Deadly Vs MARVOLoUsJ1009 (votes Needed)
 

Ummm...

10 linez

due: Asap

Goodluck Kid. Suprise me.

Checkin In Sun..................

good luck on ur battle homey

when u finish hit me up i'll drop an honest vote aight

No doubt. This Marv kid needs to check in other wise this battle if not going anywere.

lmao

wow where da fukkin rules dunny??

well voter's if u dont explain ya shit its not gon count...quote lines or say who won by catagories...

lets get it goin

Rulez^^ and yea Lets get this shit poppin.

nigga im fukkin here.................................

Drop yo bars kid. Is this fool Imputent or wha!!

u da type da back down & freeze,keep talkin da black pound a squeeze-
u not tuff u a "happy" nigga datz scared of "beef" like da "mad cow disease"-

all u do is hate on my shyne,but wait till da dem strays start brakin ya spine-
dunn battlin u is like "puttin a watch on my hip" all u doin is "wastin my time"-
but da 8 or 9, a put ya "brain in da air" so u could "make up ya mind"-

u'z a lil bitch nigga u really aint worth da clipp tho-
he like da "fuck animals" y u think deadly vision is on top of a "purple hippo"-

dont believe a bar dat come off dis homo's breath,he dont hold no tecs-
he couldn't get signed if "jermaine dupri" was really "so-so-deaf"-[def]

u fukkin garbage and im da sickest herb respect it-

deadlyvision:yo marv if i dont have "sex" and "rap" will i get signed da "virgin records"

^^^^lol

^^^^^????ummm who da fukk is u talkin 2....dont wait 4 nme da post my shit so u could feed off it just drop nigga

Queens??You Remind Me Of The Sound When Pimps Slap Hoes, Whack/
Cause This Bitch Couldn't Spit Ill If He Was Eminem Black/
You ryde Dick, You Just Love To Kiss Glass Cause Like Jordan Your Raps Aren't In Tact/
Sickest?? Another Fag Ama verbally rape ya Betta Believe thats a FAct/
I Hope This Pussy Dont Come ''Weak''(Week) I Didn't Know The ''Date'', Your weak Verse Is Like The French Rovultion And Your IN the Third-Estate/
I Spit Like Vajita And Gohan When They Conjuctuate, And You Still a Pussy Like A Sycic Cause Your ''Already Know Your Fate''/

--Switch--

I'm speakin' the truth, this cross dresser's in need of rebuke,C'mon Most of ya shirts don't have a back...and soon neither will you/
I bet you're a virgin too, for sex ya pray & cry for it often
Today's a lucky day, you'll get laid...inside of a coffin/
You a Royal?? In regards ta that, you're a buddin' new star
Just like Mekhi Pfifer...cuz you'll be a thug in ER/
I'll beat you within an 'inch' of ya life, where ya couldn't be saved,So many weaknesses in times I'll leave you with a foot in the grave/

Ciao Weak herb.

ohhhh snaps this battle was dope....k where do i start....marv ur flow was good could of been better punchlines were aight wordplay was cool to u could of elevated and ur punches could of hit a lil harder overall very good best line u'z a lil bitch nigga u really aint worth da clipp tho-
he like da "fuck animals" y u think deadly vision is on top of a "purple hippo"-
deadly u was good too i liked ur flow it made me lmaoit was good although ur punches could of hit harder to but i liked ur style cool
best line I'll beat you within an 'inch' of ya life, where ya couldn't be saved,So many weaknesses in times I'll leave you with a foot in the grave/

very close battle but imma have to give the edge to deadly u was tight

lmaooooo ummm dammm dos some long ass lines....upppin 4 votes tho and by da way i somthin in my sig dat said "da sickest on da site lines r played da fukk out" maybe i should put it back in

Stop Swayin Hoe.

UppuN...........

ummmmm yo ecko y every post u in dis nigga deadly is in?????

What are u saying?...U cant handle the fact u loosin?


weak herb


uppun

yo this battle was pretty good..
Heres my break down

Both had some good flow... I thot marv edged that out..

