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adebisi vs. vango
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battles go up monday check in by wedsday verses due by thrusday votes due by sunday rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse bar limits: 4 bar min. 16 bar max. |
Vango? Hell no... I'm tired of these fucking newbies
So I'll knock ya the fuck out... with just my mood swings See what it brings... when you be flipping concepts that are still wack I mean kids got more throwback rhymes in his verse than a Fabolous track I've had it you fag, you cant win... so why try? When Boys to Men isnt a group... it describes ya sex life I'm that nice... while you're just another ugly dude Halloween was months ago, but I still have an urge to chuck candy at you Sure to lose... so honestly kid... conteplate a no-show Then pack up and leave relaunched... just get in ya van and go |
so i guess thats your rhyme huh, wow this should be quick
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lmao @ dirtboy letting you in the league twice. |
yeah i came to check in and thats what i see, whoa
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BTW... sign out Ad... lol
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How you got the audacity to test my mental capacity,
im like Billy the Kid of RB, so why dont you hop along Cassidy See im gonna keep this rhyme short like your rap career cuz if rappin was alcohol youd be a lite beer Tastes great, naw this kid is less fillin, see id write a better rhyme BUT YOU REALLY AINT THAT APPEALING So why dont you be a good boyscout and go take a hike this cats so stupid he tripped over a cordless mike you battlin me is like a sword with no blade, a gun with no bullets and a lamp with no shade SEe you got as much chance of beating me as you do winnin the lottery cuz you could douse your self with gasoline,set your self on fire and still not be as hot as me |
ooooh
this is so close, i liked both of yer verses! alot! i laughed my wretched white ass off at alot of the punches, im having a hard time deciding... i loved this line "Halloween was months ago, but I still have an urge to chuck candy at you" from Adebisi but your rhimes and vocab just tapped a little under the belt to Vango... Vango I loved the second and last lines... they were awsome... altogther i enjoyed this battle, really thought it was close but my vote goes to Vango Vanca had better rhimes however |
tight battle
had me laughin my ass off tight structure and flow from both u both hit wit sum gud punches usin gud vocabs basically i was just feelin Vango a lil more and i thought his punches hit slightly harder but this was another tight battle!! |
Anyone with any idea about battling care to vote?
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Not the best verse I've seen you drop chrit by any means:
Vango? Hell no... I'm tired of these fucking newbies So I'll knock ya the fuck out... with just my mood swings i've seen this concept before, but nice punch See what it brings... when you be flipping concepts that are still wack I mean kids got more throwback rhymes in his verse than a Fabolous track ok, ok.. not as great I've had it you fag, you cant win... so why try? When Boys to Men isnt a group... it describes ya sex life also played concept but still nice I'm that nice... while you're just another ugly dude Halloween was months ago, but I still have an urge to chuck candy at you this was ok Sure to lose... so honestly kid... conteplate a no-show Then pack up and leave relaunched... just get in ya van and go good wordplay off his name, but the closer wasn't that great Vango.. it seemed to me like you were stressed out.. and forgot to bring it: How you got the audacity to test my mental capacity, im like Billy the Kid of RB, so why dont you hop along Cassidy nice multis, but the punch is pretty weak See im gonna keep this rhyme short like your rap career cuz if rappin was alcohol youd be a lite beer ok, nice use of meta and nice flow, punch not that great Tastes great, naw this kid is less fillin, see id write a better rhyme BUT YOU REALLY AINT THAT APPEALING yeah that might work against a newb.. but i think the punch loses some effect against vets.. anyway ok punch So why dont you be a good boyscout and go take a hike this cats so stupid he tripped over a cordless mike your verse was good until this. this sucked hard. two lines, totally unrelated, elementary rhyme, jokes I've head 10 years ago... you battlin me is like a sword with no blade, a gun with no bullets and a lamp with no shade this was kinda cool, but again it kinda messed up the flow of your verse to just randomly have this in there.. and its not a great punch SEe you got as much chance of beating me as you do winnin the lottery cuz you could douse your self with gasoline,set your self on fire and still not be as hot as me chance of winning the lottery punches are played, and you didn't flip it creatively... that closer was just kinda weak Ok so basically you both had punches I wasn't really feeling and some punches I was feeling, but adeb had way more of the second category, and also at least brought a personal with the name.. I didn't see that from Vango. also he used less played concepts, so v/adeb. |
Even though Adebi won , Adebi verse was pretty weak compared to what i`ve seen him do then again . . He is against Vango.
