<<Oc6 The Caustic VS STriniBonafide>>
 

14 Lines max, 10 lines min.
No hate votes or d/r votes.
You spit first, verse do in 25mins max. after Check in.
Same rules apply for me.

Check in STriniBonafide, and good luck.

Let's go , drop ya verse dawg

Sorry I took long to reply...didn't realise u called me out yet

Its u the Caustic, who just caused it//
pause this battle, before you lost it//
I want my nickle back, the nickle dat, your mama took, I cost it.//

Cost this, me trini, Cause me divide by u infinity//
You gave me cause, now I effect, techno on this mic
...check//
I'm a wreck handicapping myself to prevent a supernova//
News forecast: "The hottest month now this year forecasted for October"//
I regretted all my sins befo son but seeing u relives it over//
how I raced a dog to be your father, but he just beat me over//
the sound of your beatings resound worldwide...from Trinidad to Dover//
if this shit was a movie Mel Gibson must have directed it... oh brother//
Bother! Every body will witness this massacre//
no anti-semitism here tho, just a personal whoop ass//

Aight, I'll be droppin soon playa.

My Verse
 

Yo: (For some punches to make sense, hit up his profile first)

I'm gonna make this cat stand out worse then the midnight sun/
What the fuck you doin' on a PC, with a degree, at the age of 21?/

Don't post like your a shining king, your just a peon to me/
My skills will make your Trinidad land sink right back in the Carribean Sea/

Checking your profile was the funniest shit to me/
You got a major, but have nothing greater, then to be a bitch emcee/

Everybody on here laughs when they see the name bonafide/
Because your crossed between "all talk" and a "pussy", the biggest two sides eversince Jekyll and Hyde/

Stop the rap while to you still have a rep and stick to computer science/
Your entering the Oc6 Battle Program which you won't be saved by trouble shooter reliance/

Why say "who wanna lose, I wanna bust someone up quick?"
I'll do everybody a favor and make this "joker" dissapear worse then a card trick/

See how my rhymes flow together nicley, your joke lines will cause a riot to confluent/
My talant is tempting to feast upon and make you get the fuck off your diet of music/

Can we get some Votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Uppin on votes^^^^^^^^

Come on, vote, Drop a link too........I'll holla

aiight this was a hott battle for OC6...strini had an ok verse but it was almost all filler hardly any punches no wordplay no nothing only thing u did good was structure...OC6 had a good verse felt the whole thing..personals/punches were ill..structure flow wordplay was perfect..nice drop from you...i wasnt really feelin the closer tho...seemed more like filler than a punch but overall good battle...

vote:OC6

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can someone please vote on any of my battles

Thanks for the vote, I'll return in one of your battles. Still Uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Kinda weak battle fellas...strini your punches were weak an half the time mad no sense, no wordplay visible, vocab was basic, opener weak, closer weak, I can only give u props for flow that was the only goood thing, no disrespect but you need to elevate
Oc6....not your strongest verse, but you had a few good punches I wasn't feelin' some of them but the ones that hit were good an hard, some wordplay, vocab was good, structure was lil off, an flow was off alil, opener could f been better, closer was ok, but overall you had the better verse, good drop
Vote: Oc6

Aight good lookin on the honesty. Still Uppin for Votes^^^^^^^^ Drop a link, I'll holla.

Trini: Need more punches, more wordplay, get personal w/ his ass, keep it up.
Oc6: Good punches, nice wordplay - Fav line:
"Stop the rap while to you still have a rep and stick to computer science/
Your entering the Oc6 Battle Program which you won't be saved by trouble shooter reliance"

Vote: Oc6

dam this was simple so i aint goin into detail
punches n wordplay win battles imo
Vote: ocs
Strini: just keep practicin n elevate son
peace

Cud Sum1 drop an honest vote on
D~Illar~1{vs}Supreme

Aight good lookin, Lets get some more votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Drop a link, You know i'll holla. Lets close this^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

UPPIN^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Drop a link playa's, Lets vote^^^

Come On People One More Freakin Vote!!!^^^^^^^^^^^

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oc 6 won this battle almost everylevel hadder better personals some where pretty sick nice wordplay and punchs hit hared good job of focusin on your opponent nice verse just work on multies and some wordplay and strini work on not stretchin your lines with words that arent needed and u had soem word play but need to get more to make your punchs hit harder not a bad verse overall just work on harder hitttin punchs and personals

vote oc6

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120363