I liked this line from Marv

all u do is hate on my shyne,but wait till da dem strays start brakin ya spine-
dunn battlin u is like "puttin a watch on my hip" all u doin is "wastin my time"-
but da 8 or 9, a put ya "brain in da air" so u could "make up ya mind"-

I liked this line from Deadly

I'll beat you within an 'inch' of ya life, where ya couldn't be saved,So many weaknesses in times I'll leave you with a foot in the grave/

Overall i liked Marvs stuff more then Deadly's...

It was a good battle tho

VOTE - Marv

Was that even a punch.

UppUN

u da type da back down & freeze,keep talkin da black pound a squeeze-
u not tuff u a "happy" nigga datz scared of "beef" like da "mad cow disease"-
^Nice Opener' .. 9/10

all u do is hate on my shyne,but wait till da dem strays start brakin ya spine-
dunn battlin u is like "puttin a watch on my hip" all u doin is "wastin my time"-
but da 8 or 9, a put ya "brain in da air" so u could "make up ya mind"-
^This Shit Fucked Up Your Flow' ... Rhymein 3lines' .. Threw Your Verse Off Balnce But Nice Punchlines 6/10

dont believe a bar dat come off dis homo's breath,he dont hold no tecs-
he couldn't get signed if "jermaine dupri" was really "so-so-deaf"-[def]
^Alright Closer 7/10

Checckity Checck Visions' Lines:

Queens??You Remind Me Of The Sound When Pimps Slap Hoes, Whack/
Cause This Bitch Couldn't Spit Ill If He Was Eminem Black/
You ryde Dick, You Just Love To Kiss Glass Cause Like Jordan Your Raps Aren't In Tact/
Sickest?? Another Fag Ama verbally rape ya Betta Believe thats a FAct/
^Lol Nice Opener' ...... 9/10

I Hope This Pussy Dont Come ''Weak''(Week) I Didn't Know The ''Date'', Your weak Verse Is Like The French Rovultion And Your IN the Third-Estate/
I Spit Like Vajita And Gohan When They Conjuctuate, And You Still a Pussy Like A Sycic Cause Your ''Already Know Your Fate''/
^Nice PunchLines' ....!! 8/10

I'll beat you within an 'inch' of ya life, where ya couldn't be saved,So many weaknesses in times I'll leave you with a foot in the grave/
^Alright Closer' ... 7/10 !!!

Dropping Decent Bars' ...!!! & Alright Wordplay!!

Vote: Visions!! By A Bit

deadly took it with punches and flow.....marv had nice structure
this was a close battle but deadly took it wit punches and flow
nice battle

vote: deadlyvisions

OH BOY......OH BOY......OH BOY
THIS WAS SOME TIGHT SHIT, I THOUGHT MARV KILLED THIS NIGGA PERIOD WHEN I WAS READIN DEADLYZ FIRST PART, BUT IN THE SWITCH WE WITNESSED A NEW MAN FERREAL
THIS BATTLE WAS TIGHT AS SHIT WIT LINES LIKE:
dunn battlin u is like "puttin a watch on my hip" all u doin is "wastin my time"-
(FROM MARV 8/10)
AND MY FAV DEADLY LINE:
Just like Mekhi Pfifer...cuz you'll be a thug in ER/
(10/10 SHITS FIYAH TO ME)
SO.......
VOTE:DEADLY

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

ALMOST FORGOT... RETURN THE FAVOR....................................

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120945

iight here how it goes down for me:

i say Deadly because he had better punches and personals....das what most battles are made of and Deadly did better than Marvo...

Vote/ Deadly

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

UppUn. This should be closed long time ago.

And damn Vote the right way. plzzz

Uppppppppppin This Shit For My Boi' DeadlyVision' ....

C'Mon Ya'll Drop Some Votes On This Shit' .....

lol^^^^wow everybody dat voted 4 dis nigga is his friend lmaooooo

this was a nice ass battle
both had nice ass metas and punches......but visions came harder
especially wit the mekhi pfifer shit that was fire that shit was tough
deadly also had nice flow to his shit to..........both was fire but
vote:deadly

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121242
CAN YALL RETURN THE FAVOR

DO they have anythang to do wit this battle and how am merkin ya. hahaha i guess not.

