shadows edge vs. kingz(forced word match)
deadlines:
battles go up monday check in by wedsday verses due by thrusday votes due by sunday rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse forced words must be bolded or something so people can see them bar limits: 16 bar min. 32 bar max. forced words you must use these in your battle verse or be d'q: contestant,transaction,negotiable,multimedia |
ayo, checking in, this gonna be a good one.
|
checkin in
yep 2 hot propects here. i aint guna go down without a fight |
My verse casts a ‘shadow’ over ya whole damn life….
….punches so accurate and precise…like a surgeons knife but you ain’t gonna survive this surgery…your at the ‘edge’ of your existance this kid raps about the 'same thing all the time'…and calls it 'persistence' this bitch is ‘fake’…tryin to ‘hustle’ you…that’s a fact son but none of the crowd gonna fall for shadow’s ‘fraudulent transaction’ scared to lose?…this bitch Pmed me askin if this battle was negotiable? damn…his avatar is his self portrait …and he wonders why he is unsociable I’ll murder u beyond text…could combine with sound..that’s multimedia You could even reach ‘my level’ if you ‘used’ or ‘stood on’ an encyclopedia Im bout to lyrically torture you…but aint gunna kill-ya-yet When im done with you…there be nuttin left but a ‘Silhouette’ he thinks his verse has got the crowd at the ‘edge’ of their seat I suppose that could be true…cos we are all falling asleep! This kids says he is ‘sick’….yeh dog you look like it Rapping like some1 tampered with ya drink…did someone spike it? Im a solo artist…but I’ll still kill ya crew headphone murder My verse is so well ‘structured’…its supported with a ‘girder’ I guess this kid is gonna use kings jokes…no doubt we should call him the ‘sahara dessert’…cos of his lyrically drought look you aint even a worthy contestant you cudnt beat me with ya best chant this dog can’t even defend his self, with weak punches and sad flows but jus remember that after dark…there are no shadows! |
Wow holy shit I forgot this was forced word... ok hang on I gotta rework my verse...
|
This cat’s 16-1, thinking battling herbs brings recognition
It’s like… I enjoy your verse but prefer the Sesame Street rendition My second league battle, and still predicted to win This cat spit one nice bar all his life… and already he a has been Crack head father, dropped you so many times like your avvy Now all Kingz say is “I wanna drop shit.. just like my daddy” Call you a calendar, spit line after line and they all come out weak Check it.. It’s funny, this kid call himself hard running a boutique Ghetto? Fuck guns… this kids “last resort” is Club Med Ever wonder why ~R~ looked at you… and promoted Phat Mic instead?* Your music so bad, you being arrogant when you say it’s the worst Your multimedia player cry when you play just a verse Sickest you ever been required a dose of decongestant…. You get so few votes, you’d be a winning Survivor contestant Plain sad when buying your verse for free is a losing transaction Lace my verse with herbicide, now you having allergic reaction… My win not negotiable, my verse contains no flaws This cat just wishing for a tie the way he drops drawers/draws Dog, this is the day of your execution, take it with pride It’s like I’m replaying the French Revolution… …. Because this verse is regicide.** |
This should be there:
*Phat mic is the new leader of UE, Kingz crew ** regicide = the killing of a king |
Be nice to get some votes on this ish...
|
kings nice verse, the structure was good and u had a couple of nice lines in there, although im not feeling ur opener ur closer was aight, good job
s,e good clean opener aswell as closer, nice flow although kings was beta, nice punches aswell, and very hardhittin punches vote-shadow drop feedback http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120828 |
structure was good on both threads, i liked kings "lyrical drought" line
but both lacked punchlines! i got respect 4 shadow edge but feel, he had a weak performance this time round there were'nt much b'tween it but im votin KINGS oh and drop a vote on my battle so i can seal this bitch above me PEACE OUT |
Wow, both of you came madd hard.
Kingz- Flow: Decent, except the contestant/chant bar was madd short, I was kinda like WTF, but otha than that, it was pretty solid. Punches:The Murder/Girder bar was madd good. Punches was pretty good throughout. Personals: Good. The closer especially. Vocab: Good, not great though. Fav Line: this dog can’t even defend his self, with weak punches and sad flows but jus remember that after dark…there are no shadows! Shadow's Edge- Flow: Very Solid. Very readable and easy to stay wit. Punches: Good. Opener was nice. Personals: Really fuckin' good. The club med/Instead bar was just downright nasty son. Vocab: Great. Nice use of the English Language basically. Fav Line: Ghetto? Fuck guns… this kids “last resort” is Club Med Ever wonder why ~R~ looked at you… and promoted Phat Mic instead?* Very Good job by both of you, just think Shadow brought a lil' more to the table. Real good job, it lived up to what I expected it to be, a really good, enjoyable, and close battle. Vote/Shadow's Edge |
kingz you took dis one man... you were FResh... shadow edge you were good too though but my vote goes to kingz
|
I think king got this 1. He brought good delivery and was good with the forced words. Dont get me wrong, the other guy was jus as good...but i felt king was more consistant wit tha punchlines. props to both tho if i could vote 4 both...i would peace!
|
kingz - pretty sweet opener, good use of forced words -
"I’ll murder u beyond text…could combine with sound..that’s multimedia You could even reach ‘my level’ if you ‘used’ or ‘stood on’ an encyclopedia" good flow, with sme hard punches. shadow - nice opener. smooth flow throughout, jut thought kingz was a little better. An' i feel Kingz had some harder hitting punches, close battle. Vote - Kingz |
best line in this was...
