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Unknown Assassin 04-25-04 07:03 PM

Unknown Assassin Vs Vinman
 
rules are

No Dickriding
No Crew votes
No have votes
No Unexplained votes
10 to 20 lines
U spit first


get ready

vinman 04-25-04 07:04 PM

this isnt a battle set up

Unknown Assassin 04-25-04 07:19 PM

jus spit dumbass it is set up so just spitt damm nigga

vinman 04-25-04 07:21 PM

ok fin to spit


now im here, am ready to rumble //

this match gone be like ali and frazier in the jungle//

look at this nigger by the name of unknown//

i bet this bitch cant even hold the microphone//

this nigger always holding someones cock, his name is unknown cuse he alway on the

lock// i will beat this nigger with a heat of puches// 5 6 7 or 8 or forget it im gone do

it in bunches/ bet this shit beta than his moms hot luches// this nigger say he

gone kill all that he see// how the fuck when he gone get

stung by me// im taking the unknown to lost and found, knocking this bitch out in the

eighth fucking round.






fuck those who put me down and thanks to thos who gave me props

vinman 04-25-04 07:28 PM

new version
 
Quote:
Originally Posted by vinman
ok fin to spit


now im here, am ready to rumble //

this match gone be like ali and frazier in the jungle//

look at this nigger by the name of unknown//

i bet this bitch cant even hold the microphone//

this nigger always holding someones cock, his name is unknown cuse he alway on the

lock// i will beat this nigger with a heat of puches// 5 6 7 or 8 or forget it im gone do

it in bunches, bet this shit beta than his moms hot luches// this nigger say he

gone kill all that he see// how the fuck when he gone get

stung by me// im taking the unknown to lost and found, knocking this bitch out in the

eighth fucking round.



this is my spit i had to edit the first one


fuck those who put me down and thanks to thos who gave me props









hggggghfgh

Unknown Assassin 04-25-04 07:57 PM

ok im finna spit just enough to win



vinman,vinman,vinman what the hell
how u tryin to be an emcee and cant even spell

yo dumb ass is probably some internet geek
a nerd who dreams of getting some every week

u tryin to battle me(lol)nigga u must be sick
These flows i spit will have u runnin faster than michael vick(football player)

My advice would be to study other rap cd's
if you dont want to yo can just suck on these(nuts)

if you wanna battle me nigga you betta think twice
but if you do i promise nigga i wont be this goddamm nice


holla

Unknown Assassin 04-25-04 07:57 PM

uppppppppppppppppppppppppppin 4 votes.......................

vinman 04-25-04 07:59 PM

upppppppiin for votes we need votes

vinman 04-25-04 08:01 PM

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vinman 04-25-04 08:04 PM

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vinman 04-26-04 08:18 AM

uppiun for votes

vinman 04-26-04 04:47 PM

upppin for votes

vinman 04-26-04 04:55 PM

uppin some votes

vinman 04-26-04 04:59 PM

uppin for votes come on

quickpunch 04-26-04 05:02 PM

this was a weak battle....UA came with a lil bit of good punches...vocab wasnt that great...flow was good so was structure...would give this cause he had a lil nice personal diss to vinman

Vinman-i like how u keep tryin 2 elevate and not care so much about u winning...thats good...keep workin on vacab and usin it to have some harder punches..flow and structure was good tho...

vote-UA

quickpunch 04-26-04 05:02 PM

oh hit this battle up with an honesty vote...explain ur vote very well like i just did in urs...

QUICKPUNCH VS INSIDIOUS

vinman 04-26-04 05:04 PM

sure since you gave me a prop

vinman 04-26-04 05:34 PM

uppin for some votes and a fucking win shit

vinman 04-26-04 05:39 PM

can i get a fucking vote















and on dave lost child beta stop fucking with me

FallingAngel2k4 04-30-04 07:56 PM

my vote for vinman...................................

K-Trin 04-30-04 08:29 PM

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121594
^^ return the favor

Unknown assassin-Man that was whack.Too simple.Make ur lines longer man.Make it more complex.Not to mention flow was bad.Make ur lines longer and add more depth.Ur punches were also whack as hell.


Vinman-Flow was bad.Also simple and and short lines.Work on those.And ur punches were bad.Even worse than those of assinin.

Overall-weak battle.Both of you would have been killed by some experiened nigga.

Vote-UNknown assinin

C.March 05-01-04 11:07 AM

Yo this battle wasnt the best... but im gonna hafta give the battle to UA cause of the following

UA had some alright punches, his rhymes were pretty good...Your opened kinda sucked

Vinman.. Your flow was bad, too simple... keep elevating.. i can see your getting better.. least ure stuff rhymes now lol

This battle was kinda weak, and im gonna have to give the vote on the calliber of punches...
UA - not too good but better then vinmans.
Vinman - not too good

I agree with shady... you woulda both been merked by experienced rappers....

Anyways vote to UA..

..ILL.. 05-01-04 01:27 PM

Very weak battle....Some came very weak but unknown assasin came harder by a tad.

(Flows)-Unknown came weak but harder than you venim
(Structure)-Unknow hes was better..Makes it easy to read
COMplexity-None
(Very undersatndable)-Both...Yall both was easy to read and not hard...
(Weak punches)-Both but unknown came a lil harder aight....Work on them
punches venim
(WOrk on)-Punches came very weak so work on them aight
v/Unknown assasin....Hit my battle up unknown against True killa
Its in my sig just click if not im goin to give the link ill be back....Or just see it in front lines.....

King Solo 05-01-04 01:39 PM

i'm a give this battle to UA

both y'all spit weak verse and wud have been slaughtered by any experienced rapper

u had aight flow and ure structure wasnt bad
the punches tho they came weak from both of you. there wasnt much connection from any of them
u need to use more hard personals and hit sum multis in ure spits cuz that shit will get victories
strengthen up ure punches if u hope for victories
my vote to UA cuz basically i felt his verse a little more and altho both used weak punches UA was just a little harder.


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