LMAOOO umm dogg half ya fukkin words barley ryhme whut r u talkin about everybody dat voted 4 u is ya dogg...u wanna audio battle

Kid accept this loss. Stop Whining. U even went to Strobe for help...hahaha


And audio battle. We shall do. Ama get a new mic. So be Patient. Than u would say "His friends voted for em in audio 2"..lol I wouldnt be suprised.

ummmm aint no way u fittin dem long ass lines on no beat plus ur creative level is 0 4real i hope u dont battle off da net like dat

1st of all do u even do audio.

2nd Creativeness? A battle will be judged on your punches and personals. Mostly. i guess u dont even kno what is a battle.

I'ma give this one to Deadlyvision cause Marv your punches were hard to decypher.
The bottom line is punches and I'm sure if I could understand them they might not be half bad, but man I shouldn't have to study to understand ya verse kid.

Deadlyvision, if you hadn't of switched the style up, I probably would have given it to him, cause that first bit wasn't really work'n for ya. I'd say the same thingy, ya punches was hard to decypher, but stick with that new style cause ya defintly rip shit up with it.

Vote on this shit;
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120963

Uno vote is Over. This Herbecide got merked.

u da type da back down & freeze,keep talkin da black pound a squeeze-
u not tuff u a "happy" nigga datz scared of "beef" like da "mad cow disease"-
not crazy original, but decent
all u do is hate on my shyne,but wait till da dem strays start brakin ya spine-
dunn battlin u is like "puttin a watch on my hip" all u doin is "wastin my time"-
but da 8 or 9, a put ya "brain in da air" so u could "make up ya mind"-
not a fan of 3 line bars, i tried it once and it didnt work. i like the wasting time wordplay, but its kinda wasted in between two useless lines.
u'z a lil bitch nigga u really aint worth da clipp tho-
he like da "fuck animals" y u think deadly vision is on top of a "purple hippo"-
.. not too creative.. ok personal i suppose
dont believe a bar dat come off dis homo's breath,he dont hold no tecs-
he couldn't get signed if "jermaine dupri" was really "so-so-deaf"-[def]
the rhyme is a bit weak.. the line is ok.
u fukkin garbage and im da sickest herb respect it-
deadlyvision:yo marv if i dont have "sex" and "rap" will i get signed da "virgin records"
kinda funny.. not a great punch though


Queens??You Remind Me Of The Sound When Pimps Slap Hoes, Whack/
Cause This Bitch Couldn't Spit Ill If He Was Eminem Black/
meh... seems like a forced rhyme, not feeling this opener
You ryde Dick, You Just Love To Kiss Glass Cause Like Jordan Your Raps Aren't In Tact/
Sickest?? Another Fag Ama verbally rape ya Betta Believe thats a FAct/
blah...
I Hope This Pussy Dont Come ''Weak''(Week) I Didn't Know The ''Date'', Your weak Verse Is Like The French Rovultion And Your IN the Third-Estate/
ok this line is long enough to be a bar, so no multi. the punch is original, but not that hard hitting.
I Spit Like Vajita And Gohan When They Conjuctuate, And You Still a Pussy Like A Sycic Cause Your ''Already Know Your Fate''/
bah... a dbz line.. you're lucky i know who they are..

--Switch--

I'm speakin' the truth, this cross dresser's in need of rebuke,C'mon Most of ya shirts don't have a back...and soon neither will you/
why did you switch here, and not two lines ago? this a nice punch though.
I bet you're a virgin too, for sex ya pray & cry for it often
Today's a lucky day, you'll get laid...inside of a coffin/
nice, nice.
You a Royal?? In regards ta that, you're a buddin' new star
Just like Mekhi Pfifer...cuz you'll be a thug in ER/
nice, nice
I'll beat you within an 'inch' of ya life, where ya couldn't be saved,So many weaknesses in times I'll leave you with a foot in the grave/
not as nice, but keeping the momentum

ok, basically, marv had a more consistent verse, but nothing was standout. deadly everything before the --switch-- was really just substandard, was barely feeling it. however, after that you really turned up the heat and came hard hitting. don't do the first style ever again. tight battle.. very tight.. but i give it to deadly for ending with momentum, whereas marv's verse got weaker towards the end i think.