Orijinal -VS- insidious
 

iight..this kidd wanna battle me talkin ...hatin so iight im puttin a battle down..

no rules juss spit and dont bite...

oh yeah..
 

insidious....spit first if uthink u all bomb...............

but ferreal...ferreall...ferreral.....DO NOT BITE.

boy, i got 5 battles goin on, u shoulda called me out first in "bitch slapped". i can't have any mroe goin on (i think i read that somewhere), wait untill my current battle's are finished, then we can do this.

take this time to come up with some hot shit :laugh: i'm not spittin more than 20 lines tho

lol, look's like i'll have to eat my words, i guess and administer closed one of my battles, looks like u'll get that asswhooping AFTER all, :D

i'll spit first, 16-20 lines, i do'nt even CARE if u feed off deeez lines...

Iight Wutever U Say Do Yourself And Spit Wuteva U Gon Do....
Cuz Imma Juss Say Dis...dont Be Mad When U Gettin Sonned It Happens 2 All People But 2day....its U.

to start off, i'll stick ur mic 'down ur throat' while screamin 'EAT IT!'
that way when it's my turn, i can hear ur heart and rap to the beat of it,
do'nt u get it, "battling sid" "losing" and "suicide" run in the same cycle,
my shit gets more original with time, ur get's more recycled,
my line's are HOT HOT HOT! ur lines remain un heard...
this CHOLO from PHOENIX will get "sonned" and leave u SON-BURNED,
just cuz 'asswhoopin' gave u an ass whoopin ur mad at me?
fuck u, u must WANT this shit to be handled by me,
cuz by lettin sid go first, ur sealin ur fate,
i control EVERYTHING! U WO'NT GET IN THE PEARLY GATES!

and who the fuck is "bascos" u be mentioning all the time? what's HE do?
is that ur imaginary friend? how cute, i bet he raps better than u,
u made the mistake of challengin me without my acceptance,
i do'nt wanna hear another rhyme from u, i'd PAY u to stay breathe-less,
shit homie, i think i got enough lines to beat u,
now where was it u were telling me to meet u?
:hump: :hump: :hump: :hump: :hump:

fuckin with sid is just stupid, i'll kill u without giving a penance,
i'm so fuckin bold i'll rob the period from ya sentance.

i'll vote on this shit when its finished
but sidious, u got a fuckin space open and u said u'd battle me so u ready 2 do this

done ditty done done, DAMN! i like that humping thing, it's the funniest thing i've seen in a while.
explanation- CHOLO is the mexican word for gangster, in phoenix, there're HELLA cholos out here, lol, (right on the border), that's about it.

vote on shit in my sig while ya'll'er waitin!

u wanna fuckin battle or not or is ure bitch ass to afraid

i already pm'ed u, AND put up shit in "bitch slapped", don't post in this unless it's voting, but ya, set it up and we'll go!

Whos This Guy Fuckin Wit?
 

This Cholo From Phoenix Wanna Really Fuck Wit Jersey?/
Thats Why Im Switchin Up Timezones Kill U In My State Early/
U Really Got Some Typos U Meant Ur Lines Are Not Not Not!/
But When U Come 2 Type Every1 Screamin Flop Flop Flop!
Son U Really Need To Know How To Make Words Rhyme/
Seen Better Rhymin Structure In A Book Of Nursery Lines/
Stop Fuckin Wit Dem Yellow Smileys Gettin On My Nerves/
That Yellow Smiley Against Ya Girl Got Betta Curves/
This Dude Sayin I Really Need To Work On My Spits/
But Know What? I Aint Lisenin Cuz Ur Shit Aint Even Legit/
Sayin U Gonna Put A Mic Down My Throat And U Screamin?/
Bout This? Ill Put A Dick Down Ya Throat Swallow Ceman/
Yeah I Get It..sid Battlin Me Equals Suicidin And Losin/
Im Doin This Acapella And People Will Still Be Groovin/
Yours Shits Gets Original With Time Well Ya Time Is Ova/
All U Spitted Was Bricks Now Is 1 Min In The 4th Quarta/
Now You A Fuckin Priest? Givin People Forgiveness/
Think Is The Time Of The Month Puttin A Dot In The Sentence/
Realize Now Think Wut U Gonna Post B4 U Type It/
Bcuz Ur Life Can Change Of Wut U Post If I Dont Like It/

lol, well come on, that verse against whoop DID suck, but i'll admit, this one was pretty bomb. good job, maybe u should try to win on all ur battles, lol.

