Meters vs. STriniBonafide
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battles go up monday check in by wedsday verses due by thrusday votes due by sunday rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse bar limits: 4 bar min. 16 bar max. |
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I'm not even preparing, never fearing, just hearing dick riding in the air
pledge allegiance to these faggits to git a win from me here// fuck props, fuck battling... I cop these kids just for beef, and I'm hungry to merc you... as if I never do eat// fuck votes, fuck shows, fuck dressed up pretty sco's, (scores) you offer fake sh*t fo money, I tell u the bank is closed// see da feat herre is you leavin this beef in one piece, I 'double park' next to you kid and 'hit up' yo east// I make incisions in your veins with precisions leavin no blood your limbs drop later when I spit... as useless rods// your lyrics wouldn't stand... if they od(ied) on viagra, while mine elevate high ...like the niagra// I don't give a fuck bout winning, dick riding have me spinning, just know I could fuck you up... in the space of one innings// I'm versatile like da Vinci... give mental shock therapy a la Bruce lee dis a predictable ending.... like a made 4 tv teen movie// gettin woozy, yuh gotta come through me, can't sue me, for being truly, not a faggit like you...tho I never meter pussy//(meet a) but I know how to treat a pussy, get fucked up hard and dirty shove several meters in you, u get an eargasm from my ditty// can u merc me cause I'm trini.... cause we don't rap in the West Indies I'm having fun on dis site wit mcs liter than mc lite// and I'll rip you rite for spite Oh Lord....ma rhymes tite, like spandex and I'll add this useless little monster... straight to the pokedex// (pocket monster...pokemon) I know its a cheap thrill like sex to flex yo muscles and say yes... "I'll beat this mc fo real"... just because his score is less// but get a bullet proof vest, my shots smoke hot like cess cause I don't abuse drugs, but I smoke meters in excess// |
Okay, stop. What the hell was that^? Am i even supposed to try?
Shit, i'm gonna rob you blinder...than your fucking mind's eye Just a stupid guy trying to be street...and clearly lacking the brawn Edited your verse for punctuation...to intentionally spell half of it wrong Fuck morning, now it's dawn...best believe i'm ripping Strini anew Just pisses me off how many mediocre punches i have to waste on you But i'll be truthful man...writer's block's left me feeling solemn... I mean, my mind is almost as empty...as your fucking win column! I've battled shitty opponents...you're for sure and by far the worst And you may not roll with the punches...but i'm rolling in laughter at your verse! Hurt this pansy fag with a short key-up...yeah, i'll leave multiple scars Sad part is my best punches...were the wackness of your extra 8 shitty bars |
Vote = Meters Lol Easy battle
Meters has better structure better flow and he hit harder i hope you newbies can now see that style he also came up with good weodplay and two syyballe rhymes (another thing you n00bs dont get ) anyway Strinbonafide verse was very n00bish... I 'double park' next to you kid and 'hit up' yo east// What the fuck did that mean? - make sense kid. meters won this battle by better punches & flow. |
METERS takes my vote
His was shorter and got to the point, his disses and punches were swifter, rhymes were better, and deffinately had better structure... (I could take some tips from him) anyhow... Strinbonafide didnt make sense really, i was reading it in confusion most the way through... Easy Battle... Meters |
'Double park' is like a violation so if u know what a parking 'meter' is then maybe you'll understand. Tupac wrote hit em up against the east so that's how the "hit up yo east" came into it. I'm not da baddest rapper alive but some of y'all maybe the dumbest..
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Yeah......you got murdered...
Meter came with much better punches. He kept the flow easy to read and was easily transferable to audio. STrini had too many stretched bars and was off with his wording. If that explaination was what you really meant.......you've got to word things a little bit better so we don't need an explaination.......... Vote - Meter |
easy battle 2 call
meters gets it cuz he had overal better flow and structure his spit was shorter but he got straight to the point and struck with sum gud solid punches. gud wordplay in their from meters to. Strini u need to elevate and cut ure spit down get straight in there with hard punches and just try not to drag it on so much |
Meters
I cant wait until our rematch I might sign backup in LL Jr. anyway Meters got this and Im not explaining because it was a homocide because the homo ....got murdered |
meta got straight to the point with hard hittin punches and had good wordplay and structure he kept it short and sweet and easy to read
strini nice try, i dont know why u got paired up with meters its clearly not a fair matchup battling someone with 21 wins and 7 losses, anyway ur verse had a good flow to it but ur punches wrent hard hitin and u had no personals vote-meta drop feedbak http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120828 |
Hurt this pansy fag with a short key-up...yeah, i'll leave multiple scars
Sad part is my best punches...were the wackness of your extra 8 shitty bars yep this gotta go to meter, he was precise a lyrical sniper instead of trini who sprayed his bullets everywhere nice job to both but meter jus came that lil hard vote meter |
aight...
Meter - he had a smaller verse and managed to have more hard hitting punches.....actually he was the only one who had hard hitting punches....he had a good flow...good structure....punches were there and i felt them.... Strini - fixya structure fam....// are to newbie'ish...long battle verses arent always good...u triedTOO hard.....u forced shit and alot was played n punches werent direct...jus elevate.... Vote - Meters |
vote -meters
why? he won |
vote -meters
why? who the fuck argues with Chrit?! |
Meters one easily.
Well let me go down the list. he had better structure, flow, metas, style, punches, should I keep goin? did I leave anything out? |
breakdown for STriniBonafide:
flow:i swear people been reading the verses wrong damn nice job here no off spots on through the whole piece nice internal rhyming too 9/10 volcab:good job better then your oppenent here too i didn't see really anything wrong here 8/10 punches:i guess the weakest part of your verse there wasn't really anything over direct it was just vauge lines trying to hit 5/10 overall:22/30 great verse disipte the lack of any real punches breakdown for meters: flow:good job here basic no real internal rhyming to help it along 7/10 volcab:alright use still a level below your oppenent 7/10 punches:this is where you did alot better then bonafide you threw a couple nice direct punches, most were kinda played though best line," mean, my mind is almost as empty...as your fucking win column!" 7/10 overall:21/30 better punches but you lacked in everything else this battle vote--STriniBonafide better all around verse so the punches were weak sometimes flow and volcab mean more if there working as well as his was |
8-1 meters wins this
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