discharge VS XxToXiCXxVeRbZ
 

10 To 15 Lines
No D/r Votes
No Unexplain Votes


U Spit 1st

iight checkin in checkin in 30 minute time limit??

no feedin off my verse
you should be ashamed to call ya self toxic verbs..//
you got no chance just disperse before i hit you with this verse//
when im done your bitch-ass will be lost fo words//
none of ya shyts toxic its just plain fuckin weak//
and is terrible cuz youve already hit ya lyrical peak//
if i were you id be to emmbaressed to speak//
youve lost two in a row and its gonna be ya next defeat//
your not a real mc your a fuckin fake//
tryin to battle me was your fatal mistake//
its people like u i hate,you call ya self toxic but cant intoxicate//
you lie so im irrate,you steal ya shit you cant fabricate//
its you that ill annihalate,i won this in tha starting gate//
your punches are like a dick watching oprah limp and soft//
ill go get my mom and let her finish you off, your punches dont work//
you talk shyt but your the one that just got murked//

Yo Yo Check In Check In// Lets Go No Waitin Till No Fuckin Tomorrow

u aint gonna murk shyt bitch post ya shyt come on check in

cant defeat me
cuz u cant beat what u cant see
if i ever seen a wackass ho like u then id have u runnin from me
commin at u with words razorsharp and hard enough ta slice through trees lika machette
i stand at attention when i get to the mic so u betta listen// u fucked up cunt ofa dike
u think any of the shit u type sounds right
any lil kid with a 3rd grade brain span can understand and wirte down what u can with an unsteady hand
in this game ur lost
runnin round day after day ina maze lika chicken with its head cut off
ur astounded and amazed hangin on each and every word and phrase that i say
why else would u come back to try to retaliate and attack with ur wack no talent raps anyway
u sitin there witha star-struck gaze
u cant seem ta pull ur imprompt eyez away
ur too fuckin incompotent and illiterat to come up wit the kinda shit i spit
on ur part it would take sum sorta intellegence
u cant win when u go up against this quick witted BLCK kid filled and fulled with this much lyrical confidnce
now i pull out my highlander sword towards ur abominal rhymes and raps so i can demolish em with it
SHIT is what u write and u seem ta be fulla it
but its ok keep stickin with it
u suck worst then most but u dont yet have to admit it
fuck u and ur bullshit
im finished with it

Yo Nigga U On My Merk List Lol Lol Lol Lol Lol Lol Lil Fagget

wtf u said 10 - 15 lines man what the fuck that was lie 30 u fuckin peice of shyt

Yo Vote Vote Vote Vote Lets End Dis Shit// Lets Close It People

u aint gonna murk shyt that right there was 30 lines of shyt

So What U Want Me To Do? Tell Me What U Want Me To Do

nothin but dont say shyt like only post 15 lines and then you post 35 lines of straight garbage your fuckin wack

Very very boring battle....neither one of you brought any heat at all, discharge u had no real punches, no wordplay, basic vocab, bad opener & closer, only pluses in your verse was you had good use of multies, good flow, an good structure, not a good verse dogg u gotta elevate for real son
Toxic...same shit no punches, no wordplay, ok vocab, bad opener & closer, no multies, bad flow, bad structure, not good son, got alot of practice ahead of you.
Punches: Tie (both weak)
Personals: Tie (none present)
Flow: Discharge
Structure: Discharge
Opener: Tie
Closer: Tie
Vocab: Toxic ( jus by a lil)
Multies: Discharge( won the battle for you)
Y'all got to do better
Vote: Discharge

oh im sorry to say but that was a bullshyt ass vote there is no way he got that vote

he spit like 30 more lines than me hes a fucking cheater and should be banned

lol word dis was a corny battle....

opener-umm discharge even dat shit didn't ryhme..and toxic ya shit was just corny
structure-charge...toxic lmaooo ya shit was da worst
punchlines-charge
personals-nun
enjoyed-discharge...i mean both of ya'll came weak but his shit was betta all around

my vote-discharge

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um discharge sliped throught the crack if the punches n TOxic verbs got washed away like dirt on a car that went through a CArwash i mean he lost

Vote DISCHArge

yea
i acccpt dis of losin i lost da battle ok i lost

naw man no hard feeelings i did shyty but dont be sayin you merked me

well toxic u was too weak ur Structure was VERY BAD u NEEd more punchs Worst Line: stand at attention when i get to the mic so u betta listen// u fucked up cunt ofa dike
best line:cant defeat me
cuz u cant beat what u cant see
if i ever seen a wackass ho like u then id have u runnin from me


CHarge Came at u harder Structure nice more punches and remember all about da Punches

Toxic u need to work on ur STRUCTURE like CRAZY ur structure is like 3/10 so work on dat u need more multis to 3/10 u dint do alot punches to weak dint even connect ur flow u didint have 1 2/10 its allright you'll be better

Charge u had good multi punches 9/10 so that was GREAT! for the Structure 8/10 thats good Flow like 8/10 charge u got off on him BEST LINES: youve lost two in a row and its gonna be ya next defeat//
your not a real mc your a fuckin fake//
tryin to battle me was your fatal mistake//
its people like u i hate,you call ya self toxic but cant intoxicate//
you lie so im irrate,you steal ya shit you cant fabricate//
its you that ill annihalate,i won this in tha starting gate//
that shit WAS NICE!

So Overall Charge gets the win for more Punches and better Flow STucture overal like i said well u get my vote

Vote: CHARGE

Punches: to
Personals: to
Flow:to
Structure:to
Opener: Tie
Closer: Tie
Vocab: Toxic
Multies: to( won the battle for you)

Vote: to

Both them niggas shit was off
But i believe toxic came with much better lyrics
Both of you need to work on your strucutre
but i gotta give it to toxic

discharge, no contest toxic verbs never had the slightest chance

Man what, how the hell are you any kind of rank here besides n00b? that was weak lmao discharge chould of spit 3 bars and beat you i'm not really going to go into the whole break down cuz its not needed

VOTE DIS

ohh and that juelz vote should get thrown out its b/s but i dont think it matters to much

dawg..i thought there were no crew votes in this shyt...aight then..i'm voting

Punches: Tie (both weak)
Personals: Tie (none present)
Flow: Discharge
Structure: Discharge
Opener: Tie
Closer: Tie
Vocab: Toxic ( jus by a lil)
Multies: Discharge( won the battle for you)
Y'all got to do better
Vote: Discharge

u both did bad as hellz...u guys are newbs and shyt..but come on...don't battle if ur gonna battle like that aight...toxic just quit