cleaned it up a bit to deliver more of a punch none the less a 7

I concern ma'self with bongs, when i draw i gong with authority like big-ben,
but then when does an emcee on the streets i battle, have a nerdy obssesion to x-men....
Nice finisher- 8

IT was real untill I made the spill!

Did something speak? In the middle of your verse people get up and leave
This kid wears his mind on his shirt...that's why no tricks up his sleeve
-Tight opener, the first line was kinda off but the second was on target-8

Keepin em' there, this Charlie Brown falls so the greiving's unfair
If your dad were King, I'd suffocate him and relieve him of heir (air)
-This was kinda off, not really feel'n this punch-6

I'm done listening, now it's time to shit on this dude... fuck pissing
Leave this shit like stealing from Germans.... have vers in sub-mission
-Nice mulit which lead up to a solid punch- 7

Object of discrimination, hopped in the street and stopped for demonstration
That verse was so much bologna, you lost from Process of Elimination
-Again a ,6 nice multi acutaly I'ma give this an 7 cause I like the second line

Pee ya pants??? knocked offa ya feet now you just need to re-stance
I'll leave a javelin through your chest so now you are considered free lance
-A pretty good punch I give it a 7

36 total for Certified
35 total for Real

No added points both had tight flows, and the lengths were the same

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dis was a real good battle i liked both flows had soem tite verses

certified came wit some tite shit he used some good ass vocab and had some good punches structure need work tho other than dat nice drop started off good wit his opener and closer

bestline-Spitting nitro on ya raps/ automatically 'combusting' ya verse into un-healthy propane gas,

^^ nice start

worste line-didnt have 1 none of yall linez came on da down side


real-
had a good flow u had betta structure dropped descent punches and came hard started off real good and ended on da same note

bestline-Did something speak? In the middle of your verse people get up and leave
This kid wears his mind on his shirt...that's why no tricks up his sleeve

^^^ start off was good

worsteline-Keepin em' there, this Charlie Brown falls so the greiving's unfair
If your dad were King, I'd suffocate him and relieve him of heir

didnt catch my eye ^^^

certifed-

open-10/10
strucure-7/10
punches-9/10
vocab-10/10
personals-9/10
close-9/10

real

open-9.5/10
strucure-9/10
punches-8/10
vocab-9/10
personals-8/10
close-9/10

winner goes to certifed he had betta vocab but his structure need work otha then dat his drop was hott and real u had a hott drop 2 juss dat his vocab got da big shout out of eirthing so good luck rest of da way

vote-certified

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Ayo aight aight, I might fall on this "one" but nevah again yo, yo ish was real also though, word luhv son.

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i would have to say real thro got this one though it was kinda close, but he had better lines, and certified you need to learn how to put it down, words were ok but learn how to spell.

i need to learn...learn how to spell, on the net! on a rapwebsite!, ure basing my verse on how i spelt my vocab....thats the stupidist vote ive herd an i ve been round a while....u dint vote antways

uppin, fuck that stupid ass votes...fukin bullshit proper lijit understandable votes only

aiight this was a hott battle...real u had a couple good punches that were ill and hit hard ..i think u definately could have came better but ya verse was still hott with nice wordplay and multies...good flow and structure...good verse...put together well

real:8/10

certified i think came harder his punches were sick and the wordplay and multies were some of the best i have seen on this board....besides mine :) but u nice and good vocab everything came together good..im gonna have to take a point off for your verse being so non-structured...it was all over the place bars were uneven but overall besides that aspect u took this..

certified: 8.5/10

close battle but certified took it with the strong multies and wordplay nice shyt

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"besides mine :) "

u wish :D

jk....htnax for tha vote.....im coming to poll ures in a couple of min....peaZ preciate it dawg...

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Uppin again this is fukin boring................/////

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Mad dogg....had a good flow, structure was pretty tight too. But his punches were weak, seemed to be gloating mo than hitting actual degrading punches....Dint real feel his verse to much...

Tony....had th better layout and verse structure seemed a lil betetr than 'mad',

this flow game remains the same all scribbles and scratch
in slow mo i show the globe that your a fake ass cat

i mean thats not even a too hard hitting punch, but at least its direct to the guys he'd dissing...na mean...

nMad ya need to build punches up to realte to the bars last line, otherwise theyu dont connect naw mwan???

Vote:Tony....verse had the betetr experience hind it......

Return the favour.....this flow game remains the same all scribbles and scratch
in slow mo i show the globe that your a fake ass cat

Return tha favour.......
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120603

shit wrong thread...........................................

YO check

Cetified
your shit was nice you had a decent opener-vocab was real good
and your punches and personals hit harder then Reals
your all around flow was nice only thing you need ta work on is your
srtucture dogg

Real
your shit was nice but you came off kinda weak with the opener
your voacb was ok but it could of been better- overall your flow was alright
next time hit harder with your punches and you got this.

vote=certified

yall drop an honest vote on
S.Carter Vs. Deleon

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121759

wow cert killed this shit he had punches personals and flow

Cert=8/10
Real=6/10

nice battle on both sides