VOTE VOTE VOTE!

son..that was my first battle on any person now im used 2 it....but ferreal i liked ya opener...but

uppin this battle...VOTEE please

return the favor honestly

OPENER:SID......THIS WAS A TIGHT ONE, BOTH HAD HOT ASS OPENER.BUT SIDS WAS FUCKIN CRAZIER
CLOSER:ORIJINAL......THAT WAS A BOLD STATEMENT, SOUNDED COLD AS SHIT I LIKED IT.....IN SIDIOUS SHIT WAS HOT BUT I FELT ORIJINALS MORE
PERSONALS:SID.....THAT just cuz 'asswhoopin' gave u an ass whoopin ur mad at me? WAS HOT AS SHIT, PURE FACT RIGHT THERE
METAS:ORIJINAL....Im Doin This Acapella And People Will Still Be Groovin/= HOT
All U Spitted Was Bricks Now Is 1 Min In The 4th Quarta/=HOT
my shit gets more original with time, ur get's more recycled,=PLAYED
PUNCHES:SID........do'nt u get it, "battling sid" "losing" and "suicide" run in the same cycle,
MULTIS:I AINT CATCH NONE......
VOTE:INSIDIOUS

I've Seen Teh Name Orijinal On Another Site.. But Anyways Orij Takes This Abttle..... Not So Much By The Content But By The Wordplay And Structure Of The Verse It Is Much Easier To Read And It Had Better Some Better Punches Tooo So This Goes To Orijinal...

Vote Orijinal

OH YEA CAN YALL RETURN THE FAVOR AND VOTE ON MY BATTLE???????


http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120368

damn VC i cant even vote for ya shit cuz im juss new ot this shit..umm....this is all the posts ive made in RB and i need 75 to vote 4 ya shit...so i cant help nuttin...people need 2 have the requirements low lol...sorry VC...

uppin this shit for votes ppl, leave a link and we'll return the favor!

uppin
 

uppin this shit
ill return the favor honestly..............

uppin once again, come on ppl, this battle was pretty hot, let's get some votes, we'll return the favor!

uppin once again, come on ppl, this battle was pretty hot, let's get some votes, we'll return the favor!

can we get some votes PLEASE! jebus crizzist, we'll return the favor!

Now both of u all had some decent sh*t. However I found Original wasted some lines reacting to what Insiduos was saying...its could to counter but too much bars was spent countering rather than attacking. I will give Original mostly on his opener;that shit was tight.
HIt up this link now to vote...both of y'all http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120624

upping for votes, come on ppl

let's get some more votes ppl PLEASE, we'll return the favor, i wanna get this shit over with!

uppin for votes yall, come on, i'll vote ifu leave a damn link!

uppin this shit again...
imma return the favor honestly.............please vote.........

but strinibonafide u didnt vote for me...
ill vote when u vote...honestly

can sum1 pleasee....pleaseee....pleasee......vote...
imma relly vote on y'all battles honestly........uppin it strickly

uppin this shit ANOTHER TIME.......
voteeeeeeeee!! i promise ill return the favor...

siick battle orijinal cam hard and good flow and structure.
ind came hard threw out da whole verse nice punches and wordplay and flow
close battle but ind came on top

ma vote insidious

umm dis was a okay battle...

opener-sid...or ya shit was corny str8 up
structure-umm i think or takes dis wun
punchlines-sid....ya shits was hittin dunn
creativity-sid...dem punches
wordplay-nun from both
personals-sid...dat ass whoopin shit was true lol
enjoyed-sid..hands down yo he merk dis nigga or i didn't feel ya ryhme scheme plus u aint have shit dat stood out

my vote- sid
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120799

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120132
^^^^RETURN DA FAVOR YA'LL

gracias for them votes, uppin, let's get this dizzone peoples!

nice shyt from both breakdown

opener: sid
closer:tie
structure:orijinal
punches:sid
personals:hmmmm sid
wordplay:orijinal
multies:none
flow:orijinal
better read: sid

vote: sid..i think he came just a lil bit harder seen played rhymes from both wasnt feelin either verse that much but the personals and punches sid had were hott...so this vote goes to sid....

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UPPIN! let's get some more votes to finish this ppl

come on now RB, do'nt sleep on this ANOTHER night! we return favors!

ayo man i voted on ya'll fukkin battle no return dat favor

vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote

one more to finish it!

(i voted on ur shit mav, iduno about orijinal tho)

Mang, incidious took this, shit clearly,

Nicer punches,
"and who the fuck is "bascos" u be mentioning all the time? what's HE do?
is that ur imaginary friend? how cute, i bet he raps better than u,"
Cleva line, nice flow, and like I said better punches,