Da Jokah Vs Lost Child
 

rules are: 10 lines min 30 line max
no d/r hate or crew votez
n biting or recycling
spit wen eva

wun1

chek in.......

check in drop your verse cuz.......................

man you a pussy scared to drop and shit but fuck i ain't no bitch im gone spit mines


See im pist so im about to murder this bitch
You beatin me is impossible like a deathrow hit

You betta quit, cause when I spit, niggas be loving my shit
Take yo chic, real quick, cause ho's be lovin my dick

I'm a soldier and I ain't rollin G-unit Homie
You a gangsta rockin pony, that just proves you fony

Like Dynamite my flow dangerous
Squad up boy you can't hang with us

Wanna bang with me, I'll take you to the streets
Where them GD'S and them BD'S a take you off yo feet

Put you ass to sleep, Know who won't Beef
My fist a have yo face mo fucked up than ODB

And even he was able to sign to ROC
Cuz like whats that(BITCH THATS THE SOUND OF THE GLOCK)

And once it cock, Bitch niggas like you a have to drop
Before you even start, niggas a ask you to stop

Better competition in a game of poker, retire like HOVA
Specially when I'm battlin bitches like this nigga DA JOKAH

ayo chek it dis nigga talk shit bout otha ppl and he from chi town//
iam from queenz nigga i dare u to say dat shit round my town//
and ya bull shit rhymes are makin me sleepy//
and this aint a horor film dawg get cha face outa herre cuz its to creepy//
and wen u ready ta drop some hard shit gimme da beat to jam on//
and dis nigga raps like a bitch in pink and he aint even like cam'ron//
see iam aight wit niggas thinkin day can rap but dis niggas extra//
k theres ya dad mom brotha or sista ,,who u wanna lie nexta//
nigga got him self a merk list..give him around of claps//
and dis nigga talk shit to much end up givin him a round of caps//
nigga personal messagin me askin if i was a blood//
u see da red dont chu..iam a blood..but one of queens biggests thugs//
iam da king of queens and iam not tha t.v show//
man cant get pussy end up goin to cali and gettin dem cheapy ho's//
ma mom said be a good boi and use ya manners//
iam commin fo u again afta tha last hit better put da shit in one ya daily planners//
and luike master P said iam bout it bout it...reppin da queenz//
ma slogan is " killa any beefin nigga by all meenz"//

wun! QUEENZ holla

uppinnnnnnnnn

i think jokah had the better punches but lostchild u had the better flow,shit i really hope hovas just fukin around again and dunt retire.probly not,anywayz da jokah u came harder this time,lostchild come wiv better flows and jokah,get ya flow goin.

ma vote:da jokah

thugzy you a bitch ass niggacuz you just hatin cause yo punk ass didnt get in squad up cuz

naw i dis agree because lost child had a way better flow although jkah had betta puches there was really hardly any flow but both of you were exceptional




my vote/ lost

naw i dis agree because lost child had a way better flow although jkah had betta puches there was really hardly any flow but both of you were exceptional



my vote/ lost hey vote for my battle against unknown assassain

lmao,u fukin dik,check ma crew homie,wot the fuck is squad up,i dont do know hatin,and im sure ma crew would piss on ur crew.lmao.shit,u show me one thread were ive tried out for u,u dumb fuck,i merked u in ma first battle on this site,u dumb shit.stop bitchin

aight uppin ^^^^^^^^^^

I just copy and paste what yo bitch as posted

yo,lostchild,i wanna get in this crew.i aint gna spit though.u seen wot i got in our battle.holla bk

Thugzy wrote this you don't believe me go to crew and callaborations get down or lay down tryouts and see for yo self

What know cuz

Aight Aight Aight Aight Aight Lc Had Dis// Betta Flowz And Nice Punchlines

Vote= Lc



O Hell Naw Nigga U Dissing Da Squad Up// Nigga Iam Sensing A Crew Battle// U Think U Can Merk Me And Lc// Right Ok Look Dis How Its Going Down// Iam Makin A Thread At "one Mic" Its Going To Be Called=squad Up Vs Yo Tell Me Who U Runn With Thugzy

Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. Crew vote removed - strobe

lol,oh yeah,soz,my bad,i must av been on crack or summat,so who else joined.lmao

Yo Thugzy Who U With Lil Nigga// Whats Yo Crew Name Think Dat// Dey Can Beat Da Squad Up!

lmao,we murderous methodz,and wot was wiv that crew vote

Aight Nigga Get Ready// U And One Of Yo Crew Members Yo Lc Meet Me At Da On Mic Homie//


We Makin Our Mark

ayo chek it dis nigga talk shit bout otha ppl and he from chi town//
iam from queenz nigga i dare u to say dat shit round my town//

^Weak Opener First Off!!! - - - Could Improve!!!! - - -

and ya bull shit rhymes are makin me sleepy//
and this aint a horor film dawg get cha face outa herre cuz its to creepy//

^Where's The Punch?? Playa!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 2/10

and luike master P said iam bout it bout it...reppin da queenz//
ma slogan is " killa any beefin nigga by all meenz"//

^Weak Closer Aswell - - - Evelate Kiid' .. Mad 'Master P' is Shiaaaaaaaaat' ... Holla!! lol


Aight Check

LostChild'sLines:

See im pist so im about to murder this bitch
You beatin me is impossible like a deathrow hit

^Alright Weak Opener' But Above' ..Da Joka'z..!!

You betta quit, cause when I spit, niggas be loving my shit
Take yo chic, real quick, cause ho's be lovin my dick

^Nice Use Of Multies' Aight Punch!!! 8/10

Better competition in a game of poker, retire like HOVA
Specially when I'm battlin bitches like this nigga DA JOKAH

^An Alright Closer' ...!!!

Dropping Decent Bars - - - With Decent Punches - - - OverAll' ..!! Nice Drop!!


Vote: LostChild

Yo Thugzy Who U Bringin Into Da Battle It Has To Be 4// Who U Bringin?

Me And Lc// U And Who Is It// Who U Bringin To Da Battle Man?

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ayo lost child had a crazy verse..your punches were ill..good wordplay strong multies nice structure and flow...u ripped this verse from opener to closer felt almost every bar..u came hard and had a couple good personals...strong verse..

lostchild: 7.5/10

da jokah u didnt really drop a hott verse your first couple bars were ill but then ya style fell off structure wasnt too good..u had a couple ill punches/personals...a little bit of wordplay/multies..overall i think u could have came harder than u did...nothing in your verse was really original or interesting but overall u had a OK verse...

da jokah: 6/10

vote: lostchild..i think u just came harder and took this battle with just the first half of your verse...overall u did better than da jokah and u have room for improvement but you ill...da jokah u should work on your wordplay and multies..it brings out the best in your verse..and also when the bars are the same length it brings more intensity and flow to your verse overall good stuff from both but lostchild took this

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hey my nigga LostChild bang the Jokah he had the punches and flow and structure he had everything i was loving his shit.
You betta quit, cause when I spit, niggas be loving my shit
Take yo chic, real quick, cause ho's be lovin my dick
that was funny.
i have to tell you jokah had some punches and for the flow he Did'nt have a flow he had some structure. What im trying to say it wasnt good enough to win my nigga LostChild.
So my vote is for LostChild

da jokah wins cause lost shild is a cheat so yea dotn even need to explain shti when i saw that had to give you the votes but if he was beatin you you need to elvate on vocab and personals alot get wordplay to help your punchs connect

aight here it is

no you came at it clean from the start good flow and creativity you kinda need to make you shit longer good style and punches nice flow

da good battle you shit was a lil hard to read and it became borin afta a while keep up wit ya shit ya need to work on ya shit some more but it was a good flow nice battle.....