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Shadows edge vs MARVOLoUsJ1009
Aight... 10-20 lines, no crew votes, no hate, no b/s, no d/r.. you spit first
Oughta be ready by now... |
checkin in give me like 10 minutes da drop dunn pause
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call jay out? dunn u betta grab ya gun and ryde with vestes-
or ima "aim" at ya moms "pussy" at 1 "pm" & call it a "private-message" - shadow da tool-pop-often....so close ya mouth dude-stop-talkin- be4 ya shirt look like u bought it from a "tupac auction"-[alot of holes] ya name neva come up when they disscusin da greats,when im clutchin da 8- ima take ya "timber(lands)" and leave u "wet" like u was "just-in" a "lake"- (get it..justin timberlake) u know i inspire ya sons,shadow i could tell by ya wordplay u tired & dumb- ima wire ya gums,and ya chest aint gon "work" rite after i "fire" ya lungs- u neva gon make it in rap u gon stay in da "streets" like "tire's & bums"- marv's a vet,my record fukked up cuzz my sick punches is hard da catch- shadow u garbage if i was da "Feed" off ya verse i would "starv" da death- ima win dis battle shadow's conry plus my shits tighter- he couldn't get a "thumb's up" on his rappin battlin a bunch of "hitch hiker's"- fagget im "nicer" than ya girl when she want me da bone her- matter fact im "nicer" than ya "grandmother" when company's over- i already merked u dogg but i could see u wanna commin at me still??- scrappy-chill,cuzz im "nicer" than u r 2 ya moms when u want a happy meal- play tuff till i spray stuff and put da 40 in ya memory- its 2 clipps 20 shots in each ima put 40 in ya memory- a week later ya boy's a be lightin candles spillin a 40 in ya memory- datz enuff...spit back dunny |
yo MArvolous u need to check da Royal sickness fourm i spit check it out 1
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Oh shit, didn't realize you had spit. Alright.. checking in... I'll be done soon.
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good spit |
Sorry man.. had to help my friend study.. aight here goes...
Yo check it... This cat from Queens, but that don’t make you royal… You challenge me, so I guess you just enjoy “L”… You get less action than someone with gender: undetermined will You call yourself the sickest… more like terminally ill Cuz your death’s predestined, leave ya hung by the intestines Play like you from the ghetto, I bet your name is Preston… Worst pain you ever felt was a razor knick… And your dick get less action than a lifetime original flick. Only once got head – someone needed to use a toothpick Just admit it… All of Saddam’s oil couldn’t make your rhymes slick. How you gonna come at this? Talk shit, but you lack the status Couldn’t stay with me if you had a breathing apparatus Check the sig.. you don’t pay attention to all us bitches? Fuck ditches, pick up them britches before I live ya ass in stitches Funny, ignoring the rest is the only way you come out best Your crew bout to be blessed as I leave it Marv-less… |
But whatever.. that was trash.. I just wasn't feeling up to writing tonight. Anyway, vote people.
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Why are you already voting? And I said no hate votes, so if this is just cuz I've been fucking around, don't bother voting :laugh: you know I'm just playing with you, right man? |
lol u got 2 much time on ya hand..................
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use personals |
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i hadn't voted yet, i always vote fair. Marvelous won this one, he may have had mostly average lines, but he was consistent, Shadow, u had a good closer, but the rest seemed like filler, both need more personals, no hate. v/marv |
alrite can we get some votes ppl....plees dont let dis shit stay up here 4 a 2 month's
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I had personals... you're fucking vote was whack. you don't know what a fucking "L" is.. seriously, what are you a fucking herb? an L is a loss. please.
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ok, if L meant loss, than that was the whackest line ever anyway
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I can't believe you honestly didn't know what an L was. Now, here's a little run through of a personal: when, in our battle, I diss your dumb ass for not knowing what an L is, that's a personal. Just want to clarify.
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^^lmaooooooooo.................................... ....
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and make sure u put a link in, so everyone can see how whack of a fucking opener u had, enjoy ur L, haha, man, u should get a record deal
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:laugh:
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aight umm upppppppppppppppin 4 votes..............
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both of you were good, but i didn't like how marvelous was repeatin memory, i understand it's hard to rhyme that tho
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ummmm have u eva heard of somthin called WORDPLAY???? huh hotrod? lmaoooo |
yo can u muthafukkaz vote damm....................drop ya links i'll return da shit
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lol.. I swear all the herb battles are gonna get closed before this shit..
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^^^^lol word...i think they should start doin at 2 link shit on dis site cuzz niggaz just want u da vote on they battles but dont vote on your's
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aight im going to vote....both was pretty tight in vocab and wordplay...but shadow damnwhen u merked me u did a lot better like u said u werent into writing today maybe thats where u fucked up not being into it..marv u was tight today i liked ur verse ur flow was good too both could have did better and u know it anyways my vote goes to marv
since i voted vote on my battle wit killa http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120934 |
Aight, upping for some good feedback
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marvolous
the ending got worse, but very good wordplay, but the timberland one was sorta stupid. very good use of multies and punches hit hard. punches, shadow da tool-pop-often....so close ya mouth dude-stop-talkin- be4 ya shirt look like u bought it from a "tupac auction"-[alot of holes] marv's a vet,my record fukked up cuzz my sick punches is hard da catch- shadow u garbage if i was da "Feed" off ya verse i would "starv" da death- shadows edge had good multies and good flow, and his vocab was better than marvolous punches All of Saddam’s oil couldn’t make your rhymes slick. Your crew bout to be blessed as I leave it Marv-less… but marvolous had better wordplay more complex punches hit harder and tehre were lesser fillers. peace no hate |
aight goodlookin......uppin 4 more votes...............
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yeah.. my spit was garbage. aight uppin ^^
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^^^^yo can we get dis battle close 2day ppl...dis shit gota stop yo if u every muthafuka voted everyday it wouldn't be a thousand open battles...come on if u gon view dis battle vote
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I thought u both did alright on this. It felt like filler on both verses flow was nice. Werent too many punches, on top of that the ones that were there didnt stand out.
I liked shadows closer, probably the best on this battle, but marvelous had a few more. I liked his line about thumbs up from hitchhikers or some shit. This was real close but im gonna have to vote for marvelous. Look out for other niggas return the favor links in sig |
i give the vote to marv, but shadows shit wasnt as weak as he says it is
marv came wit mad hot shit in this battle like: shadow da tool-pop-often....so close ya mouth dude-stop-talkin- be4 ya shirt look like u bought it from a "tupac auction"-[alot of holes] marv's a vet,my record fukked up cuzz my sick punches is hard da catch- shadow u garbage if i was da "Feed" off ya verse i would "starv" da death- those was his relly hot shits, everything else was just average shadow, u only had 2 bars that stood out also, but the rest was kind of wack: i didnt like anything else in this part- All of Saddam’s oil couldn’t make your rhymes slick Funny, ignoring the rest is the only way you come out best Your crew bout to be blessed as I leave it Marv-less… hotness but marv just had better punches and metas so.......... vote:marv |
goodlooks but u niggaz gota poll ya vote or da shit wont count...
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marvelous took this one..... he had harder punches and nice structure
Shadow yur shit was alright i liked how you seperated punches between multi's so im going to have to give this to Marvelous for nice punches and nice creativity |
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