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CJ vs. bm316
5-15 bars
No hate, d/r, or CREW (that includes mine and the otha niggaz) 5-0 KO 3-0 TKO(This means close it then Mods!)Check in, then drop at the same time. |
Check 1 2, Check 1 2. Let's do da damn thang nigga.
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Checking In When Do You Want The Spits Due Bye ???
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Spits is due by 3, but if someone post first, no fuckin' feedin', blind spit. Aight?
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Aight Lets Do The Damn Thing All I Got To Say Is Good Luck Man
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This nigga turnin' down the wrong road like his vision was blurred,/
But cats 'gon see Jay slant-eyed too, cause I was smokin' the herb./ So allow me to be the first one to tell ya, welcome to da rb,/ First lesson, neva seen ladders long enuff to bring you to the same level as me./ I know, you was at home bored thought you'd give this rap game a try,/ Tryin' to emulate B.I.G. and Pac, now you're the next mc to die./ So in your name is that your birthday, you know, the 3-1-6?/ Or is that the day you saw a mosquito bite between your legs, and realized that you actually had a dick?/ (So small, that's the first time homie seen it) You're new on the site, so now my mind is just a blank space,/ But I know you just passin' through, like tourists travellin' from place to place./ |
Blazing ya Skill like a insaine man Prasing his Kill//
Doubtfully thinking bout killin a self while ya Taking a Pill// I don't play i just bust out tha glocks and let em spray// Got ya in the line of fire what you going to do i suggest you pray// When I roll through ya town i'm coming in big bodies straped with heat// I'm ready to bust some heads so don't surprised if your tasting pavement an concret// Don't back down bitch or you'll see the evil side of me// Ya faker than a psycic with caller i.d// Come hard with your spit but your better come with a three point stance// You'll be the next victim of my like a christmas ornament hanging form da branch// |
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nice battle but jay took it with punches and flow and word play but nice battle..
ma vote: cj |
holla at ma battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120697
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jay had this one from the beginning even for a man with a cold
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uppin this bitch for votes ya'll don't be why vote on this ish right here
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damnit peopel i know ya'll know how to vote stop being lazy and get in here and vote
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Jay Got This Shit By Miles
He Had Better Flow Better Punches I Liked His Structure And His Rhymes Were Jus Hotter |
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120940
NOW CAN I GET A VOTE FOR THIS PLZ |
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countree
his flow and punches hit very hard and here are his best you need multies and more wordplay and decent personals. ur verse was tight So allow me to be the first one to tell ya, welcome to da rb,/ First lesson, neva seen ladders long enuff to bring you to the same level as me./ I know, you was at home bored thought you'd give this rap game a try,/ Tryin' to emulate B.I.G. and Pac, now you're the next mc to die./ bm Blazing ya Skill like a insaine man Prasing his Kill// Doubtfully thinking bout killin a self while ya Taking a Pill// I don't play i just bust out tha glocks and let em spray// Got ya in the line of fire what you going to do i suggest you pray// When I roll through ya town i'm coming in big bodies straped with heat// I'm ready to bust some heads so don't surprised if your tasting pavement an concret// Don't back down bitch or you'll see the evil side of me// Ya faker than a psycic with caller i.d// yo bm sorry but my vote goes to countree jay here cause his flow is better but ultimately no hate but u bited off of 8 mile....when proof battling eminem at the start says you faker than a psychic with caller ID....even if u didnt intend too...sorry man... |
no hate i wasn't even thinking about that when i put it down but thanks for acknowledging it
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v/ CJ.
Strait up slayin.. with a shit verse.. but a whole lot more personal an more original than 316.. ya 'mosquito/bite' line was incredibly gay tho.. but ya structured a battle verse at least.. 316.. tell me 'i bust out the glocks an let em spray' was a huge fuckin typo??!! cos who in the fuck says that in a text battle??!! no personals to note.. jus a load of played out unoffensive random threats. |
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This one was pretty easy.........
CounTREE Jay had an OK flow. just a line was stretched very long. I thought that would have made him lose until I saw what he was goin up against. He had a few good punches but nothin spectacular.....fav line.... I know, you was at home bored thought you'd give this rap game a try,/ Tryin' to emulate B.I.G. and Pac, now you're the next mc to die./ bm316 was horrific. His flow was all over the place and his feeble attempts at punchlines were either played to hell or just plain stupid. You need to work on your whole approach. Don't try to rush your verse, let it all come to you..... Don't back down bitch or you'll see the evil side of me// Ya faker than a psycic with caller i.d// ^^^ Original???????? Vote - CounTREE Jay |
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