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Bojangler vs. Flow Intelligent
10-15 lines, be done in 30 mins.
-bojangler |
you spit first.
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yo, I'll vote on this when its dropped when you vote on mine.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120615 |
ok flow intelligent ... i guess i'll go first.
yo flow, you ain't intelligent, battlin the jangle master cause i leave ya split in half, like magic-box disasters the bars you spit entrap yourself like clumsy child molesters ya less intelligent than babies who are still in third trimesters meanwhile, i spit bars solider than those at fort knox (place where gold bars are stockpiled) my rap leave ya pantin like SARS, or as if you just sucked 4 cocks ya only intelligent flow is pouring out ya cranium i leave ya ass underground, like unflowered geraniums bust out your four-leaf clover, if ya wanna stay a 3-d man or this rap will 'roll you over', like minutes on wireless plans the only way you win battle raps is ridin dongs no wonder you got more 'claps' than gospel songs and more aids than refreshing sports drinks (i.e. gator'ade') i congealed then concealed your brain son, now how ya gonna think |
my bad fam i hard to get offline for a lil while ill drop my verse now
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aiight check it...
this guy has 2 faces even his hand dont want to date// your so ugly u have to fake an orgasm when u masturbate// you say your dope..your not..youll get choked and dropped// i hope you stop..cuz im waistin lines on someone who hopes hes hott// i spark when i rap..u act hard u will discard when i start to clap// you could fall in a "cardiac arrest" and your "heart still couldnt attatck"// youll never be classic come sick or forever be ravaged// i spit castratin lines that will sever your package// the measure of drastic is that your ass is treasure for faggots// to battle me you must find pleasure in caskets// murder you?! im doin it...and if you get used to this verbal abussiveness// then ill have to start beating you with my bars untill u need a tube to piss// im sorry mr bojangle but im gonna leave ya body tangled// break ya neck and leave ya chin hanging by ya ankles// ~1~ |
uppin it
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uppin for votes will return the favor
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Yep.. flow intelligent had this one for sure. Bojangler.. you had the vocab category and you had nice rhymes.. but your punches were lacking. The personal with the name = brains spilling was nice.. but the rest of your verse was lacking bad. Flow meanwhile had sick wordplay, check it:
"you could fall in a "cardiac arrest" and your "heart still couldnt attatck"//" Flow, you still gotta elevate.. a lot of your punches are kinda basic, but still a pretty decent verse. Both of you guys, concentrate on original, personal punches rather than wordplay n vocab. Work on using setup lines ot make your punches stronger... Return the favor on Shadow v J_Rip |
HA! funny shit mangs.
BJ-"yo flow, you ain't intelligent, battlin the jangle master cause i leave ya split in half, like magic-box disasters"-this was pretty funny "the only way you win battle raps is ridin dongs no wonder you got more 'claps' than gospel songs"-this one was ur best punch, and one of the funniest i've seen in a while, good one, lol. ur ending-"and more aids than refreshing sports drinks (i.e. gator'ade') i congealed then concealed your brain son, now how ya gonna think" was another pretty good punch. FL-i liked how u kept doggin him for being ugly, it was like readin a story, me likey. "this guy has 2 faces even his hand dont want to date// your so ugly u have to fake an orgasm when u masturbate//"-the opener was hardcore man, that shit was soooo funny "the measure of drastic is that your ass is treasure for faggots// to battle me you must find pleasure in caskets//" the 'ass' line was pretty sicc, if i woulda done it tho, i would switched the lines around. still good "im sorry mr bojangle but im gonna leave ya body tangled// break ya neck and leave ya chin hanging by ya ankles//" the closer was good too, so it felt like the whole thing was pretty solid, go start-middle-finish. i liked this battle, but i really do'nt know who to vote for, i'm'a leave and come back in a while. lol, ok, i read them again, and flow's was easier to understand, BJ, some of your's i just didn't get. vote- flizzow |
good look on votes and feedback will return the favor ~1~
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uppin for votes post links if u want a honest vote ~1~
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uppin for votes will return the favor please poll votes
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uppin for votes i will return the favor ~1~
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yo i aint got the energy to go into detail
my brain is only workin on half steam FLOW - tie both y'all had sum gud flow to ure spits, i was feelin them both. STRUCTURE - tie similar structure from both so obviously it gonna be a tie. PUNCHES - flowintelligent bojangler u had sum gud punches to begin with but then ure shit just fell off. flow kept the punches comin hard through the whole battle CREATIVITY - flowintelligent flow used better wordplay in the battle i think but both y'all need to start usin more personals equipped wit gud setup lines. work on that shit and u'd be sicker. OVERALL vote to flow cuz he just came harder wit the punches and he showed a lot more creativity with his lines. return the favour on my battles links in the sig. u do need 100 posts 4 my battle wit jigga |
both of you had really good punches, this one is hard to call
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good look on feedback uppin for votes
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uppin for votes i will return the favor ~1~
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uppin for votes drop a link and i'll return the favor
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Bojangler....Few weak lines
Work on hard punches...Some was funny some was blah complexity was hard...Very understandable..Structure was aight Keep elevatin 2/5 Flows-You had a few weak punches but some was harder than bokangler Structure was good so..COmplexity was very hard to understand Easy to read....Harder punches and thats what A battle needs 3.5/10 Return the favor will ya...I have a uppin hack on me so I can post more than once in a battle...Here the link....Return it im waitin |
heres the link http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121779
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done
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gd battle
Bo jangler you did hit flow intelligent alot for bein dumb, loadz of jokes in ur verse, i duno why ppl votin 4 flow intelligent his rhymes werent that funny but every1 is entitled to their own opinion.
comedy - bo jangler, rhymed - flow punches - bo jangler overall bo jangler vote 4 me and ill return favor http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121372 |
are you goin to return the favor or should I report this
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Flow edged by i think it was close but he came harder with punches i think.
Flow=6/10 Bo=5/10 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
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This battle came down to the punches..... I think you both had them... some were strong some were weak.... This is how imma have to break it down...
Bojang came pretty good with the punches... Not bad at all Flow came even better with the punches.. which werent bad... Overall Flow had better punches... and my vote goes to him.. |
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