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"See im gonna keep this rhyme short like your rap career
cuz if rappin was alcohol youd be a lite beer" "Tastes great, naw this kid is less fillin, see id write a better rhyme BUT YOU REALLY AINT THAT APPEALING" "cuz you could douse your self with gasoline,set your self on fire and still not be as hot as me" vango im sure heard those exact punches before, maybe u used them in one of ur other battles, if im wrong i apologize, and if so nice punches apparrt from the fire one |
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Vango? Hell no... I'm tired of these fucking newbies So I'll knock ya the fuck out... with just my mood swings 6.5 See what it brings... when you be flipping concepts that are still wack I mean kids got more throwback rhymes in his verse than a Fabolous track 9 I've had it you fag, you cant win... so why try? When Boys to Men isnt a group... it describes ya sex life 8 I'm that nice... while you're just another ugly dude Halloween was months ago, but I still have an urge to chuck candy at you 7 Sure to lose... so honestly kid... conteplate a no-show Then pack up and leave relaunched... just get in ya van and go 9 How you got the audacity to test my mental capacity, im like Billy the Kid of RB, so why dont you hop along Cassidy 7 See im gonna keep this rhyme short like your rap career cuz if rappin was alcohol youd be a lite beer 8.5 Tastes great, naw this kid is less fillin, see id write a better rhyme BUT YOU REALLY AINT THAT APPEALING 7 So why dont you be a good boyscout and go take a hike this cats so stupid he tripped over a cordless mike 8.5 you battlin me is like a sword with no blade, a gun with no bullets and a lamp with no shade 7.5 SEe you got as much chance of beating me as you do winnin the lottery cuz you could douse your self with gasoline,set your self on fire and still not be as hot as me 7 break down vango 45.5/60 76% adebisi 39.5/50 79% v-adebisi |
can we get some real votes it sounds as though someone has been d/r for votes.this aint no campaign
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i give it 2 vango, not much between them but vango's had more originality
both structures were good, but i feel both never put as much thought in to it as they shud have, the better thread was from vango |
^^wtf
I dont see how Vango is gettin any votes here it's bullshit Adeb gave it to him Vango came with played lines that was played out 6 months ago Adeb had some good solid punches Vango was comin with weak punches thruout his whole verse like thet lite beer line fuckin garbage vote adeb for a better verrse with better punches and better everything period |
Breakdown
Ad Flow: Good for the most part, Opener Kinda lost me though Punches: Pretty good wack/track bar was nice Personals: Closer was good, a few others Multis: None that I saw Vocab: Average Opener: Lost me Closer: Madd nice Fav Bar: Sure to lose... so honestly kid... conteplate a no-show Then pack up and leave relaunched... just get in ya van and go Good personal, and sicwidit Van Go Flow: Madd stretced in parts, and the Fillin'/Appealin' bar is a stretch Punches: Audacity/Cassidy bar was good, otha than that, lackin' Personals: None Multis: A few in there Vocab: Aight Opener: Pretty Good Closer: Didn't like it, it was stretched and just a weak and kinda played concept Fav Bar: How you got the audacity to test my mental capacity, im like Billy the Kid of RB, so why dont you hop along Cassidy VanGo's lines was kinda throwback, like that nigga said, and flow was a lil' off. Ad had a good, not great effort, but it was solid. Vote: Adebisi |
vango
good battle liked it. you had good flow and style i really liked the last bar was great adebisi was ok wasnt as good as vango but you could of been better Vote Vango |
LMAO at everyone that knows anything voting for me...
