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violation-to-va2 04-24-04 09:02 PM

violation-to-va vs vinman
 
itte no d/r votes
no crew hate votes
an 5-6 linz quixk battle an u spit 1st with in 16 minx

violation-to-va2 = Original-weed123 = spitfire-+. All banned for cheating
-strobe

vinman 04-24-04 09:11 PM

ok i know im fin to lose though


look at this nigger by the name of violation / when i done this bitch he gone be on probation/ he say that he gone take all that is mine/ if he does he gone to have a 100 dollar fine/ but i got all the respect for him/ with his muscle neck ass always working in the gym/ well that the end of this verse/ watch yall will see that all this nigger do is cuse

vinman 04-24-04 09:21 PM

come on dude spit u know u gone win

vinman 04-24-04 09:23 PM

if you dont spit i will win i think

vinman 04-24-04 09:27 PM

come on spit

violation-to-va2 04-24-04 09:28 PM

vinman sounds like a chumps name,if i wasn't mistakein u lost 1 audition to start yah 15 mins of fame\\
this shouldn't count this as a compo,cause lil fat ass niggas like him i just stop on\\
when i get off probation imma come to yo crib,to fix da problem dismantel ur head\\
it"ll be quick an painless don't worry it won't hurt,it"ll be like u neva exsited ur body will suddenly merk,\\
an if u can count i said 5-6 linz,boi what is wrong withchu u typical easier than true crimes\\
but yah grammer need a lott of pratice,it was just like me in da gym benching u ill-matic\\
u just like a fly always being pesky,u run up against me in dis battle i will flex the\\
this is over because u prolly already cryin,my 1st an 2nd text linz was like bullets they had u tha confused diein\\

vinman 04-24-04 09:28 PM

at the end cuse is meant to be curse so it can ryme with veres

violation-to-va2 04-24-04 09:29 PM

u should have used multis it would have made it hotters an thats 9 battles linz

vinman 04-24-04 09:30 PM

good now lets get some votes

vinman 04-24-04 09:34 PM

hey mine is 5 lines just not double spaced

C.March 04-24-04 09:37 PM

YO VINMAN GET ON OUR BATTLE

its VINMAN VS WHITE POWDER

violation-to-va2 04-24-04 09:43 PM

uppppppppppin dem vottttttttttttttttessssssssss ill return dem votes

C.March 04-24-04 09:49 PM

Yo my votes for Violation because he had a better flow. I didnt like his ending or his second line, though I thought he had better punches.

Vin didnt really make to much sense in his flow, His whole flow didnt have to many punches. His flows wernt that good.

Violation overall had a better battle. My votes for him.

C.March 04-24-04 09:49 PM

I dont have 20 posts yet so i cant vote dammit lol

spitfire-+ 04-24-04 10:02 PM

itte my vote goes to v-t-va2 once again because his hade made alil more sense than vin
but one thang about vin is his selfsteem to low he needs to elevate an i think ovall his flow was not good as well as his stru,puch,an voca good trying tho
va hade more punches voca an it was good use of his skillz
v/v2

violation-to-va2 04-24-04 10:32 PM

uppppppin dem votes explain good also ill return da honest favor

violation-to-va2 04-24-04 11:05 PM

uppin 4 sum explanded votes thanz ill return da favor honesly

Unknown Assassin 04-24-04 11:21 PM

my votes to vinman because he tries so hard and his shits always so goddamm funny

L.I. 04-24-04 11:22 PM

ok breakdown.......
Opener - neither...both were boring...
Flow - violation...obvious...
Punches - violation...he actually had punches...
Multi's - none were that great...
Closer - violation...it was simply just better...

Now this was a very boring battle.....both need to elevate...violation go to tutorials n learn how to get better punches....vit u need to learn everything.....jus keep elevatin guys..yall will get better...........

Vote - violation

violation-to-va2 04-25-04 02:33 AM

upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin dem votes easy battle here ill return da favor

violation-to-va2 04-25-04 02:36 AM

uppin dem votes

Da Vinci 04-25-04 02:58 AM

Well this one goes to violation,

opener-violation
flow-violation
punches-violation
overall-vilation
complexity-both not overall complex
originality- ???? not really here, nothing to jaw dropping

This was a decent battle, I agree but totally one sided.

vote on mah shit

FlowIntelligent. 04-25-04 03:36 AM

wow this battle was ass....vinman dont rap anymore word..violation u better than that your flow wasnt that good either..u had a couple good punches and some wordplay and multis and usually my explanation is longer than this but this battle isnt worthy...violation should havecame harder even if it is a easy battle

vote: violation

can someone please vote on a battle in my sig


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