Deadly Vs TeK
 

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U kno the rulez

spit Quick

due 2night.

10 linez.

Check In 7 MIN


IF NOT MODS CLOSE THIS WAIST OF TIME>

This will be short and sweet so sit back and *Listen*
Cause after this shit ur gonna have Body Parts *Missen*
Ima come at you with the heat of my Lyrical *Explosion*
Ill leave u at the Mic ripped and shredded from Lyrical *Erosion*
Ill hit you hard then Eminem with Explicit *Content*
Ur brains gonna try and think but this flow is all that will *Haunt-It*
These rhymes are deadly they'll rip ur scalp off like an *Indian*
Punches hitten you so hard you won be able to Breathe *Agian*
Kid ima knock u were u belong the bottom of the *Barrel*
This hits you harder then the Comedic acts of Actor Will *Farrel*
I guess I just gave you a True Reality *Check*
Dont worry about evan Postin just go practice and get a Mic *Check*

ma fault didnt realize u was acceptin.

Ma fault i didnt read rules i went to 12 lines just post 6 bars too.

Yo post up withen 10 minutes or ima see it as a No show.

OOh well. Let the merkin Begin.




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Like a handless boxer you can’t possibly win because you have no punches/
Cant read the Rulez?? you battling is a contradiction like fat Bitches doin crunches/
Kid I'm so charming, make yo heart-switch, and make you admire my speech/
I throw punches like Tyson delivering hard-hits like Kanya West kid go WIRE-ya-TEETH/
Should I be strapping a Tek? its just the net, fuck this faggot forget it/
Flex a Forty-Five Faggot azz Bitch? Or run away with a "4-fit"/
U'll meet with the deadly Vision...diggin ya grave deep with the shovel/
Like heat from a kettle...scream from the steem but u couldnt compete on that level/

Check ya pours Tek, I'll leave ya 'dead...beat' like insomniac athletes/
Your rhyme's discrete, your verse is Gonna Be HALF ASSED, Like Sisqo yo gay life is iNcomplete/


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omg, that shit was hilarious, i can't vote, but i wouldn't need too anyway, lmao, DV ko'ed tek. nice punches vision, i can't believe i never thought of that handless boxer line.

ok i liked both verses cant really judge just by readin em so ima break it down

flow= tie
punches= deadly
complexity= deadly
enjoyment= tie
creativity= tie
personals= deadly

overall deadly

good match between both of yall i jst think deadly got ya tats all but nice battle

UppUn.........Another One Merked....lol Am fuckin around kid nice battle.

sorry TeK you was coo but it was an easy win for deadly.

Uppun........................

Fuckerz start voting......................................

Nice punches and ending deadly visions...you take this easily.
Tek, nice flow but your punches weren't very potent...work on dat.

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flow= tek
punches= deadly
complexity= deadly
enjoyment= tie
creativity= tie
personals= deadly
tek good vocab and flow worko n personals and creativity
deadly nice vocab and flow work on structure and flow a lil
ok battle but im gonna giveit 2 deadly

This will be short and sweet so sit back and *Listen*
Cause after this shit ur gonna have Body Parts *Missen*
blah
Ima come at you with the heat of my Lyrical *Explosion*
Ill leave u at the Mic ripped and shredded from Lyrical *Erosion*
erosion doesn't leave people ripped and shredded.
Ill hit you hard then Eminem with Explicit *Content*
Ur brains gonna try and think but this flow is all that will *Haunt-It*
i like the concept, but the first line sucked and you could have hit harder
These rhymes are deadly they'll rip ur scalp off like an *Indian*
Punches hitten you so hard you won be able to Breathe *Agian*
the rhyme is a bit poor... the word is spellied again not agian, poor punch
Kid ima knock u were u belong the bottom of the *Barrel*
This hits you harder then the Comedic acts of Actor Will *Farrel*
harder than the comedic acts? makes no sense.
I guess I just gave you a True Reality *Check*
Dont worry about evan Postin just go practice and get a Mic *Check*
um... dont rhyme a word with itself. and this just sucked.



Like a handless boxer you can’t possibly win because you have no punches/
Cant read the Rulez?? you battling is a contradiction like fat Bitches doin crunches/
stretched, ok personal but could have been harder, the first line better but should have put it elsewhere
Kid I'm so charming, make yo heart-switch, and make you admire my speech/
I throw punches like Tyson delivering hard-hits like Kanya West kid go WIRE-ya-TEETH/
bleh
Should I be strapping a Tek? its just the net, fuck this faggot forget it/
Flex a Forty-Five Faggot azz Bitch? Or run away with a "4-fit"/
i like the wordplay kinda... ok punch
U'll meet with the deadly Vision...diggin ya grave deep with the shovel/
Like heat from a kettle...scream from the steem but u couldnt compete on that level/
nice multi, the punch is pretty decent

Check ya pours Tek, I'll leave ya 'dead...beat' like insomniac athletes/
Your rhyme's discrete, your verse is Gonna Be HALF ASSED, Like Sisqo yo gay life is iNcomplete/
eh... ok i guess, stretched again though and the wordplay in the first line could have been better


clear winner: deadly vision.. he had originality, actual punches and even though some of them missed they were way better.