Ghetto? Fuck guns… this kids “last resort” is Club Med Ever wonder why ~R~ looked at you… and promoted Phat Mic instead?* that was straight but overall KINGz was whoopin' ass wit' a good opener... shadow's edge- you were pretty good but kingz takin' it this time... close but my vote: KINGz |
Kingz - I was feeling your flow, it was off in some spots, but you came hard with some sweet punches, and liked your wordplay.
Best Line - Im bout to lyrically torture you…but aint gunna kill-ya-yet When im done with you…there be nuttin left but a ‘Silhouette’ he thinks his verse has got the crowd at the ‘edge’ of their seat I suppose that could be true…cos we are all falling asleep! Worst Line - This kids says he is ‘sick’….yeh dog you look like it Rapping like some1 tampered with ya drink…did someone spike it? Shadow - Good spit man, had a better flow goin, thought you had some good punches in there and good wordplay. Best Line - Crack head father, dropped you so many times like your avvy Now all Kingz say is “I wanna drop shit.. just like my daddy” Worst Line - NONE OVERALL - I gotta give this battle to Kingz, he had better flow going was liking his style more and his punches hit harder. Shadow, your shit was tight to.. but I wasnt feeling it as much, I thought Kingz punches were harder, step up on the punches next time man, and maybe some more multi's. VOTE - Kingz RETURN THE FAV http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119532 |
Wow... 2 explained votes. Good job people. Next time don't bother voting.
|
Anyway, its:
Shadow - 1, Kingz - 1 or 2, if you count Buzz |
ur free posting now. u gunna get disqualifed.
by the way its upto dirtboy69 to count the votes |
^^ I'm not freeposting, I'm upping for some votes with feedback.
|
yes
Kingz got this in a weak battle it was pretty close but Kingz used his forced words better so vote/Kingz |
^^ wow. low blow.
Kingz -3 Shadow - 1 |
all round tight ass battle
i do think both y'all cud have done better cuz u both got skillz flow and structure was excellent from both playas both y'all hit wit hard punches and both had gud connection but i felt that kingz was hittin a little harder and i cud get into his verse more. some gud use of vocabs, gud wordplay u know it. both y'all opened strong and ended strong and i'd say it was a tight even battle hard to call. i pick kingz cuz like i said i was feelin his verse more and he hit harder in my opinion plus he had my favourite line: this dog can’t even defend his self, with weak punches and sad flows but jus remember that after dark…there are no shadows! funny shit!! My vote goes to Kingz |
wow
thats another person votin against you for Kingz do you get the hint yet? he beat you and this match should have been over with 5-0 but, ehh..Kingz was bullshitted out of one vote so..it doesnt matter he's gonna win regardless |
^^ I didn't say his verse was whack. It was good. I just don't like unexplained votes and hate voters. Now stop freeposting.
|
Wait hold on, I'm the only person who voted for Shadow's Edge, and I gave the most complete explanation out of anyone, so don't say I bullshitted my shit, just 'cause I have a different opinion, cause I always vote honestly, not like the rest of the dick-ridin' and hatin' bytchez on this site. So watch whoz fuckin' honesty you quetionin' nigga.
|
nice battle. lyrically both you guys take the cake. nice punches by Kingz also nice mental attack by Shadow. all in all this was a nice battle. but i give my vote to KIngz because his verse rhymed more and made alot more sence. Shadow i had to really sick back for aminute and read your shit over and over until i got it.
vote=Kingz |
Aight man. Thanks for the feedback ^^ I know I got that problem sometimes.
|
breakdown for kingz:
flow:no off spots solid all the way through good job 7/10 volcab:nice for the most part again no problems here 7/10 punches:some real good lines good job at addressing shadow through the whole peice best line,"You could even reach ‘my level’ if you ‘used’ or ‘stood on’ an encyclopedia" 7/10 overall:21/30 breakdown for shadow's edge: flow:nice job no problems here 7/10 volcab:kinda below kingz i thought still alright just down abit 6/10 punches:nothing too much no use of the words in the punches and really nothing but played topcis and shit that just wasn't seeming to be hitting try harder next week 5/10 overall:18/30 vote--kingz ran away with this good verse you surprised me |
7-2 kingz wins
|
All times are GMT -4. The time now is 11:32 AM. |