Maku JaiiLiin vs. lilchiofthachi
 

alright here we go...

rules

8-20 lines max
no crew votes
no dick ride votes
no h8tr votes(That means CyberneticTiger can't vote on this, and neither can puertorican nelly)
no biting,
no recycling

check in, and then you decide who goes first...I'm willing to...

I agree wit ur rules. U can go first cause this is my first time battlin.

aight look

...I teach all to spit frees//
But you've took less niggas to school than boycotted buses in the sixties//

My whackest rhyme'll make you really seem dumb//
you only spit sick when you don't swallow ez e's cum//

Don't think i'm complex? you're added body count for me to claim//
Half the rappers in rapbattles still cannot pronounce my name//

(50 cent, line flip)

make everybody watch ya torture like it's passion of christ dog//
and then i let the tek, SING, look at that light show//

I'll pimp you and ya mama for dolllas, i'm set for the wealth//
then load a gun, a make you play russian roullette wit ya self//

Finally crewed up, Branch Status understands me//
Forever screamin at you haters that i am what you can't be//

yo rhymes wack like Lkwon Tipsy,u wanna talk about my mom well urs wit me/u gotta a girl well u had one,cause i took her and now she havin my son/im might be newbie but rhyme is killa,i dont stop like a spinna/cause im finna rip u up,and er'body kno im tha winna/u jus came up short like JD,u soft so Im guess im rappin against JE/wat u kno bout me,im ur girl P.I.M.P./Im tha prince of tha Chi, so i can seen dudes like u cry/Imma end it like this Maku,u boring so i aint got nuttin else 2 say 2 u

uppin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!

uppin for votes y'all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

someone vote on this battle its hot man,but voye for me

i mean vote for me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!uppin for votes

yo drop an honest vote on this and ill vote on yours

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119092

uppin for votes y'all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

come vote for me uppin four votes!!!!!!!!!!!

lilchio killed you, sorry maku, she had very good punches and flow was amazing. She had good words to spit and metephors. I really think maku needs to work a bit since i fell her lost this. Good battle though very close.

maku is a girl ?????????????????????

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121809
^^^^ drop an honest vote.



flow goes to Lilgofthachi.Maku...just look at ur 1st and 2nd line.Creativity7complexity goes to Maku.lilchoft......you seemed simple and didn't seem like you put much thought into ur lines.But punches goes to lilchoft.
punches/flow>creativity/complexity

vote-lilchofthacti(drop a vote in my battle)

u kno theres a 3-0 knockout rule so im bout 2 win

uppin for votes
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122222
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120932

none of the people on this site seem to be familiar with east coast stop and go flow structure. which makes me wonder how you guys are spittin anyway. this makes no sense. better than my verse? wow. i spit a whack verse that's obviously better than his.(btw lilchi is a guy dumbass. which means we got some obvious idiots voting here, no beef tho.)

Yo i think yall niggaz need to kno how ta vote better now

Lilchiofthachi.. HAD The worst structure i seen all month its like a lil baby was typein for him as for tha punchs and flow all of that i give y a 6.5/10

MaKu JaIilin... HaD good structure u could get some where punchs good FLow good structure every thing out of everthing give u a 8.5/10

BREAK DOWN

MaKu JaIilin

Flow 8/10
Rhymes 8/10
Structure 9/10
Punches 8/10
33/40

Lilchiofthachi

Flow 5/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 1/10
Punches 6/10
18/40

WEAk battle for lilchiofthachi nice battle for MaKu

o and MaKu COme tryout for Lyrical Legends u nice as hekk.. and are u a gurl?? or a BOY??

(checks ominously huge penis.) yep, i'm a guy. let's see whatps really good.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123748

Yo return da favor^^^^^^

But as i see it
MaKu JaIilin
Flow was hella good and ya had good structure

Lilchiofthachi

the only thing you had goin is you had some pretty good punches. ELEVATE

Maku-7/10
Lilchio-6/10

Maku--
You opened nice by "teachin' all to spit frees" I was wit u 4 the first 6 lines (u dropped 2 punches and a filler, but enuf to finish lil chi)...u lost me for 4 lines...and you had a decent close.

Lil Chi--it was your first battle, so elevate. you had some decent jabs, and your structre was nice...what u wus sayin' is just simple.

Both of yous---evrybody here in rapbattle have their own way to critique, and jus because u don't win a battle don't mean ur style isn't hot. jus elevate and make 4 damn sure there is no doubt the shit you spit is it.

Vote: Maku

thanks, finally someone who can vote and not hate on the person that lost, or hate period. That's how i vote, i never hate.

lolchiofthachi had his lines better flowed consistantly, so obviously it was a win because he kinda rymed better which murked you with a better verse that was slightly better than yours, his punches seemed to hit more thats what i thought, sorry man no hard feelings.

ps lil do ya wanna go out wid me.

...I teach all to spit frees//
But you've took less niggas to school than boycotted buses in the sixties//
decent opener - it had an o.k punchline I liked it
My whackest rhyme'll make you really seem dumb//
you only spit sick when you don't swallow ez e's cum//
egh not too great but decent
Don't think i'm complex? you're added body count for me to claim//
Half the rappers in rapbattles still cannot pronounce my name//
I liked this verse, good flow but it needed more wordplay
(50 cent, line flip)

make everybody watch ya torture like it's passion of christ dog//
and then i let the tek, SING, look at that light show//
This didn't really flow to well for me, but the first line has good wordplay +similie
I'll pimp you and ya mama for dolllas, i'm set for the wealth//
then load a gun, a make you play russian roullette wit ya self//
I liked this it was my fav bar, nice wordplay good structure throughout, nice flow
Finally crewed up, Branch Status understands me//
Forever screamin at you haters that i am what you can't be//
I like simple punchlines... All in all this was a good verse but I think you should just come harder with your punches in the future and keep your structure like that it looks like a cat thats been doin this for a while I like to see it good like that.

yo rhymes wack like Lkwon Tipsy,u wanna talk about my mom well urs wit me/u gotta a girl well u had one,cause i took her and now she havin my son/
This is an o.k bar but mom lines is played unless you have some special wordplay or somethin else in it to make it snap, I just didn't feel it that much.
im might be newbie but rhyme is killa,i dont stop like a spinna/cause im finna rip u up,and er'body kno im tha winna/
This was a weak line, no punchlines, the spinna line ws super weak but it had good flow
u jus came up short like JD,u soft so Im guess im rappin against JE/wat u kno bout me,im ur girl P.I.M.P./
the JE line was pretty good
Im tha prince of tha Chi, so i can seen dudes like u cry/Imma end it like this Maku,u boring so i aint got nuttin else 2 say 2 u-- This was a weak closer here... I think all in all this verse was kind of lacking, your punches were basic and not much wordplay- elevate bro. Vote- MakuJaiiLiin.. Please return the favor... http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...35&page=1&pp=15

yo maku had some sick punches he had this shit

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Damn maku verse was WACK but lil chiothacthi verse was WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACK with a H damn lil work on structure , wordplay & punches you need mad....... help yo`ure verses were just laim fillers MAKU ur verses was gay and played and never say PIMP Yo MOMMA for dollas Damn

Vote = MAKU