Insidious -VS- Qiockpunch
 

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10-20 lines
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30 posts to vote.

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nigga i didnt accept it...so close the thread...sorry...dont wanna battle right now..i posted that shit last nite......i'll battle u lata fo now close this thread...pce

that's str8, but another time 4 sho.

figurin out how to close now... :laugh:

thanks for understanding....anyways good luck with ur next battles...sorry didnt mean 2 blow u off..pce

ight man....i'll battle u just spit ur shit i'll be waitin....

DO NOT FEED....NOO FEEDING OF ANY OF MY LINES...

Dick rider, I removed this biter from my nuts like I had crabs
Your reputation and notebook are all the same full of bad raps
I realized ur mom didn't want you, watch QP put this in action
hated me so much she spent hours in labor trying to put you back in
I'll Castrate u With A Butter Knife and Do It With Success, Look At My Verse and Start To Assess
You Say You're Big, Who u Trying to Impress?, u remind me of Rosie O'Donnald Another Dyke In The Press
I Start With No Hesitation, merkin You Is My Obligation I'll Do It For Free, with no Motivation-or-Compensation
Now Watch this Transformation From Man To Beast with a 1-2 Combination.
I’ll Put you To Rest In Your Final-Destination
Bobbing For Apples, i'll Smack you Before You Bite
Your A Virgin Rapper, Teasing Me so u Think You Tight (haha)
This kid is serious about posting hot rhymes but I don’t know why he even pretends
Cause like the last 4 lines of his every verse this faggot only cums hard in the-ends
Take ur flow and demolish it, face in the carpet like your about to munch
Come On Hit me in the mouth bitch, I’m quick to spit out a punch

aallllrighty theeeeen...good luck :D

NOT! i could give a fuck about u or whether or not u accept this loss,
ok ok...i'm sorry i said that, come back, u know i just like to be the boss :hump:
by the end of this rhyme i'll have u spinnin in ya chair,
screamin to ya mommy "NO NO NO! INSIDIOUS DOESN'T PLAY FAIR!",
my line's hit u like they were concrete, everythings solid in my spit,
after u read this and 'digest it' it'll leave u shittin bricks

ur ass can't spit a good rhyme if u tried night after night and got to BITE!
see, u'd need a collaboration just to make that peice at least HALF nice,
quick'll prolly whine and complain how after this he should get respect,
when u were born...how MUCH female DNA DID they inject?
pm-ing me like, "since u can't close it i guess we'll go",
ya see, u tried to avoid it but i still get to tear up that hole, :hump:
i prolly used the hump thing too much in this rhyme...it's for humiliation,
but that's the easiest way for me to describe our situation.

this fool thought he could beat me...after this he'll block me see-
this fool couldn't 'put me on ice' if he coached a hockey team.

explanation- the DNA line was because females are always complaining, look at DP for instance, (lmao), the CONCRETE line- my line's are concrete, ppl say u digest what u read, he's shittin bricks, whateva.

let's get then votes in 4 sho!

uppin for votes, come on ppl, let's see some results

wtf? this was a good battle, let's get some votes! oh, and that line-
"ur ass can't spit a good rhyme if u tried night after night and got to BITE!"
for those of u that do'nt know, biting is stealing other ppl's lines, it's pretty much unheard of on RB, but yes, IT COULD HAPPEN TO U!

wtf? this was a good battle, let's get some votes! oh, and that line-
"ur ass can't spit a good rhyme if u tried night after night and got to BITE!"
for those of u that do'nt know, biting is stealing other ppl's lines, it's pretty much unheard of on RB, but yes, IT COULD HAPPEN TO U! :evilgrin:

UPPIN!

uppin for votes, please vote on battles in my sig if got time too!

uppin this shit for votes ppl, leave a link and we'll return the favor!

hott battle feelin both verses i think u both came hard and consistent but QP i dont think u had any real hard punches u had some good shyt no doubt tho...and your multi lines were just filler wasnt interestering me...once again which i have stated countless times when usin multies iss the person it makes u take the battle hands down...when u got punches wordplay multies and flow in just one bar thats killer...QP u came nice tho...sid u had a hott verse too i dont really like your structure and the fact that now i dont wanna be anywhere near u cuz obvioulsy u like to fuck guys lol jk but u had a good verse and i felt your punches more than QP's i think u took this battle by a lil but u still need to elevate and use multies/wordplay nice shyt from both

vote: sid

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Thought QP won structure, punches, personals, all the important things in the rap. Insidious, I just didn't feel like you came hard or took this nigga seriously. QP gets my vote, for maintainin' his flow throughout and comin' hard like he was hungry for it.

ight thanks for the honest votes yalll....keep hittin this up ight?...we'll return the honest votes in ur battles so drop a link also

A'ight...wasn't tha greatest battle...

QuickP...your structure is fucked...but luckily I don't vote for battles on structure. I thought your punches hit where it hurts...you kept it fresh during everyline, other than dykes and shit...homosexual jokes are played...don't use 'em...overall, a'ight verse, could use some werk, biggest downfall was the structure and flow...

7/10

Inisidious...not a great verse...punches were played...personals were weak...the biggest accomplsihment in your verse was your flow and structure, but that still wasn't the best...overall...werk on ya shit...

4/10

Vote- Quickpunch

No hate...hit this up honestly...thx...

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120132

ight thanks for the honesty....hit this up with honest well explained votes..dont just say 2 setences and vote cause it wont count...hit this up

well this was a good like he said both of them was kind of evenly matched in the end i gone give it to in sidous// i say this because of one thing he had over qiuck punch he was funny/ qiuck had a betta opening and endind but his flow went on and off but those other two made it a good battle note: this was a hard battle to choosse to from

aiyo this was a pretty weak battle...