And all the newbie fucks voting for him... This is why this site lacks talent |
So I'll knock ya the fuck out... with just my mood swings
flashbacks rofl this WHOLE SITE lacks talent |
Vango? Hell no... I'm tired of these fucking newbies
So I'll knock ya the fuck out... with just my mood swings Not that bad.....could have had a better opener See what it brings... when you be flipping concepts that are still wack I mean kids got more throwback rhymes in his verse than a Fabolous track Not really a punch...throwback rhymes? He's just a kid, he doesn't have any throwback rhymes.... I've had it you fag, you cant win... so why try? When Boys to Men isnt a group... it describes ya sex life *laughs* That one was a little funny.... I'm that nice... while you're just another ugly dude Halloween was months ago, but I still have an urge to chuck candy at you Sounds like something I heard in third grade, but I think it was worded better back then..... Sure to lose... so honestly kid... conteplate a no-show Then pack up and leave relaunched... just get in ya van and go Not a bad closer, but it wasn't really good either... How you got the audacity to test my mental capacity, im like Billy the Kid of RB, so why dont you hop along Cassidy Not that bad..... See im gonna keep this rhyme short like your rap career cuz if rappin was alcohol youd be a lite beer Gay..... Tastes great, naw this kid is less fillin, see id write a better rhyme BUT YOU REALLY AINT THAT APPEALING Even more gay.... So why dont you be a good boyscout and go take a hike this cats so stupid he tripped over a cordless mike Zzzzz...... you battlin me is like a sword with no blade, a gun with no bullets and a lamp with no shade Is it over yet? SEe you got as much chance of beating me as you do winnin the lottery cuz you could douse your self with gasoline,set your self on fire and still not be as hot as me Not bad but way too streched..... Overall I expected a lot more from this battle......Adebisi came with a couple of OK punches but nothin too spectacular. I guess I just expected more from him. Flow was good except for one stretched line........ Vango didn't have that many punches. Flow was OK but stretched in some places.....I really thought this was going to be a battle of wits but it turned into a battle of shit! Vote - Adebisi for atleast makin me smile with a line...... |
breakdown for adebisi:
flow:good job nothing wrong here 7/10 volcab:alright not the best i've seen but good job 6/10 punches:some nice personals not too many lines overall but still pretty strong what you had my fav,"When Boys to Men isnt a group... it describes ya sex life"6/10 overall:19/30 breakdown for vango: flow:i thought it could of been better it was kinda choppy through most of it 5/10 volcab:good use specially threw the first half difenatly better then your oppenent 7/10 punches:some alright lines here not too many and a couple were kinda played but good job best line,"So why dont you be a good boyscout and go take a hike this cats so stupid he tripped over a cordless mike" ha ha ha funny anyway 8/10 overall:20/30 vote--vango slightly better verse |
Even the person that runs the league is an idiot
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lmao , Cprogress & Strobe should have made a vet run the league.
oh well you`ll soon see the difference between a messy league and a tidy league. |
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you are an idiot, i would kill your weak ass in a battle |
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No you wouldnt You thouroughly suck |
kid you are fucking horrible, i dropped my verse cuz i didnt think i would need much after seeing your wack ass shit, i didnt take into effect all your d/r on this site. we can bring it to elevated if you really want it. you might not have enough wins for that you herb.
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How about this
We bring it to the real RB? And then we watch you get laughed at |
roflmao
do it! lol @ not enough wins dont you have 100 already Native? |
I think I"m at around 120 or 130 with my aliases combined
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adabesi won this hands down..............both were weak,vango was just weaker...........the throwback line n the boys to men lines were his best...but both concepts are played...the halloween line was so wack i wanted to pull my hair out.......n the get in ur van n go was lame as fuck........but vango.........his whole verse was basic not a single punch.......it was terrible......................
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7-5 adebisi wisn this battle
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