InSiDiOuS -vs- DeadLYVisiOnz
 

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i spit 1st
STR8 VOTES PPL!
peace

hey,uve both setup but jus spit in whicheva

Zzzzzzzzz

Blah!!

Spit in 10 min am keyin it.

my bad, checkin in. i got disconnected. let's do this, 10 minutes!!!!!!! (at least i'll try)

(i thought i was suppose to set up, my bad)

sid is battlin visions with an intension to kill a master mind,
this kid'll wish he had changed his name to "i-see-suicide",
this cat can't land a punch at all, he ai'nt doing any harm,
he couldn't shoot a hole in a wall if he was inside a barn,
it's time to slaughter this cow, even tho there wasn't beef to start with,
my line's penetrate u leavin u believin i'm "heart-less",
my punches connectin hard, u'll read these and see,
this ai'nt funny, u didn't know sid could have u bleed through the screen,
this is the end and i hope u enjoyed it, time to take a cow,
i can see the votes now...so who's seein deadly visions now?

(damn fool, 1 minute a line, this shit sucked but whatever, i tried, lol)

shit, the last line- time to take a cow, i meant take a bow, lmao, i was in a hurry to post.

Let's end the quarreling now, we should bury-the-hatchet/
I should get out of the business of embarrassing-insidious faggots/
You're a little overzealous like racist cops carrying-badges/
An unruly kid, knew I should've taken those parenting-classes/
From Phoenix??I've got a question, care-if-I-ask-it?/
You myopic? cause I'd never hit you while you're wearing-your-glasses/
No? Good! neither was yo sis--here's your shot at sharing-her-gashes/
gimme a beer? STFU I Put my foot in your ass, make your rectum very-elastic/
By now I was on my way to ripping out your jugular-vein/
Till' the fuckin police, Cprocess the admin and the governor-came/


ciao..............vote fuckers.

ha ha,nice spit deadz,now i know how ma boy can spit.im feelin ya flow.

haHA, nice visionz, let's get them votes!

Yea..........being awhile i did text but...nice battle....we need votes. ama rec fo the battle between me and perpetul audio,.

nice battle pretty even in this one check it

insidiuos one thing first its text so try an make your endings rhyme better but not a very good vere overall punchs werent hittin that hard personals were not there didnt see much i liked and if you aitn fealin a verse then dont rush it aint no time limits fuck em if they bitchin just do ya thang
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it's time to slaughter this cow, even tho there wasn't beef to start with,
my line's penetrate u leavin u believin i'm "heart-less",

visionz i was fealin the rhyme scheme nice shit came with good multies decent opener had a lil bit of everything wasnt fealin the ending i see wha you was doin though it was orginal but a weak punch overall good flow in the verse just work on harder hittin punchs
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You myopic? cause I'd never hit you while you're wearing-your-glasses/
No? Good! neither was yo sis--here's your shot at sharing-her-gashes/

vote visions

Uppun............................thnx

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oooh tight battle indious i liked your structure alot i liked both i think indious had flow just a bit more but then again Deadly`s Creation and multi`s were crazy and he had good punches i think this battle is hard too chose i like indious cos he ccame with basic flowing lines it would be better for AUDIO but still good ima have to go with Deadly though PEace.



AND POLL MY BATTLE ITS 20 POSTS TO VOTE..

uppun...................

Insidous check this

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...057#post1246057

^^ Yo Poll my battle please you have forgoten to poll it.

STop Free Postin Kid....^^^^

C'mon UPPUN.............Leave links..........

Deadlyvisionz only because he had better punches.

uppin.....................................where's them votes ppl!

visionz took this
his punches was hot
that rectum lookin like elastic killed em
and sid was bullshittin so.........
vote:visions

i voted here
so sid return the favor
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120631

ya...ok...good vote...sid was bullshitin, and u mention 1 line by deadly...and before that one fool didn't explain his vote either. come on ppl, explain ur fuckin votes. wateva, i'll vote on urs too.

^^^Hahaha Sid wlc to Murderous Methodz...my friend.

Yea wtf is wit this ppl they dont kno how to vote.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120187
^vote in mine.I voted in ur's now vote in mine.



Deadly vision had the better flow here.But punches,I'd have to go with Deadly Vision as well.I liked that one bout shoving ur foot in his ass and making the rectum elestic.Insidous,your punches were lacking.U had a nice closer,but the rest wasn't.You got to make us laugh or be in shock.Make us feel like"OOHn Hell No,he didn't say that."And also,Master mind and I see suiside does not rhyme.In audio,you can find a way to make it rhyme,but in text,you got to remember that the reader will not say it in the way u would.Remember that in the future.That was sumtin that always used to messed me up.

Vote-Vision

...ok...i thought all my lines were punches, "i-see-suicide", "deadly visions", if u can't understand THAT, then....and not being able to shoot a wall while inside a barn, that's a punch, i guess the only one tha's not a punch was the heartless one, iduno why i put it in "", lol.

damn deadly, this ai'nt lookin pretty, if i weren't me i'd vote for me, lol, but it's all gravy.

^^hahaha i feel you homey.

1 more vote its over.

tight battle
both playas came wit sum gud shit
both y'all had gud flow and structure with insidious comin out on top wit that shit but visions had slightly better punches than sidious and he had better connection wit his punches. i was feelin visions spit a little more and both y'all used sum gud vocabs in there and sidious threw in some nice personals but other than that his spit was rather basic. vision gets my vote but only by a slight margin. keep up the work both y'all!!
Vote - Visionz