Quickpunch
Structure-2/10
Punches2/10-there was only one...
you need to type and rephrase your shit a lil better man

Insidiou...you lacked in all categories....I see where u goin with ya shit...but u need to connect ya punches and be a lil more smooth and original

vote-QP

ight yall keep the honest votes coming....will return ur battles with an honest vote...REMEMBER THAT

Yo this was a good a good battle but I was feelin insidious verse more. Quick
ur verse was good but I think u coulda came harder. The endin didnt really close the deal for me u coulda up it a bunch. Insidious had me rollin with this shit-

by the end of this rhyme i'll have u spinnin in ya chair,
screamin to ya mommy "NO NO NO! INSIDIOUS DOESN'T PLAY FAIR!",
my line's hit u like they were concrete, everythings solid in my spit,
after u read this and 'digest it' it'll leave u shittin bricks

The endin was not that good but Overall I think u got this

Vote-Insidious
Truth no Hate!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

aight this was an ok battle could of been better well anyways
QP=u did alright i know u could of did better some of ur punches hit hard not all thoughur structure was ok so was ur flow u could of elevated that would of helped
overall ill say like a 7/10

insid=u did ok but i was gettin the feelin like u didnt even try...u shouldent have to clarify wut some of ur lines mean..i got wut they mean though people could figure it out u know wut i mean well anyways ur structure was ok ur flow was cool u could of hit harder wit ur punches u could of elevated so overall i'll say ummm.6/10
u should battle him again this was a close battle so my vote goes to QP

thank's for the honest votes! i explained mine tho, cuz i've seen ppl doing it, and even tho to most of us it's obvious, there're a select few who do'nt get it, lol, and JUST INCASE THEY VOTE i want them to know what up. but that's straight ecko, good lookin out. let's get some more votes, this is clizzose!

vote for my battle agaisnt da jazz and i will return the favor

ight thanks for the votes yall...keep it comin...thanks ....we'll return the favor in honesty votes

this was a hot battle yo but sid had better punches and word play but punch had better flow but it was close but ma vote is

sid

did u already vote in here? oh wait, u couldn't decide, i'll go ahead and vote in urs, just cuz i got nothin to do.
peace

^^^that was to vinman.

oh shit...this is close punch, let's get that last vote in! good luck punch

hey isnce i voted yall battles can you look at my battle agaisnt da jazz i will return the favor again thanks

Dick rider, I removed this biter from my nuts like I had crabs
Your reputation and notebook are all the same full of bad raps
hmm.. ok.. the first line had nothing to do with the second.. not great
I realized ur mom didn't want you, watch QP put this in action
hated me so much she spent hours in labor trying to put you back in
hated you? or hated him? either way, kinda played but not bad
I'll Castrate u With A Butter Knife and Do It With Success, Look At My Verse and Start To Assess
You Say You're Big, Who u Trying to Impress?, u remind me of Rosie O'Donnald Another Dyke In The Press
meh... not great, kinda stretched and forced multi it seems like
I Start With No Hesitation, merkin You Is My Obligation I'll Do It For Free, with no Motivation-or-Compensation
Now Watch this Transformation From Man To Beast with a 1-2 Combination.
I’ll Put you To Rest In Your Final-Destination
hmm... again seems like a forced multi
Bobbing For Apples, i'll Smack you Before You Bite
Your A Virgin Rapper, Teasing Me so u Think You Tight (haha)
pretty ok, pretty ok
This kid is serious about posting hot rhymes but I don’t know why he even pretends
Cause like the last 4 lines of his every verse this faggot only cums hard in the-ends
hmm.. kinda ok, its personal.. but not great
Take ur flow and demolish it, face in the carpet like your about to munch
Come On Hit me in the mouth bitch, I’m quick to spit out a punch
decent closer.. not great

NOT! i could give a fuck about u or whether or not u accept this loss,
ok ok...i'm sorry i said that, come back, u know i just like to be the boss
wtf..
by the end of this rhyme i'll have u spinnin in ya chair,
screamin to ya mommy "NO NO NO! INSIDIOUS DOESN'T PLAY FAIR!",
hmm...interesting style but no real punch...
my line's hit u like they were concrete, everythings solid in my spit,
after u read this and 'digest it' it'll leave u shittin bricks
not bad, not bad

ur ass can't spit a good rhyme if u tried night after night and got to BITE!
see, u'd need a collaboration just to make that peice at least HALF nice,
the rhyme is weak, the first line ruined what could have been a good punch
quick'll prolly whine and complain how after this he should get respect,
when u were born...how MUCH female DNA DID they inject?
theres no such thing as female DNA.. do you mean x chromosome?.. that would just make him retarded, but i dont think thats where you're going with this
pm-ing me like, "since u can't close it i guess we'll go",
ya see, u tried to avoid it but i still get to tear up that hole,
decent
i prolly used the hump thing too much in this rhyme...it's for humiliation,
but that's the easiest way for me to describe our situation.
its just annoying is what it is

this fool thought he could beat me...after this he'll block me see-
this fool couldn't 'put me on ice' if he coached a hockey team.
nice punch, but not the best closer

ok, overall, this was kinda disapointed, I saw a lot of filler on both sides, not much creativity or wordplay that amounted to hard hitting punches. I give it to insidious because he had slightly better flow and a little more wordplay, but it was tight. quick, I've seen you spit much better.

peace.